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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever
It was a small update but a superb one.
U ve written it so well although u had a headache. U have brillantly described their first emotions when they met after so long. I could feel the tension between them.
Thanks for the update. Do enjoy yourself for the wedding. And a take a long rest after that (But not that long hahahaha)
Till then will wait for ur next update. I am so excited to know what will happen.
Take care

thanks a bunch dear! 😃 really appreciate it!

and dont worry i wont be gone for tooo long 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: yogini64
Besides having so busy schedule & killing headache,,, u managed to update 😲 . . . . . . & that too a lovely,, happy,, romantic & touchy update . . . . . Seriously hats off to u gal 😃
thanx for this scene-- amar can't stay away from her... No matter how much he suffered from so many months... But his love for her was still alive & got intensified seeing her in front of him... He could'nt control himself & poured his love on her with those small loving gestures . . . . . 😊
she too was craving for that love,,, the touch & love she missed from ages . . . . 😍 . . . . . . But she came back to her senses & might have realised that she would'nt go back to him as she thinks that he deserved better than her . . . Grrr 😡

thanks a bunch yogini! since i promised an update i had to do it no matter what! see that''s how much i love you guys!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lovely7010
Awesome update...though its short its amazing!!! finally arsha met...enjoy the wedding n den update

thanks so much 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: tish18
are you kidding me???... if dis was ur stressed update den i dont know what you would have written wen u would be realxed... believe me girl, it was simply mind blowing!!!
i was in a trance... when amar traced his fingers along her delicate skin all i wanted to scream was, "Kiss her!! kiss her now!!!"
but good you dint ;)... i like this chasing game better... its so much more fun...full of anticipations. :D

i dont know why but i always get to read ur update from my cell... and its really frustraing cz i want to go home and give u a colourfull comment but i cant get to stop my fingers to hit the post reply button as soon as i'v finished reading it. : -/

thank you so much for updating as promised.
hope u feel better soon... take care.

love you babe :* :* :*

thanks a bunch tish! i was actually surprised that it wasnt as crappy as i thought it wud be considering that i kept dozing off over my keyboard!

next time i'll update at a different time from when i usually do so maybe u get the pm when ur on ur comp instead of ur cell! it doesnt matter tho cuz ur comments are sweet as it is and i love that!

Love you!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh
too short but finally they met ...
enjoy marriage dear ...
have fun ...
after when u relaxed then👏 update bara wala update ...
thanks for pm ...

thanks so much!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: kriyansh24
i wudn't say it was a crappy update...

i mean jo huya uske baad crappy bolna its like insulting it...

i mean if u wud have said that pehle wala update was a crappy 😳i wud have agreed 40% becoz though woh imporatant tha par chhota tha...

it was awesome update especially since they meet again...

par y the hell shakti had to run away... that is so not fair.. i mean acche se hi! hello! toh kar lena chahiye.

its for the betterment of all..

well waiting for the next part lekin plz make the next part longer har baar teri genuine prob rehti hai chilla bhi nhi paate. so not fair

okay now enjoy the wedding. get some sleep varna pata chala koi imp. rasam ke samay so gayi and then pura fun spoil ho gaya tera... (plus jute wali rasam ke liye u need energy too😆)

go and have some of ur beauty sleep.. i wud suggest have a hearty meal and take some medicine if u want then sleep. khaane ke baad sabsse acche se neend aati hai. warn every1 before they come to wake u up. better still lock urself somewhere and sleep duniya se dur😆

thanks a bunch!

even tho u didnt like the previous chapter, it was necessary for the story to proceed. even tho this is about arsha they still have other people in their lives, such as frends and family, thaat are just as important to them as they are to each other, and i wanted to portray that as well.

And as for shaks running away, well it makes sense since thats just how she is. the way she thinks is what made her react that way,

thanks for the advice. i'll definitly get my sleep!