thread 2--maaneet ff -- is pyaar ko kya naam du

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Niharika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Maan is planning something special for Geet and yeh Sasha-Tasha ki jodi kyu beech mein pad rahe hai...

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Eza_analyst

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Owesome update
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Great
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Auj Halim

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

I am Extremely sorry for being late!

Awsum part!

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Ash1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

waiting fr da next update...lvd it...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Lovly dear.
Totally superb.
Enjoyed it.
Will hit 'like' too, soon.

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

...😃

4 PMing me..dear...😳

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janvi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

hey gr8 part..

cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..

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Priya21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Part 38
Maaneet ff - Is pyaar ko kya naam du

Maan( in angry tone ):😡 sasha

Sasha :am sorry Mk
Maine is ladki ko kh diya hai
Yha se jane ke liye..
Pr ye ladki itni besharam hai...
Itna ho jane ke baad bi yhi khadi hai.

Maan glares towards her : shutup

Tumne ek sabd aur bi kaha geet ke liye
To mujhse bura koi nhi honga
Sasha : Mk
Mein to
Maan : tumhe ek baar me samajh nhi aata
Kha na
Chup ho jao
Sasha : sorry Mk
Maan : sorry geet se kaho
Sasha : geet se
Maan's eyes were splitting fire. He ordered.
Maan : maine kaha meri wife se mafi mango
Geet : maan
Maan : nhi geet, isse maafi mangni padegi.
Sasha
Tumhe sunai nhi deta
Sasha : sorry geet
Maan : sorry geet madam kaho
Sasha : sorry geet madam
Geet : its ok sasha
He held her wrist and enter in own cabin.
Geet : maan please aap shant ho jaiye
Maan : geet mein sasha ko maaf nhi kar sakta
Geet : maan asa kya ho gya
Maan : asa kya ho gya ye tum puch rhi ho geet
Usne tumhari insult karne ki koshish ki
Aur tum kh rhi ho kya hua hai
Geet : maan usne jo bi kaha, wo sach kaha
Aapne hi..
Maan looked at her
Geet : maan mera wo matlab nhi tha
Am sorry maan
Fresh tears were flowing down her cheeks.
Maan wipes her tears and lifts her face holding her chin.
Maan : geet sorry to mujhe khna chaiye
Meri wajah se hi...
Geet : maan
Maan : ha geet
Ydi tumhe ek baar apni baat khne ka mauka diya hota to
Itna lamba waqt hume ek dusre se dur na rhna padta
Geet : maan ydi duriya na aati to nazdikiyo ka ehsaas kaise hota
Aur ab please itne santy mt hoye
Nhi to mein ro padungi
Maan : begum sahiba, ye zulm hum pe mat karna,
Tumhe pata hai na, mein tumhari aankhon me ansu nhi dekh sakta
Geet : hmm
Maan : geet tum bs yuhi baatein karti rohngi
Ya kuch kaam bi karongi
Geet : kaam
Maan : ha maine tumhe ek file lane ko kaha tha, jo tumne mujhe abi tak nhi di
Geet : maan
Maan : khi asa to nhi geet, tum baatein ke chakkar mein, file lana hi bhul gyi
Geet : maan ye rhi aapki file
Pata nhi kya kya suna diya mujhe
He slightly turned to her and inch closer.
Maan : geet
Mein tumse ab kahu to wo "sunana" bn gya..
Geet :maan
Nhi..
Wo.. To..
Maan : wo to
Kya geet

Geet closes her eyes as his lips touched her, tasting soft skin of her nape..
Maan : geet, kuch kahongi nhi
He was not kissing but just feeling the softness of her skin with his lips..
Geet : maan
She gasps and hugging him tightly, he too hugged her.. His hand was pulling her close to closer and pressing her on him.
Precap :
Maan : you should have thought about it before doing mistake

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago