VirMan OS: Ram Milayi Jodi (Part 2 Uptd Pg.2)

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Avantika

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys, here's my OS on my favourite TV couple, VirMan.. Its based on today's precap, where Maanvi catches Virat puncturing his car tyre.. Its my take on the future track.. Please read through and let me know if your guys like it.. There you go..

~Ram Milayi Jodi~

Part 1:

She was having a sip of water before lying down and dozing off to sleep after what seemed like a tiring day.. She thought of opening the window to let in some fresh air.. And what she saw made her spit it out instantly, 'Arrey, ye Virat kar kya raha hai?Iska dimaag toh thikaane hai na.. Khud apni hi gaadi ke tyre hi hawa kyun nikaal raha hai? Main keh rahi hoon Bhagwanji, aapne na galti kar di iske manufacturing mein, iska toh janam se hi screw lapata hai.. Huh, lekin yeh paaglon ki tarah muskura kyun raha hai?? Oh oh oh!! Tum yahaan kyun ruk raho ho Virat yeh main bohot achhi tarah se samjhti hoon haan.. Lekin jo pandrah minute tum mujhse maang rahe ho na boss, pandrahsau chakkar nahi katva diye na uske liye, toh mera naam bhi Maanvi nahi! Huh..'

And as expected, the doorbell rang within 5 seconds. Dabbu ran to the door to open it, "Arre Virat Bhaiya, aap?? Kya hua, Guest house mein taala laga hai kya? Mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha, yeh Verma uncle ke bte na kisi kaam ke nahi hai!", he said flaring his nostrils. Virat glanced through the verandah and couldn't find his Bandariya. "Dabbu beta, Beeji aur Chachaji so gaye kya? Aur aapki Maanvi di kahaan hai?." However he was relieved to see Chachaji, Beeji and Pinky Chachi walking towards him with concern clearly etched on their foreheads.. "Virat bte, kya hua, tum wapas kaise chale aaye? Koi dikkat hai kya?" 'Chal beta Virat, shuru kar apni nautanki'' "Arre nahi Beeji, who darasal meri gaadi ka tyre puncture ho gaya hai, aura b itni raat ko toh koi rikshawala bhi nazar nahi aa raha hai..". "Arre beta, tum aisa kyun nahi karte, aaj raat ke liye yahin ruk jao.. waise bhi ab raat bohot ho chuki hai aur bahar thand bhi bohot pad rahi hai.. Tum andar aa jao, warna thand lag jaayegi.. Pinky, Virat ke rehne ka intazaam karva do.. Beta, tum aaram se rehna aur agar kisi cheez ki jarurat pade na toh hume bata dena.. Apna hi ghar samajho,".. Saying this, Beeji and Chachaji were just about to turn and make their way into the house.. When they heard Maanvi screaming,"Nahi nahi Beeji.. yeh yahaan kaise ruk sakta hai.. iske client ne iske rehne ka intezaam guesthouse mein kar rakha hai na, who bechareintezaar kar rahe honge.. Virat koi toh jald se jald wahaan pohonch jaana chahiye.. warna who bura man jayenge aur phir agar unhone Dadaji se shikayat kardi toh.. Woh to bade naraaz honge phir..Kyun Virat?", saying so she raised her eyebrow and looked at him.. He was actually at a loss of words.. 'Ab kya karun yeh Bandariya toh mujhe yahaan se bhagane par tuli hai.. Bhagwan bacha lo'.. Mustering some courage, he said, "Haan lekin Maanvi, tumhe shayad pata nahi hai ki meri gaadi ka tyre puncture hua hai,main guesthouse tak paidal toh jaa nahi sakta na, who bhi itni raat ko.. anjaan sheher hai..", 'and there you go Partner!' But she is also Maanvi, 'waah Chep itni asaani se haar maanne wali nahi hoon main'.. "Haan toh tumhe kaunsa koi utha ke leke jayega.. Size dekha hai apna, mushtande lagte ho.. Aur waise bhi yeh Hrishikesh hai, tumhara Chandigarh nahi.. jahaan chor-daku ghoomte ho.. Aur haan kya keh rahe the tum, tumhara tyre puncture hai, mera matlab hai ki tumhari gaadi ka tyre puncture hai.. Koi baat nahi abhi theek kar deti hoon.. Waise tumhari gaadi mein ek extra tyre toh hamesha rehta hai, kyun? Chal Dabbe, iska tyre fit karte hai..", saying she winked at him and went outside the house past him.. 'Beta Chep, agar tum sher ho toh main bhi sava sher hoon.. Itni asaani se haar nahi manungi..' All he could do was roll his eyes with frustration and he kept glaring at her with a murderous look..She on the other hand was enjoying every bit of it.. 'Ab pata chalega tumhe Chep ki tumne Maanvi Chaudhry se panga liya hai..' Lo ho gaya tumhara tyre fit.. Ab tum araam se guesthouse jaa sakte ho.. Waise raasta toh pata hai na, ya phir likh ke doon??," 'Well well, apni haar maan le Virat, iss pagal Bandariya ne toh teri band baja ke rakh di.. chalo ab raasta napo, warna Beeji ko shak ho jaayega..' "Haan haan Maanvi, thank you soo much..tumne meri kitni badi mushkil hal kar di.. tumhe toh iske liye award milna chahiye, kyu Beeji.. ,", he said glaring at her while she gave him one of her victorious smiles.. Turning to Beeji, he said, "Achha Beeji ab main niklalta hoon.. woh darasal mere paas koi hathiyaar nahi tha na tyre fit karne ke liye.. Lekin ab Maanvi aur Dabbu ne meri itni madad jo kar di hai.. Mujhe ab nikalna chahiye.." 'Waise bhi iss Bandariya ne toh mere plan ka satyanaash kar diya!..' He turned around to go, Maanvi walked up to him and said, "Haaye shakal toh dekho bechare ki, aisa lag raha hai ki kisine tumhare saare plans par barf ka paani daal diya ho.. Chalo koi baat nahi, better luck next time Partner.. Ummeed hai, tumhe aaj raat acchi neend aayegi.. Guesthouse ke macchharon ki toh aaj aish hai..". She waved to him as he drove out of the gates.. 'Huh Chep, tumhe kya laga, itni asaani se main tumhare haath aa jaungi, na na beta, bohot badi galatfami paalte ho tum..' She saw Dabbu staring at her, " Maanvi di, yeh aap kya baat kar rahi ho apne aap se.. Mujhe lagta hai, humein na aapko ek baar dimaag k e doctor ke paas bhi le jaana chahiye, check up ke liye..". "Oye Dabbe, dimaag toh tera abhi thikaane lagati hoon main", and she ran back into the house with her jooti in her hand..

Here Virat was lying on the bed with mosquitoes hovering over him.. 'Arre yaar, yeh Hrishikesh ke maccharon ko ab mujhse kya pareshaani hai.. Kameene khoon ke pyaase hai mere.. Aise kaat rahe hai jaise main koi chashni mein doobi hui jalebi hoon.. JALEBI.. JALEBI' YESSS' JALEBI..' and he gave a victorious smile.. He picked up his phone and dialed a number.. "Hello Dabbu bte, aaj tumne apni Di ko bina diye saari jalebiyaan kha li na.. Tumhe pata hai na kal subah who bhookhi sherni tumhara kya haal karegi", he said while smirking..Poor Dabbu, here he was having a stomachache because of overeating Jalebis and now he was damn scared, "Virat Bhaiya! Please meri madad karo.. Warna Kal subah, Maanvi Di mujhe garma garam tel ki kadhai mein dubo dengi..", he said with a whisper which was partly because of pain and partly coz he was scared of being fried alive.. "Arre Dabbu, do not fear when Virat is here.. main abhi aa raha hoon.. Bass mera intezaar karo.. Aur kisi ko bhi khabar mat lagne dena.. thik hai.. See you buddy!!", he jumped out of bed, grabbed his car keys and ran out of the mosquitoes' den.. 'Ab bachke kahaan jaogi meri Chaudhrayin!!!'

Hope you guys liked it.. There will be a couple of more parts to my OS.. Those of you who would like to be PMed, please send me a buddy request and I shall PM you when I update next.. Please press the LIKE button and leave your valuable feedback.. Take care and Keep falling in love!!

Part 1: Pg. 1
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2937492

Part 2: Pg. 2
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2937492&TPN=2

NOTE: I do not own the characters.. My stories are my fantasies and are based on ideas derived from the show.. My works are only meant for members of IndiaForums and are not to be copied to other sites..

Link to my other work:

Virman FF: Ek Duje Ke Vaaste
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/55949622�

Arhi SS: Teri Khair Pe Vaar Diya

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Edited by mohabbatgirl - 13 years ago