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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww dat was awosome just wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kunal baby felin somthin wow hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhes goono feel his true luv 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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here is the next part

n-acha tum dono batien karo, mujhe tohdi packing finish karnii hai
(and she left) she felt kind of good not for herself but for kunal after all this atleast he was happy and she thought maybe love was something like this asking for sacrifice and she hadn't failed in love she still loved kunal and it said if u love a person u can only wish for his happiness and kunals happiness was in natasha.and she carried on with the packing

nats-kunal this all is so random and awkward nah
k-haan, natasha hum baat mein baat karien abhi mujhe kahi jana hai (he didn;t know why he said that,cos he didn;t had to go anywhere but at that time he didn't wish to be with natasha)
nats-thik hai hum mumbai jaake baat karte hain
k- okay bye (and he stood up to go where???? his feet took him to nimmo)
n-kunal tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
k-haan kuch nahi bas mood nahi hai

n-kya,natasha se baatein karne ka mood nahi hai, tum thik toh ho pehle toh need mein bhi usse batein karne ke sapne dekhte thee

k-ha per i think i'm just tired
n-chinta maat karo tumhare dimag ko zyada der tak stress nahi karna padega waise bhi bichara itna chota hai, yeh sab jaldi end ho jayega

k-nimmooo tum hamesha end ki kyun batien karti ho, i don't know but bahut anxiety ho rahi hai
n-kunal end matlab hum dono ke relation i mean contract marriage ka

k-aur humari dosti
n-woh toh rahegi nah bhale hum ek doosre say dur ho

k-dur matalab
n-matlab kuch nahi
k-nimmmo
n-(she was thinking something else but she couldn't tell kunal that, she had to avoid the topic) i mean ek ghar mein

k-okay ab chale
n-yeah

(they reached bombay and met kk and kb, they filled them up with all the details)

kk-yeh sab toh thik hai per natasha ko apne contract ke barein mein toh nahi bataya nah
k-nahi i odn't think hume batana chaiye kynki agar by chance yeh baat leak ho gayi toh pata nahin kya hoga i mean nimmo's parents, property bahut kuch stake pe laga hai

n-yeah u r right
kb- haan aur phir tumhare dadaji ko zor ka jhatka zor se hii lagega aur woh jhatake mein tumharii property toh gayi

n-masi arre bolana natasha ko humne nahi bataya
kb-haan per dadaji ko kaise bataogi
n-hume kuch aisa karna hoga jisse dadaji ki nazar mein kunal acha bana rahe aur dadaji ko mujse nafrat ho jaye

kb-yeh toh kabhi nahi ho sakta pehli bar try kiya tha maloom hai na kya hua tha tum dono ko honeymoon bhej diya, dadaji toh tumhe galat samj hii nahi sakte pata nahi ek baat unki baata mein chipuk jati hai toh woh fevicol ka jod ban jati hai
aur doosari baat tum kar bhi nahi paogi, kisine kuch kaha nahi ki ganga behni shooru ho jati hai

k=kantaben its tought apno ko jaan muj kar dukh pohochana its not easy

kb-arre apne kaha tumhare gharwale hai na
n-massi, bhale woh kunal ke dadaji ho per meine unhe apna mana hai
(kunal felt a sense of satisfaction after hearing this words)

kb-mujhe pata tha yeh line anewali hai, acha sorry nah nimmo
n-it okay kantamasi
kk-per kisi ne yeh socha kya karna hai
n-hum dadaji ko vishwas dilasakte hain ki kunal natasha ke beger nahi ji sakta nad he only loves her

kb-yeh toh pehle wale se bhi impossible hai, iski girlfreinds ki list dekhi hai

kk-baat toh sahi hai, meine sab ke bio-data's jaan kar hii jana ki meri memory kitni powerful hai, itni mehnat school mein ki hoti toh toh ab tak mein doctor baan gaay hota

