OS : Just Go On And Kiss The Girl

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yo famus! <3 how are y'all? Well I'm great now that I saw the rabbe-ve moment, and after staring and watching repeat telecast for almost an hour now (yeah I have no life) I have written an OS, I do believe it's a mature one.

I am warning you before hand so please do not become offended, also I think its mature. I'm not really a mature writer but still I tried: D

Also its really short 😳

Here goes

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OS : Just Go On And Kiss The Girl


The pain vanished within the matter of seconds as he felt his wife use her soft hands to rub against his forehead. And then he felt warm air hit his forehead and saw her lips shaped to an 'O'. Her actions changed from rubbing with her hands then blowing soft air with her mouth. She was so concerned with his one injury that didn't even hurt that much and forgot within seconds all the pain he had given her.

It seemed her heart was like wax; it became hard when it was put through cold situations and melted when it was exposed to heat, just like the situation they were in now. How could she?

The hit on his head made him realise that if she were really set out to hurt his di then she would've done things out of spite, but the only thing his all seeing eyes had noticed was the amount of love she had for him, and his family.

His reverie was broken as she constantly questioned him

"Does it still hurt?"

Her lips formed an 'O' again blowing softly against his forehead, and on impulse Arnav put his arms around her waist and yanked her in.

She gasped.

"Arnav-ji yeh app- app kya-"

"Shh" he whispered huskily "You talk way too much"

And just like what his heart was telling him he bent down and took her lips in a sensuous kiss.

Khushi was shocked to say the least, Arnav-ji was acting really weird, but this stunned her completely. Her arms went up in defence to push him away, but they way his lips moved on hers she moaned in delight. And instinctively her hands went to his chest and slowly moved to his neck where they hooked on so her knees didn't betray her.

Feeling her hands move up was all the encouragement Arnav needed to pursue the kiss further. His lips guided her through a sea through of torrid passion; it was hot, sensuous but loving.

"Khushi" He said, his lips moving up her jawline to rest at her ears.

"Hmm"

"I'm sorry" He whispered, his voice still husky from the passion they shared.

"For what? For bumping into me?"

"No silly, for everything, I'm sorry for continuously hurting you, and then pretending to care about you, the truth is I let you in, more then I have even let anyone in, with you I'm different and I thought that you betrayed me, I though-"

She interrupted him "Has anyone ever told you, you shouldn't think"

"What the? Khushi look here I am trying to apologize and there you are being yourself, listen pagal I am sorry really sorry, and I love" Arnav stopped.

Khushi raised her head from his chest her eyes and ears expectant

He gulped "I appreciate you, I really do"

Her face was crestfallen but she tried not to show it.

"I appreciate you too Arnav" She said.

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OK if I write anything else I will ruin it. So do let me know what you all think?

Is it crappy? Or lame?

-Aashifa

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Rhysenn thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cute! But I wish that Arnav said I love you instead!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rhysenn

Cute! But I wish that Arnav said I love you instead!😊



Thank you 😃 But this is ASR we are talking about. They aren't gonna be confessions that fast 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a cute 1 dear.. loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Browcakeny! Im liking the use of words here.. Torrid passion and sensuous.. Yum. Dont mind if i do. Erm.. moooving on: It was nice! And this was the first time you wrote something like this? Very nice, not nasty, sweet and cute and nice! :D Sooo arnav na? I love..erm.. appreciate you.. What the? DUDE... DUDES in GENERAL. Anyways, je t'aime!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have no words for how wonderful that OS was Aashifa : )

Simply beautiful👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I APPRECIATE YOU AASHIFA! 😆

This is a wonderful OS!

Shalu. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww.. This was soo sweet Silly... Infact a Lovely OS to prepare us for Our Heer-Ranjha 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very sweet! Do write more! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great os is it yout first time

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