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🥳UPDATING dears….🥳

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Ruchs tere few more minutes kab khatm homge?
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Hey did u chat wid zoha last week kya?
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A big thanks to all those who commented and liked...Thank you so much dears...am very overwhelmed...😳

Major complain me gets is that my updates are very short... Guys me just wanted to tell you that me tried but me can't write more than 1000-1200 words in a go since me updates almost daily... Sholly dears….😭

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PART - 34

Geet was totally speechless. She could see the unmasked naked love and passion oozing out in his eyes. She was simply stunned. She never knew the depth of his unlimited, unconditional deep love for her. People used to say that she is his Deewani but she now knew the truth that who was the true Deewana... he actually had no limits to his love for her... No limits to his DEEWANGI for her….

"Babaji…. Abb bass aapki Geet ko aur kuchh nahi chaiyeh... Aaj maine sab kuchh paa liya... Sab kuchh... bass abb aap apni meher issi tarah hum par….mere Maan parr banaye rakhiyega..." She silently prayed.

All this while Maan had been looking straight into her eyes, and he saw multitude of emotions…. Surprise….. Shock... Love... Gratitude...

Geet saw Maan looking at her expectantly but right now she was not in a position to say anything. She was too overwhelmed after his heartfelt confession. Still she managed to gather some energy and finally spoke, cupping his face in her hands...

"I love y... OUCH..."

She couldn't complete her sentence as she suddenly felt some pain in her abdomen. Maan got very concerned seeing her face wrenched in pain.

"KYA HUA??? TUM THEEK TOH HO?? MAIN ABHI DOCTOR KO BULATA HOON…."

Maan was about to get up when Geet suddenly stopped him. He turned and was surprised to see Geet smiling at him. She took his hand and kept it on her stomach. Maan was confused but then suddenly he felt the soft nudge. He was initially too shocked and then a glow spread on his face when he realized.

"Oh My GOD… GEET…. OUR BABY KICKED..."

Geet nodded with tears in her eyes.

"Aur wo bhi pehli baar…."

Maan was extremely happy. He kept his ear on her stomach.

"Maan baby aapse kuchh kehna chahta hai…."

"Achchha... wo kya…."

"Baby kehna chahta hai ki wo aur uski mamma bhi appse bahut pyaar karte hain aur aapke bina jee bhi nahi sakte..."

Maan looked up at her and Geet bent down and gently pecked his lips to express her love, which she was unable to do using mere words. Maan held her and slowly deepened the kiss when he felt the strong nudge against his hand that was still on Geet's stomach. They broke the kiss and Maan chuckled-

"Lagta hai Baby is jealous…. Usse saari attention chaiyeh apne mummy-papa ki..."

Geet smiled and willingly went into his warm and comforting embrace. She felt extremely peaceful and safe, as she knew that nothing could happen to her or the baby when he is there, their savior. They sat on the swing for a long time. Enjoying the silence, reminiscing their love confession and the first occasion marking the presence of the symbol of their love….

FARMHOUSE, outskirts of Delhi

At the same time Brij, the pathetic excuse for human being on two legs, finally reached Delhi. He knocked on the door and messaged Rimi informing her that it was him. He looked around to ensure that no one was watching him when he entered their hideout. Though unknown to him someone lurking in the shadows was keeping a constant watch on all his activities.

He settled himself on the sofa in the living room and stretched his muscles.

"Jao mere liye ek gilaas pani lekar aao…."

He ordered Rimi. Rimi had got quite frustrated by then as he had take so long and she was practically hiding in order to save her life.

"Tumhe paani ki padi hai... Tum jaante bhi ho hum kitni badi museebat mein hain???"

"BRIJ SINGH HANDA ka koi kuchh nahi bigaad sakta... Tum chinta mat karo..."

"Maan Singh Khurana yeh baat jaanta hai ki main Geet nahi hoon..."

"Toh... Kya sabot hai uske paas?? Kaise saabit karega ki tum Handa Group of Companies ki iklauti waaris Geet Handa nahi ho???"

Rimi was getting angrier and frustrated by the second to see him being so carefree about this whole issue. He was underestimating the MSK which could lead to their destruction. She got straight to the point and dropped the bomb on him.

"Geet aur Maan Singh Khurana ne shaadi kar li hai... ASLI GEET INDIA MEIN HAI AUR MSK KI PATNI HAI…."

Brij who had by then helped himself to get some water and had drank his first sip, spluttered it out and choked-

"KYAAA... Parr aisa kaise ho sakta hai…. Maine khud Geet ka intezaam kar diya tha..."

"Aisa ho gaya hai... Aur issi kaaran main tumhe itne dinon se yaha aane ke liye keh rahi thi…."

"Hmmm yeh toh bahut gadbad ho gayi hai... Parr tum chinta mat karo... Hum kuchh soch lenge..."

"Abb koi fayda nahi hai kyunki waaris ki kya zaroorat jab company aur property ka legal owner hi zinda ho... Geet ka baap aur Handa's ki property ka asli maalik MOHINDER LAL HANDA bhi zinda hai….."

"NAHIII AISA NAHI HO SAKTA..."

He caught hold of Rimi's neck and started strangling her. He was completely enraged.

"BR..br..brij… chh…chhodo..." She spluttered.

Brij threw her on the floor. Rimi hurt her head hitting it on the edge of the table and started bleeding badly…. She looked at Brij, with fear evident in her eyes. While Brij was behaving like a complete madman...

"AISA NAHI HO SAKTA..."

He started throwing and breaking anything and everything that came in his hand. He started crying bitterly, hiding his face between his knees and then after a few minutes he started laughing maniacally... Rimi was completely terrified seeing his Mad avatar….

"Aur agar aisa hai bhi toh koi farak nahi padta kyunki HUKUM KA IKKA toh abhi bhi mere haath mein hai….."

"Hukum ka ikka???"

Rimi was confused and thought that he had lost it completely due to the shock but was left completely surprised and shocked by his revelation.

"Haan…. RANJIT SINGH KHURANA..." He gave a devilish smirk.

PRECAP

PARI SERIOUS...😭


This update is specially for Mel…..😳

As you all requested me will write my twisty thing but with a little dose of Muski di's Deewangi...😳

Glimpse in next 2-3 updates...😉


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Edited by ruchs - 13 years ago
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Edited by meena.. - 13 years ago
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awesooome upd.
loved it...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
sweet maaneet moments

but annoying rimi n brij part

precap is sad

thanks for pm

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous but i really hope ki maan brij ko bahut acha sabak sikhaye
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Posted: 13 years ago
BRIJ WILL FINALLY EXPOSE HIS TRUMP CARD AND THEN THAT WILL BE HIS THE END
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😆 now baby taken revenge from maan won't let geet complete her sentence.
the pathetic excuse for human being on two legs, ow I just loved this sentence
well rimi is far more smarter than brij dahm how stupid is brij
spluttered it out and choked-😆
OMG what the hell did brij do to pari I am sure he is behind it😡
nice update you rock girl

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