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Posted: 13 years ago
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The rainy sesaon had come in. GoHem were returning from a party, as the venue was in the outskirts of the city and due to heavy rains they were getting delayed to reach home and suddenly their car has a breakdown, the area was very deserted palce, so ahem tells gopi to come out of the car, as he could some light coming from within the woods and locks the car. He puts over his blazer on gopi's shoulder, as her netted pink saree had become wet and almost transparent and sticking to her body. GoHem walk towards the place from where the light was coming and were glad to see an empty cottage and they decide to spend the night in that cozy cottage.

Ahem says to gopi gopiii, you do one thing, see if you can find some clothes suitable for us in the cottage, till then il collect these wooden logs and make a bon fire for us gopi just nods a yes and leaves to search for some clothes, here has collected the logs and has burnt the bon fire and was waiting for gopi's return. It had been a long time, since had gone for searching the clothes and turns around on hearing the clining the sound of her bangles and is lost seeing her. She had taken off the blazer coat, was trying to dry the pallu of her saree, with her hair resting on one of the shoulder which was driiping off the water. After struggling with the attempt of drying herself, she comes to the place where ahem had made the bon fire for them and sits opposite facing him directly. There was silence between them, but their eyes kept doing all the talking. Gopi kept rubbing her palms and arms to keep herself warm, because now she had started to feel cold. Suddenly, ahem gets up from his place and walks up to gopi and stands behind her, and sits hugging her from behind and asks so mrs. gopi ahem modi are you feeling cold now?? and tightens his hug around her, she says nothing and only blushes, they sit like that for awhile.

Ahem slightly kisses on her shoulder, and then moves up to her neck, by tilting her head slighty to the opposite direction, she gives him an easy access and he happily kisses her on the side of her neck. With this act, gopi looks at him sideways and he kisses her cheek and nibbles near her ear and bits it slightly, she feels shy and breaking the hug goes to the window in the cottage and opens it, as the wind is blowing outside, few raindrops start falling on her face and she enjoys them, by closing her eyes. Ahem smiling to himself walks upto gopi near the window and on recahing near her, he slids her hair on to her left shoulder, and caresses her back with his back fingers and she shievers a little to his warm touch. He bends down and sucks the raindrop on her right shoulder, leaving a kiss on the said shoulder and resta his chin the shoulder and caressing both her hands hugs her from behind taking her hands in his. He breaks the hug and holding gopi's hand makes turn to face him, they ahve an eye-lock and he curls her hairstrnd behind her ear which were flying due to the winds blowing outside, but gopi breaks the trance by looking down, with a shy smile playing on her lips and blush on her cheeks. Ahem leans forward nad sucks the raindrop on her forehead, leaving a kiss there, then he moves to both her eyes, then both her cheeks and the the chin. He cups face in his hand, and when was about to kiss her on the lips, she smiles at him and pushes him away and escapes out of the cottage and follows her saying gopi!! waitt... he keeps chasing her and she keeps dodging him, finally ahem gets hold off her pallu and pulls her towards him, till she has reached near him, but suddenly gopi slips and ahem, who tried helping from not falling, also falls down along with her. She below him and he is over her, there is absolute no chance for gopi to escape, they keep looking in each other's eyes. Ahem caressing her right hand, moves down pinning her fingers in his and leans forward and kisses her forehead, her eyes, her cheeks and gently kisses her on her lips, they break the kiss soon and keep looking into each other's eye, later he rests his head on her chest and they remain in the same positon, enjoying each other's warmness and rain too with closed eyes.

Ahem gets up and helps gopi in getting up to and when gopi was to leave, he cought of her pallu and stops her going, she slowly and shy turms with a questioning look on her face, he smile and says
may i have the pleasure of dancing with you??. Gopi is ammussed and says ahemjiii, me and dance... no.. i dont know how to dance, il teach you saying this he extends his hand forward and gopi gives her hand into his. He pulls her closer to him and places one hand on her waist and holds the other in his and says just look into my eyes, maintining the eye-lock they keep moving their bodies to the rhytm of the noise made by the rains, the noise was equivalent to a romantic lounge music, and she matches up to the dance stpes and is also enjoying it, but their eyes spoke of the passion, desire and love they had for each other. Ahem finally twrils her and without wasting a second he lifts her upp and starts walking towards the cottage again.

Once, they have reached in the cottage, ahem requests gopi to close and lock the door as she was still in his arms, gopi shyly says
ahemjiii.. please.. put me down... i will be putting you down.. dont worry.. but he continues to acrry her in his arms, but she says nothing, he finally reaches the place where the bon fire was burning and settles gopi on the floor comfortably and he himself is half lied on the floor and halff on her body and they maintain the eye-lock, as he could no longer hold back his passion, he kissed on her lips while his hand kept caressing her hand and pinned her finger within his. With the winds blowing outside, the rains playing a romantic lounge music, the bon fire inside the cottage Go Hem made love and when their fire of love, passion and desire for each other was satisfied, they slept hugging each toher really tight, with beautiful smile playing on their lips.





Thought of giving you guys a change from yesterday's telecast.
Hope, i have done justice to it.
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Thanks for reaaing, commenting and ofcourse liking
Sorry for no much dialouges, i thought of let their actions do the talking 😉
Edited by dhruti - 13 years ago

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thala thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
wow enjoyed the romantic os
right now we have to depend on such os for our living
iam dying of the current track
thank you so much dhruthi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: gohemmania

wow enjoyed the romantic os

right now we have to depend on such os for our living
iam dying of the current track
thank you so much dhruthi

thanksss and welcome😊
i know yaarrr... the current track is just too pathetic
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely OS Dhruti 😊!!! full of romance & passion 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank God this os is different I
Went past this 3 tyms cos I
Didn't want to open it and
Find an os abt ahem carrying
Anita into mm. I know its silly
But I can't help how hurt I get
Just at the thought of it , I am
Too attached to gopi and gohem
To be sensible. Anyway loved the
Os it so sweet and romantic , how
I yearn to see similiar scenes onscreen
Very well written druthi , thank you for
Relief from this tension.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice os we havent seen any goham moments in last few days
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS, well written ...

i have seen exactly same OS in realily in another serial lol, so in SNS its very unlikely, 😭

but wonderful OS.. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Thank you Dhruti...we need this change...I don't like the current track on SNS ...how much more must Gopi suffer...😡
A very well written OS...someday I hope to see another romantic scene between Gohem.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vinder90

nice OS, well written ...

i have seen exactly same OS in realily in another serial lol, so in SNS its very unlikely, 😭

but wonderful OS.. .

wat yu saying!!! which show????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thankz dear 👏 yum yum very satisfying especially with this week disturbing episodes 🤢.thank you for taking me way into a dream world 😍😍
Edited by tamzin43 - 13 years ago

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