k-kk bas tum bhi uus party mein shamil ho gaye

kk=kya karoon sir jahan sachai waha mein

k-haha not funny
kk-aur koi option nahi hai humare pass, aur agar yeh paln successful ho gaya toh 1 saal tak bhi intezar karna nahi padega
all had their thinking caps on and agreed

sorry guys for the delay i hope i made up to u
tell me how it was

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
omg..... thts fabulous!!!!!!!!!!! good job... plz keep writing... i m waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
sorry giys for the delay here's the next part

kb-acha tum log so jao abhi abhi pune se ae ho thak gaey hoge aur waise bhi kunal ka dimag baara baje ke baad bandh ho jata hai

k-kantaben
kb-ha ha thik hai chalo kk inn logo ko sone do
(they left)
n-(saw kunal's upset face)
ab kyun upset ho, ab toh natasha bhi tumahari hai
k-woh baat nahi hai
n-samaj gayi
(kunal thought nimmo was so understanding mere dimag mein kya chal raha hai usse itni jaldi kaise pata chal raha hai)
k-kya
n-yahi ki ek hii din mein itna kuch ho gaya aur tumhara chota sa dimag digest nahi kar pa raha hai

k-nimmo tum bhi na kb ki kami mehsoos khabhi nahi hone deti, kabhi kabhi toh muje unke nah hone ka bliss experience karne doh
n-acha thik hai mein waise bhi sone ja rahi hoon

k-nimmo. ek baat karni thi tumse
n-haan bolo
k-woh
n-bolo kunal
k-nimmo hum kal natasha ko batadenge ki ki kal raat jo humahre bij u know what i mean

n-(she hadn't forgotten about it even for one second as it was most beautiful moment of her life in that one moment she felt that anything could be wished for and achieved , she felt as if all she wanted in life will come true but life had other plans, she could have easily told natasha the truth and seperated kunal from nats, but she wasn't that kind, ifact she was kind and caring and she cared about kunal, she couldn't hurt him in anyways)

k-nimmo kaha kho gayi
n-huh kunal hum nahi bateige nats ko
k-kya matalab i don't want to lie to her (wasit the only reason or their was something else that he wanted, with a prick of hope of getting someone, what wasit he didn;tknow but he wanted to tell nats the truth)

n-ha tum batana but thos isn't the right time i mean woh abhi bhi confuse hai apni feelings ke bare mein and if u tell her then she will totallyu give u red sign

k-toh kya karenge

n-nothing kal dadaji ko hint denge aur waise bhi century mein pheli aur akhri bar pam chachi aur dadi hume indriectly help karengi afterall they want me out of the house nah
k-tumhe toh nah detective yah criminal hona chaiye

n-kyun
k-tumahara dimag jo itna chalta sab point of view soch thi ho
n-hota kunal hota hai jiska dimag humesha confuse rehta hai usse bahut jaldi complextion aa jata hai
k-see tum counterattack bhi karti ho, nimmo mein beer leke aoo hum movie dekhe sath mein(he actually wanted to spend time with her)
n-aaj achanak kya hua
k-tumhare kharate se neend toh ayegi nahi
n-haha pehli baat mein beer nahi piti dusri baat mujhe tumhare woh english movies bilkul pasand nahi hai
k-ahca toh coke leke atahoon
n-(she wanted to stay but she knew she had to spend less time with kunal she couldn't let her heart slip again)nahi kunal i'm sorry mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai, volume tohda kum rakhna haan
k-goodnight
n-goodnight

tell me how it was guys hope u like it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
its amaging poor kunal hahha 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
i loved every single bit of it..... amazing!!! keep it coming. thnx for PMing me everytime u write a part. it helps me stay up-to-date. good job!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
hey yaar did kunu n nimmo spendid a nite or somethin i forgot cuz i read all the fan fics n it gets kind a confusin. so can u tell me plzzzzzzzz 😭

thanx 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
yeah they did but when kunal got up his frist reaction was sorry
nso nimmo told him to let it go
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
awesome ishani didi!!!!! contineu when you can! 😊 😉

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