swaron os- sharon realises her love

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Hey guys this is my first os. hope you like it...
its 8:20 first class starts in 10 minutes... keeping my things in my locker i head towards my class.first thing i do is look for the only person who knows me more than myself, one whom i hate, one whom i unintentionally care for,whom i have hurt many times. Everyday i fell happy to see his face but dnt want him to know. I am sharon raiprakash... my ego dn't allow me to confess that swayam matters to me , a weekling matters to me...
Today as a enter and try to figure him out i see him sitting and chatting with another girl.He seemed quite happy. For the first time since the day i broke his heart i have seen him smilling that too with a newbie. I fell jealous. he didn't boter to notice me. he didn't bother to notice anyone's presence. composing myself went in to take seat behind him so that i can hear their conversation.. as i was heading nil,bharat enterd they went straigt to the place near swayam. by now most of the class had arrived. boys were drooling over that girl. but,most shocking was neither swayam nor that girl bothered about the others they were in their own world...
class began but both of them didn't even bother about their lecture. they were busy with their silent talk. i hated it. i didn't even think that swayam would do this to me. he has to answer me for cheating me... but why should he. i broke his heart made it clear that we could never be one then why is it bothering me when he is trying to move on? whan he is with another girl...this was what i was thinking through out the class.
as soon as the class got over immediately both of them moved out of the class. they didn't even stop when others called onto them.. they were out of this world... this was the limit, how could swayam avoid his friends for a girl? they were gone. they were not in the canteen or in locker room they were nowhere...
Swayam nor the girl turned up for the next two classes. Every one was gossiping that they seemed to date eachother.. how can swayam date a girl whom he has met for the first time... he is mad...
We all were in the canteen during our lunch when both of them came. they came to our table. they were holding hands...
rey-dude tu kahan gaya tha.. hamne bulaya par tu ne suni hi nahin. aur ye kaun he??
nil- haan yaar bata na ya hot ladki kaun hai??
swayam- guys ye priyanka hai..and pri ye mere frends hain...
pri- oh hai nice meeting u all. heard a lot about you..
bha-ek hi din mein?/
pri- oh no guys mein aur swayam childhood friens hain or u can say childhood sweethearts...
Every one was shocked to hear this kind of a statement.. meanwhile swayam was all smilling.. this increased my anger i felt like killing that girl...
I left college early. i felt sick at heart.now i realised i am jealous...i love him..i love thgat bloody weekling...now i regret.. regret of loosing him... regret of denying his love... iwant him back i will do anything to get him back into my life... He cant be with anyone else...
guys this is my first attempt to write something...all the coments are wellcome plz do coment and tell me how is it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guess the first one to comment... Nice os... Just needs a lil bit if finishing for the end... Looks kinda incomplete... Anyways nice try... I enjoyed reading it... Btw wats ur name...???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice attamp & wtz ur name??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i m divya thanks for ur coments.. tyr to improve nxt tym
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS.
the concept was interesting.
Continue writting.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hei, really nice OS for your first attempt...I always love Jealous Sharon and can't wait for the day she actually realises her love for Swayam !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Really nice Os
Good Going 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one...continueee...i wanted to make something exactly like thi...plzz do PM vth the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey ur fisrt attempt ws really gud!!!i love jealousy sharon!!!!
keep writing more!!!ul improve!!!i vl b more happie if u cn gv us a 2nd part of dis OS!!!so dat u cn also gv a proper ending 2 it!!!well its jus my thought!!!its okaiee if u wanna leave dis here nd write another one!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 update soon and don 't forget to PM... :)

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