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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
guys i don't think many of us r liking this fanfic
don't take it in the wrong sense cos i can't judge my own fanfic so i can't say whether its good or bad

i think i will end it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
no no its really nice. please continue fast. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
very nice...plz...continue... 😊
Edited by srk_kadz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It is great yaar, you plan each scene in so much detail. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow. This is so good. Pls do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yaar ur fanfic is awesome. plzzzzzzzzzzzz dont stop it. im loving it 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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here is the 4th part


they were having their usual funny chats when kunal hit nimmo's ankle by mistake
n- aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaeeeeeeeeeeeeeee kunnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaal

k- ss so sorry nimmo sorry real sorry lagi toh nahi

n- nahi muje aise tumhara naam chilane ki aadat hai

k- so sorry

n-tumhe pata hai agar tumhare sorry se agar mera pau(leg) tik ho gaya hota toh ab tak mein nach baliye mein part le rahi hoti

k- acha i'm sorry abhi woh cream lekar ata hoon

got ready (wearing a blazer and admiring himself in mirror)

n- kunal kiski shaadi hai

k- kisiki nahi kyun
n- acha kisiki nahi toh pune mein log davai kharid ne aise saj ke jate hai

k- u know its all about attitude and impression
n- obviously pharmacy mein toh models ramp peh chalti hai na

k- hahaha(mockery laugh) not funny mein kunal segal hoon u know kunal sehgal .... was going to continue

nimmo intrreupted -hello self obssesed insan yaha muje dard khaye ja raha hai can u pls go and get that pain killer and cream

k sorry ja raha hoon na
n- phir se sorry
k- okay going
and he went
nimmo looked longingly at him and thought why is he so adorable and confusing that makes my job of ignoring more hard she wanted to push all the love outside of her heart but couldn't stop thinking about him and thought natasha is so lucky that kunal loves her and soon they both will be together
and me she couldn't think of what she was going to do without kunal

on the other hand kunal was also thinking about natasha when he was coming back to his room with medicines
k-(to himself) how lucky natasha is to have
i hope usse bhi jaldi realise ho

he opened the door and banged against the flower vase
k- ouch nimmoooo

n-(comingo out of her thoughts ) kya hua and saw kunal holding his leg instinctively she ran towards him
after reaching she realised even she was injured
n- aeeeeeee (and fell down)
they both were sitting opposite each other on the ground

and laughed at each other's situation

k-shayad tum bhul gayi ho but u were injured kya zaroorat thi aise ane ki

n- woh tumne mera naam aise pukara jaise tum gunpoint pe ho ayr waise tumhe meri bimari kaise lag gayi

k- woh ha kya woh natasha ke bare mein soch raha tha na isliye
n-(heratbroken but soon pushed the thought out of her mind) toh phir mera naam kyun liya

k- (thinking, but as was not the thinking kind) arre tum hi toh yaha thi toh tumhara hi naam loonga nah
anyways mujhe toh lagta hai woh dr. ko wapas bulana padega itna dard ho raha haina

n- kunaall pls mujhe toh budhu mat banao meine toh girne mein phd ki hai

k per sachme dard ho raha hai
n- acha(asking like a mother who knows the secret)
k-ha aur kya mein jhoot boloonga

n- koi baat nahi lao mein woh cream laga deti hoon
k-toh tumhare pau pe kon lagaye ga


they both were sitting opposite each other on bed and applying the cream on each others leg
nimmo was just staring at kunal soon realised what she was doing and took her eyes off
and was watching out of the window

kunal looked up after finishing and it just struck him nimmo's face resembled some sort of arcangel
who can mend things and realised how she had helped him willingly and selflessly to get back natasha

k- nimmo kya meine tumse kaha
n-what
k-thank u for whatever u have done for me and and i'm really lucky to have u. u r such a true friend

n-(sincerity in his voice moved her and she thought life partner nah sahi per ek acha dost toh mila)

k-nimmmmmmmo kaha koh gayi

n-yeah u said that
k-siad what
n-tumhari short term memory sirf 10sec last karti hai kya
k-(confused look)
n-arre u said like a gazillion times thank u to me
k- oh woh
and they laughed.


i hope i made up for the delay woth this post but next time its goona be betta
its goona be big night '''''
lets see whats kunal's reaction goona be
waiting for ur reply's

