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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

here's the next one

ab chale kunal lunch ka time ho raha hai
k-nimmo r u sure ki tum natasha ko batane wali ho

n-ae hello natasha tumahri grilfriend hai meri nahi. tum usse bata rahe ho mein toh sirf support karoongi

k-mein, mein kyun batoon akhir this is ur idea
n-kunal idea dena mera kam kyunki mein samaj sakti hoon ki tumhara dimag zyada chalta nahi per uus idea ko follow karna bhi mujhe sikhana pedega

k-per nimmo mein kaise
n-tumhe jo karna hai karo idea follow karna hai karo nahi karna hai mat karo mein nahi kehne wali kuch bhi(in her heart she knew she couldn't tell nats that she didn't love kunal, it was always difficult for her to lie)

k-thik hai per chal toh rahi ho nah mere saath
n-haan chalo
they went and natasha was already their
k-(on seeing nats) arre natasha already yaha pe hai chalo(turning back to run)
n-(holding him by his shoulder) arre natasha ko bulaya toh woh hi yaha pe hogi nah
ab chalo
literary dragging him

k-hi(really nervous)
they both sat doen and order food
after returning the menu kunal folded his hands and kept staring at nimmo
n-(whispering) kunal bolo
k-haan
k-natasha toh tum yaha kaise
nats-what
k-woh tum pune mein kya kar rahi ho

nats-ha
n-kunaaal kya bol rahe ho pike rakhi hai kya

k-ha
n-kya
k-nai
n-bolo
k-i love u
n- kya
k-tumne toh kaha bolo
n-meri taraf dekh ke nahi uski taraf dekhke
k-oh haan natasha tum ne suna na
nats-haan toh mein kya kroon tumne yeh baat karne ke liye bulaya. tumhare aur nimmo ke bij kya hai usme mein kya karoon

n-kunal ka matalb hai woh tumse pyar karta hai
nats-what, kya
k-ha

oright guys little bit short feeling lazy but i will continue soon tell me how it was
in this fic nimmo is a bit jovial and not depressing i kind of like her more enthu types
anyways waiting for ur replies.

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

guys pls reply
replies r really encouraging and if u don't like my fic i will stop

pls 😳

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masala

@masala

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

heyyy,

i wasnt able to locate this fanfic through the forum. tht cud be the reason why others might hv not read it. but it's really good.

i loved these lines:

"at this stage nimmo had some what acceptedd that kunal can never be hers
and kunal realised how important nimmo is in his life"

great job! i like how u portrayed kunal's nervousness and nimmo's determination. very good!!

keep up the great work and do continue for my sake.

👏

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

hey I read the whole fan-fic! it's REALLY good! I hope nimmo and kunal meet again!

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#35

thanks for reading guys i will update soon maybe tonight

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#36

here is the next part, guys in my fic natasha is kind of good
recap-kunal confess his love to natasha
nats- kunal r u drunk, woh bhi subhe subhe
k-nahi i'm serious

nats-kunal this is the limit, majak ki bhi koi limit hoti nimmo yaha per hai
k-per i'm serious why can't u take me seriously for once

nats- tum hamesha kam hii aisa karte ho let me get this clear tum apni biwi ke samne apni ex-gf se i love u keh rahe ho

k-i mean ha, i mean uss tarah nahi,matlab

n-mein uski sahi maino mein biwi nahi hoon
nats-what???

n-ha
nats-okay this whole thing is so random

k-let me explain
nats-nahin um nahi nimmo tum kya kahe rahi thi
(kunal making facing as he was left out)

n-woh hamarii shadi ek samjohtathi, like we needed each other at that time per tumhe woh sab mein padhne ki zaroorat nahi hai but kunal really loves(she could say this without hesitation cos somehow she got the courage do to it)

nats-per u 2 seemed so much in love

k-haan woh sab toh tumhare liye tha
nats mere liye it doesn't make sense

n-kunal tum chup baitho
k-tumne hii toh kaha tha ki tum sab batana
n-meine tumhe sirf apne pyar ko confess karne ke liye kaha tha, things ko aur confuse karne ke liye nahi

k-woh karne ki bho kya zaroorat thi tum hii nats se l love u bol de ti

n-kya, acha sorry bolo jo bol na hai
k-haan oth mein kya keh raha tha(started to say but couldn't figure out the way to explain stuff) acha nimmo tum batao tum acha bol rahi

nats-yaha pe oration competition nahi ho raha hai koi mujhe bataega yaha kya ho raha hai

n-okay, kunal tumse bahut pyar karta hai aur usse pata nhai tha ki tum bhi usse pyar karti ho ki nahi he made u feel jealous using me (this was the frist time it struck her that whether it be kunal or vik both of them where using her, but she couldn't think more as she was intrreupteed by natasha)
nats-aage kya
k-(even kunal didn;t like the word using nimmo, but he realised it was true and he felt bad)

n-aage kuch nahi here we're u love kunal and kunal loves u,u too get together and mujhe yeh jhamele se bahar nikalo

k(kunal felt really bad now as nimmo would soon be gone)

nats-toh tumne yeh sab mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya
n-because we weren't sure that u loved kunal

nats- sure toh mein abhi nahi hoon
n-matalb
nats-meaning so much has happened since we broke up and i had already accepted that kunal was urs(nimmo thought how she wished that even destiny had accepted the same but she knew destiny had other plans for her)

n-but now toh u know the truth
nats-haan but feelings aren't in my hand ki jab chahe on kiya and jab chae off ho gayi
n-i hope aisa hota
nats-kya
n-kuch nahi
nats-i still do have feelings for kunal but marriage is the last thing on my mind and i'm not even sure how strong are they.
k-yeah whatever u feel koi jaldi nahi hai
n-haan jab tak hum gharwallon ko samjhale and u know about me and kunal and u and kunal

k-gharwaloon ko, tum shock pe shock de rahi ho nimmo
n-obviously, i mean mein bina batayein toh ghar se nahi ja sakti nah. gharwalo ko samjhna toh padega ki we aren't right for each other ya aisa hii kuch
k(kunal was feeling worst now he couldn't tell why)

allright guys this was the part tell me how it was

Edited by sufi89 - 19 years ago

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masala

@masala

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Posted: 19 years ago

#37

good tht kunal is feeling something... i wonder when this confused soul will get some sense... very well written!!!!! 👏

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anudeep malhi

@desirocks

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Posted: 19 years ago

#38

wow awesome yaar. i love it. plzzzzzzz cont soon yaar 👏

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#39

yeah!!!!!!! that was awesome!!!! poor nimmo she has to say all that even though she loves kunal!!!!!! 😭 awesome part! continue when you can!

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@angel_70s

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Posted: 19 years ago

#40

its really good, your fan fic has kept the tone the show had at the starting which is what made it so fun to watch and whats happening in your story is actually better than the show so i hope you continue soon

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