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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ravichitra

Poor Ram. i feel bad for him.


dont worry you'll not feel so in next update for sure 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

Hey thnks u posted it :-)



U r welcome and thanks too for w8ing 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Alaadin

Awesome
Please update soon


thanks 😊
next update this weekend hope you'll like it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbalh

too good loved it.. whats coming up next



plz do update soon regularly


hey thanks 😛
next update by the weekend enjoy it n it be the last part of it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SWEETETIKA

Welcome!!! Back M_n_h
good update.
Bechara golu :-(
Continue soon.


thanks 😊 glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Siacutie

thank god u r back after a long break awesum update but plz this time continue soon the next part 👏


thanks sia 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
what a lovely story! If you could write 4 of these every week, I can completely stop watching the show and just read your FF.

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Thanks for giving me my RaYa dose for today. Ab show jaisa bhi hoga , chalega. If it is really bad, I will just re-read your post! 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mem1

what a lovely story! If you could write 4 of these every week, I can completely stop watching the show and just read your FF.

👏👏

Thanks for giving me my RaYa dose for today. Ab show jaisa bhi hoga , chalega. If it is really bad, I will just re-read your post! 🤗


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thanks you so much 😊 it really means a lot 🤗
yes i can write the scenes but the inspiration i get is RaYa and their expressions i'll keep tht in my mind while writing so credit goes to them for making to write such scenes

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi friends i want to end it here goes my last update hope you enjoy this:

Scene 28:

Recap:

Priya: ji nahin Neha ke ghar jaane se pehle bhi tho aap ne aur… aur who bhi and she realized wht she said and lowered her eyes.

Ram: wahi tho kitna dher ho gaya hai dekho and brings her close

Priya: bas… chaliye na varna koi aura a jayega and suddenly door opened both Ram and Priya moved away from each other Vikram's daughter entered: aunty aap yahan kab se hum aap ka wait kar rahe hai chaliye na aap Ram uncle se baad mein baath kar lijiye and dragged Priya with her Ram just stood there watching Priya going out of the room he tired to stop Priya but was vain as the little girl was not ready to listen and he has to give in. there Ram stood watching Priya turned back to him and said "good luck next time" and Ram gave her a killer look.

Update:

Ram was very irritated so he thought of sitting in the room instead of going down n enjoying. He opened his laptop n started working on it.

All were enjoying but Priya realized that Ram was not there she knew that if she asked him to come he wouldn't do it so she asked Vikram to bring Ram down. Vikram went to their room n saw that Ram was working on his laptop.

Vikram: Ram tu yaha kya kar raha hai

Ram: kuch nahin woh thodi si presentation baaki thi tho bas wahi dekh raha tha

Vikram: tu bhi na hum yahan pe holiday par aaye hai aur tu hai ki presentation le kar baita hai

Ram: holiday par aaye hai tho kya hua koi rule hai kya ki koi kaam nahin kar sakthe

Vikram: kaisa koi rule tho nahin hai lekin

Ram: nahin hai na… tho phir karne de na

Vikram: nahin tu kaam nahin karega chal mere saath and dragged Ram along with him so that they can have fun for some time together

After the dinner Neha put the kids sleep and Ayesha too went to sleep rest every one were joining in the garden having gud time together. Suddenly Vikram remembered something

Vikram: Ram tujhe yaad hai jab hum college ke dino mein yahan aaya karte the tu kaise kaise horror stories bataya karta tha

Rishabh: sach mein bahi

Neha: sach mein tumhe sunna chahiye

Nuts: bhai tho batayiye na

Ram: arreh nahin main tho bas aise hi

Rishabh: Vikram bhai aap hi batayiye na

Vikram: thik hai and he started telling the stories Nuts got scared and he held Karthik's hand Priya was also scared and she was looking at Ram but as Ram was angry he dint look at her wontedly after finishing the story everyone went to their rooms.

Ram and Priya were in their room Ram was pretending as he was asleep, he knew that Priya was scared and he turned the otherside. Priya dint understand wht to do she was scared after sometime she closed her eyes and tried to sleep still she was scared she opened eyes and saw that Ram was sleeping peacefully she moved towards him and tried calling him

Priya: Ram… Ram… suniye na but there was no response from Ram she moved further close leaned her head on his back felt safe so closed her eyes and was about to sleep when Ram put turned around and put his arm across her and pulled her close to him.

Priya opened her eyes: aap sone ki acting kar rahe the

Ram: nahin tho

Priya: jooth mat boliye main jaanti hu ki aap nahin soye the par aap ne aisa kyun kiya

Ram: kyun ki meri biwi subah se mujh se dur bhag rahi thi tho apni biwi ko paas lane ke liye mujhe kuch tho karna padega na

Priya: tho aap hi ne Vikram se ye sab kehne ke liye kaha

Ram: ye maine nahin kiya main tho bas

Priya: sone ki acting kar rahe the

Ram: apni biwi ko pass lane ke liye

Priya hit him on his chest: aap bhi na and both slept peacefully in each others arms.

