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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here is the next update... Hope you like it...

Part 8

Maan and Geet were very much excited about the whole trip. They both have done their packing together. On the day of trip, Raj, Jaya and Kavita went along with Maan and Geet to drop them to school. Parents bid good bye to their kids and kept giving advices to them' finally the bus started.

On the way to Manali'

Maan and Geet seated together chatting.. all the students played antakshri and other games , danced , sung'. In short, full on masti'!!!!!!! At night, our maaneet were cuddled to each other securing each other.. next morning they reach Manali. The organizers have arranged tents for girls, boys and teachers separately at campsides along the riverbank'

They settled in tents, freshen up and had their breakfast.. now they were all ready for visiting Rohtang' (Rohtang is aplace situated at higher altitude and fully covered with snow')

All kids were taken to Rohtang. Maan and Geet started their snoe-ball fight which was never ending. They ate hot Maggi in ice-cold weather'they also made snow-man from snow. Now its lunch time and all were hell tired and hungry too..they returned campside'

Geet was shivering and sneezing due to cold..

Maan- Geetu, I told u not to play too much in snow. Now see, kya haal bana rakha hai aapna??


Geet ' oye, to tum bhi to sneez kar rahe ho.. khud khel rahe the aur muje rok rahe the.. muje kuch nahi hua' main bilkul thik hoon' haaa'cheee'(sneezes again)


Maan ' dekho to sahi' poora face red ho gaya hai aur yeh(poking her nose) tumhara nose, cherry ko repace kar sakta hai'


Geet 'waking him- not funny haan..

Teacher called them for lunch and they continued their argument during unch also.. they rested for an hour and again ready to visit HADIMBA TEMPE.

(HADIMBA TEMPLE is a very ancient one and people over there believes that every wish is fulfilled here)

All visited the temple. It was totally made of wooden slabs and surrounded with oak trees. Hadimba devi is very much inside the tempe like in a small den' all prayed to goddess and noe they were in garden area of the temple'


Maan- geetu, tune kya wish kiya???


Geet- maine na..(was about to say bt stopped) main kyun bolu?? Wise bhi wish puri ho uss ke baad hi kisiko batate hain nahi to wo puri nahi hoti esa mumma ne kaha tha'


Maan- muje to bata na' plz tell me na' plz..


Geet ' nahi.. bilkul bi nahi' ( she sees something and becomes excited.) maan, muje rabbit ke saath photo leni hai' dekho na kitna cute haina' see'


Maan- (feeling J) nahi' tumne to kaha tha ki main cute hoon yaad hai' ye rabbit bilkul cute nahi hai'


Geet- tum bhi na' who bhi cute hai.. dekho white white.. soft' chalo na'

( she drags maan to rabbots and poses with rabbit.. maan becomes very Jealous of that little rabbit who is so close to his geetu.. He makes various grumpy faces nad bechari Geet had to manaofy him whole day')

Next day all were ready for River rafting'they have to go for it in groups.. in maan and geet's group, other two are Rohan and Amit- geet hates both of them bt nothing can be done as teacher ordered them' they also have a care taker person who also will guide their boat during river-rafting..



Firstly they were in slow stedy water but now they entered in avery much wavy area where the water flow was much more 'they were enjoying a lot when suddenly Rohan pushed Geet into water when no one is noticing' but Maan noticed that.. when geet was in river, maan also jumped after her to save her but both don't know how to swim' the care taker also horrified and didn't jump into water to save them as this was the most dangerous area of the river' he called for help and was waiting for help to come early..

In water'.

Maan somehow managed to hold geet's hand and they were drowning together.. they don't know wat to do to save each other' suddenly there is some movement in geet' she unconsciously made a bubble from her mouth which grew bigger and bigger and finally covered them both like a proctective layer around both of them'

Now they can breath properly in that bubble and can talk also'


precap-??? guess...

I will update on next saturday...


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Edited by tulip_91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
update maneet masti snowman and maan jealous of rabit it maneet in water but magic saving them



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice partsMaan J of rabbit heheheh
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
nice story...

do add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome one... excellent...
maan
J of rabbit 😆😆😆😆
waiting to know the next...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one..
so d magic hs begun nw dt dey r 2gthr in danger!!
maan gettin j of d rabbit is sooo cute!!
waiting for more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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O-O...yeh to Geet ne jaadu kar diya...

is she also from magical world...how she made such a bubble...

amazing update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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till part 8
wow so interesting...
liking it so much...
Geet blew a bubble?
Maan is from the Magical world and what about Geet?
cont soon dear and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi like button not working add mee ...update next part too asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dr...
read the updates in one go...
its awesome...
truely magical...
loved it...
plzzz update soon n plzzz pm me...
waiting

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