Edited by sufi89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woooooooooow. awesome yaar. plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX SO MUCH U R SUCH A NICE WRITER AND U WRITE MORE 2 THNXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX SO MUCH PLZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON NEXT 👏 1
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Posted: 19 years ago
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here is the 5th part

the next morning nimmo woke up late just to find confused kunal in a towel deciding what to wear
she got up and shook her head
n-tmu bhi na kunal, itna bada decision akele leh rehe the

k- ha nimmo tum soh rahi thi nah isliye(after a while he realised the taunt) nimmo not very funny itni important meeting hai aur phir party yeh koi mazak ka time nahi hai

n- acha sorry,, yeh loh thats a perfect match and hwen u go to party u can remove the blazer aur casual look on so simple

k- (joyfully) thank u nimmo u r such a sweetheart(admiring himself in the mirror) perfect! aur natasha ko bhi yeh color acha lagta hai

n-(sound of her name brought sadness to her face, soon she turned them into fake smile) i think aaj acha timing hai i mean u can go and confess ur love

k- u think so

n- yeah
k-per woh nahi mani toh
n- toh u can say ki hum dono ke bij aisa kuch hai hi nahi
k- (that sounded weird to kunal, a little bit offensive but he soon pushed away the feelings)aur phir bhi woh nahi mani toh i mean agar usne proof manga toh! u know all the fake romantic scenes we did in front of her

n- kunal woh tumahara pyar hai sherlock holmes nahi ki saboot mange and confirmation ke liye tum usse mere pass le ana okay

n(nimmo had to say all these with a lot of effort but in a way it was good cos now if she and kunal did not have to do all those romantic scenes it would be lot easier for her)

k- nimmo nimmo kaah koh gayi
n-ha kuch nahi, tumhe meeting ke liye der nahi ho rahi

k- ha bad ja raha hoon bas gahdi select karke do na

n-uuuuuuufff god knows tum mere ane se phele kaise taiyar hote teh

k- (after hearing these words kunal suddenly thought) kitna difficult hota tha when nimmo wasn;t their she has made so much simpler for me
n-kunnaal
k-ha thanks nimmo bye, party mein milte hai

n-yeh thank u bohot bolta hai

at the party
kunal had some how convinced natasha to dance with him

n(wearing a beautiful black dress reaching upto her knee,straplees with platinum jewellery, her hair was down )she looked lika innocent princcess who didn't belong to this place and finding her prince charming, and their he was dancing so closely woth natasha
she felt bad, real bad. she was angry from betrayal, some how unknowingly her prince charming had betrayed her, she talked to god-- hamesha mein hi kyun kurbani dun, i mean hamesha sirf mein hii kyun milte hoon logo ko apni problems slove karne ke liye,mein kya koi cheese hoon jise jab chahe gale laga liya aur jab chahe phek diya, meri koi feelings nahi hai and she cried and let her heart out after drinking constantly.
after a while she looked at the person stitting next to her also drinking
it was her kunal and she smiled somehow she wasn't angry on him

guys imagine how drunkards talk

n- ku kunal tum yaha kya kar rahae ho, tum kab aye, natasha kaha hain
k- shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh itne sare questions ek sath puchna mana hai
n-ok kya hua
k-natasha meri baat sun hi nahi rahi bas aise hii chalee gayi aisa thodi chalta hai khabhi kabhi meri bhi baat sun ni chaiye jaise tum sunti ho
n- oh sorry
k-nimmo tum sharab pi rahi ho
n- diktha nahi hai kya
k- nai tohda blurry hai per acha hai tum mere sath rahkar bigad gayi ho
n-isme acha kya hai
k-tum meri tahrah banogi toh sare ladke tumare piche padenge, after all u aren't that badlooking infact u look hottoday
(all the way through their conversastion they where being dragged upto their room now finally they r in their room)
n- mujhe tumhari tharah nahi banna hai, nats bhi tumhari baat nahi sunti iska mataab u don't have true love

k- (felt bad and started crying lika babY
n-so sorry sorry and hugged him, i didn't mean to i mean nats is very unlucky that she doesn;t realise ur love
k-u r right yaar meri toh kisiko kadar hi nahi hai sirf tum ho jo mujhe jaanti ho u r my sweeet heart
n-she was still hugging him
this was one of the weak moments for both of them both didn't find love and both wanted it badly well in their subconcious state they could let their hearts out but as soon as mind takes over heart gets broken
but at this moment their heart was ruling

next morning nimmo woke up in his arms with a big headace and thought ....

alright i hope this was good i will continue tommorrow
waiting for ur replies


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