Few days passed one day when Ram came down for breakfast he saw that Priya was very busy he dint understand wht she was dng but he thought of not disturbing her so went to his room and started working on his presentation. All the day Ram dint see Priya she was busy at last he saw her while having dinner n saw some tension on her face. After dinner when RaYa were their room

Ram: Priya kya hua koi tension hai kya

Priya: nahin aisa kuch bhi nahin hai aap aisa kyun pooch rahe hai

Ram: kuch nahin pata nahin kyun magar aisa lag raha hai ki tumhe koi tension… but Priya's cell rang cutting his sentence

Priya excused her self after attending the call she came back again n Ram observed that her tension was replaced with happiness but dint understand the reason behind it

Ram: Priya kiska phone that um bahut kush lag rahi ho

Priya: kuch nahin woh bas aise hi in the mean time Neha came and asked Priya to come along with her, they Ram stood there looking at the door trying to understand wht was happening

After sometime Ram called Priya as she dint return but she dint pick his call later she called him n asked him to come down.

Ram came down it was dark: Priya kaha ho tum itna andera kyun hai suddenly lights came and everyone started wishing by singing birthday song, it was Ram's birthday. Ram was surprised n he was very happy he looked at Priya n silently told her thanks for making his bday so special.

Priya remembered her conversation with Neha previous evening

Neha: Priya I m very excited hum sab bahut enjoy karenge

Priya: haan main bhit

Neha: arreh main tho bhul hi gayi fatty ka bday bhi tho aa raha hai

Priya excitedly: bday… kab hai

Neha: jis din hum vacation se wapas aa rahe hai na uss din

Priya: Neha main Ram ke liye surprise plan karna chahti hoon kyat um meri madad karogi

Neha: haan batao na

Priya: Ram apna bday kaise manana chahte hai

Neha: fatty ko apne puure family ke saath manana accha lagta hai

Priya: tho phir thik hai main sab ko invite kar lethi hoon

Neha: aur kuch…

Priya: Neha kya hum Ram ke bday ke din waha nahin ruk sakthe

Neha: pata nahin Vikram ko poonchna padega

Priya: tho call karo na plz

Neha after talking to Vikram: nahin Priya Vikram ki koi meeting hai humara rukh na ek kaam karte hai tum aur Ram wah rukh jao and Priya agreed to it.

After celebration everyone went to their room

Ram: tho ye baath hai yahi chupa rahi thi tum

Priya: maine… maine kya chupaya

Ram: accha…

Priya: aapko surprise dena chahti thi

Ram: surprise ke liye thanks par tum ne mujhe abhi tak wish nahin kiya

Priya: maine kiya hai na niche thodi der pehle

Ram: mujhe tho special wish chahiye commom yaar aaj mera bday hai

Priya came towards Ram gave him a peck on his lips wishing him on his bday but Ram didn't let her go so easily n turned the peck to a full felged kiss.

Nex day morning everyone was ready to leave Ram came down all wished him again had breakfast together enjoyed for sometime, Priya told Ram before coming down that they were staying here today to celebrate his bday.Everyone gave their gifts before leaving.

RaYa were alone in their room, Priya was adjusting the bed, Ram came from behind and held her

Priya turned back: aap ye kya kar rahe hai

Ram: kuch nahin anpe biwi se baath karna chahtha hoon

Priya: acha… tho batayiye kya baath hai

Ram: sab ne mujhe gift diye par tumhara gift… abhi tak nahin mila

Priya: mere paas bhi aap ke liye gift haih

Ram: tho do na

Priya was blusing hard: dethi hoon and she took his hand and kept it on her stomach

Ram was surprised: iss ka kya matlab hain

Priya: ki aap papa banne wale hai

Ram was shocked to hear it later when he came back to his senses there were no boundaries for his joy he felt top of the world he came near her cupped her face: thanks Priya it is the best gift I ever had kissed on her forehead and they hugged each other enjoying their moment which is the next step in their life.



I would like to thank everyone for their love, support and patience too 😆 for waiting for the update now I would like to end it here. Without you guys I wouldn't have wrote so much, when I have started this I expected it to be one but this was my 28th scene unbelieve 😲 I wrote so much once again thank you so much for your love and support 🤗.

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Posted: 13 years ago



What can I say...other than a BIG THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. Seems Ive just seen a BAHL episode on Friday too and that too such a cute one.

Just one regret...why make this the last? I'm sure you can do a great job with Priya's pregnancy track as well and then with the babies... please do continue

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