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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

just read most of the updates ...you are on a roll dear...this is fabulous...i cant get enough of it...

arnav is as tortured as ever...while khushi is khushi, fiesty but still in essence Khushi...sweet, understanding, forgiving...

am going to enjoy their journey towards love for each other...

nice to see a happily married anjali and shyam...

Akash is great here...so much fun...may turn out to be a true friend...

i wonder if the last part was lavanya's POV...pls update soon ...cant wait to see what else you have in store for us...

Really nice FF ...well done 👏

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coolgal49

@coolgal49

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

When are you going to update dear?

I am waiting...Sunday is almost over - where I live! :))))))

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#493

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sruthirishi

@sruthirishi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#494

😃gud luck for ur exams!!!!

& waiting patiently...for a longgg update😉

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awww..that was really longgg!!!

i guess d starting is DIA'S (kushi's sis)pov😛am'i right??

i never expected a silent apology...still its really sweet."

You mean- you never get curious?

their discussions over books,family ... luv d way their friendship/re'ship is growing!

It's the eyes- always the eyes, with you- isn't it Mr. Raizada?-luved that

Shweta Singhania-who is she??i'm confused there😕

What could I do? He looked so goofy! --payal's thought on akash is really cute

finally akash & kushi's re'ship is d one i luv d most!!!

A biggg🤗for ur longgg update!!!

Absolute treat for d readers...

& also a small request "plz don't make us wait us dis long..."😃

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 14 years ago

#495

Moi too res!!! :D

<3

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Dia Gupta's POV, eh?? So she's in love with Aditya???
Hmm. . . . Nice development. . . But what is he trying to hide from her??!!

The whole breakfast scene was so homey, and domestic. . .
Arnav spilling the beans about the climax of the book, and Khushi's reaction to that was 😆
The way Khushi's hands itched to make another portrait of her hot hubby was so 😍. . .
Can't blame her, though!
Arnav Singh Raizada is a truly amazing muse, ain't he??!! 😉 ☺️
This was my favorite line in the whole update:
It's the eyes- always the eyes, with you- isn't it Mr. Raizada?

PayAsh encounter had to be the most mushy, and a little confused at the end. (At least on Akash's side!!😆)

And Khushi goading Akash to tell about Payal was cho cute too. . . . . 😳

Anjali!!! I felt so bad for her. . . . . . 😭
For once, when Shyam is a good character, he's suffering due to his rani sahiba's pain. . . . Poor guy... 😃

And Shweta Singhania??!!

Girl, you need to write soon, and answer so many questions of mine!!

Thanks for the update (Like, phinally!!😆) and for the PM!!! 🤗

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appy

@appy_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#496

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Lady, I swear! I don't think I'll ever wait like this even for my results! This was so bloody good!

So Dia Gupta loves Aditya.. Singhania?? Or is he Shweta Singhania's best friend's son, Aditya??

I could gather that much from this update!

And Gargee, I think before you became this beautiful writer, you were an avid reader.. Because you showed that part so well. Actually, the same thing happened with me.. My dad had confiscated all my novels two years back when I gave my boards!

And yes, Arnav.. You do scare her! Duh!

I couldn't agree more with Khushi.. It is always about the eyes.. Those beautiful eyes!

Love PayAsh! And Love Aakash-Khushi even more! Oh Poor Anjali.. Wow, Shyamu suffers here?? Hmm.. I had to rack my brains for imagining that! :P

In all, awesome story and i love the way you're going, Gargee! :)

Continue soon.. :)

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beccky

@beccky

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Posted: 14 years ago

#497

gud luck gargee... 🤗

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here i present you with the longest review...😳 and u are definitely gonna like it.. 😆

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looovvveeelllyyy Promissseddd

lllooonnnggg UPDATE... *sigh* 😆 😆 😆

okay.. i loved it Gargee.. thank you sooo much... 🤗🤗🤗

At the start.. its dia hai nah..? hai nah..?!... yes dats Dia... 😆

oh God but who is this Aditya.. did ya mention him at the start.. m i missing something...😕

and did Arnav told her to keep Dia with him... as she was anyway gng to run... 😕 😕

thinking too much i guess... 😆 .. tell us sooon ... no more suspense.. 😆

okay coming to "The breakfast" it was "The ammazing".. 😳

i loved it too the core.. you wrote it so nicely...👍🏼

i was actually Picturizing every minute details.. the way she says.. her expressions.. his smirks... oh his grin at the end... *sigh again*.. i just love the way you write it gal... Amazing..!!!

😍😍😍😍

and this...

Arnav : So you don't like it, but you're curious enough to read it?

this single line says too much... 😳

and then this again...

Khushi : You mean- you never get curious?

i can totally understand it... 😆 😆

Loved the way he unravels the mystery... ☺️ He too loves reading huh..🥳

nice addition to his character.. i already love him... ☺️☺️☺️ and you are making me love him more... ☺️☺️☺️ HOW temme HOW 😆 😆 😆

okay so coming back... i wanna see *him* when she finishes another of *His* paintings..

jumping up and down in excitement already... 😆.. see i m so desperate for the update already...😉 ..

okay whats with Shweta Singhania... i dont know her right.. do I...??!! 😕 😆

PAyaSh.. Already 😲... 😳 😳 😳 😆

Akash is sooo cute.. and Payal is sooo adorable...so different... unlike their characters in IPK..

i like them.. 😳

and Khushi-Aakash.. FRANDship... i m loving it too... 🥳

Another Twist... whats with Anjali and Shyam-not-the-creep-here 😆... confusion again...

A long update full of twists.. see i liiikkkeee it...

u better update it soon... or i'll die...😆

Gal... seriously m ready to bear everything and anything(dont get me wrong here) 😆😆😆...

its just that I m in love with your writing... ⭐️ 🤗

Do update soon...😛

beccky 😳

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#498

My place!😉

All the best Gargee.. My fav subject is chemistry no matter which branch that is!😛

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The update was bang! But you literally made my non-existent or ever lazing brain to wake up!!

Aditya? Swetha? Was it anywhere related to Dia?

Only thing I understood properly was Arnav - Kushi's part😉 I always love the unspoken comfortable part anywhere!😛 I loved when he ruined the suspense of the novel and her reactions to it! That was too good thinking!

Aakash - Payal!😆 Love is in air for them!

Aakash - Kushi!! 🤣 She shoved food in his mouth??😆 Cute bhabi - Devar!! Wonder what would be all possessive reaction on this!! He would be too adorable if he's jealous on this sight!

Thanks for the PM dear!

Edited by Sivaranjani - 14 years ago

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#499

I simply loved it! Read all d 8 chapters at one go n very happy dat finally i came across a so fresh n intrstng story..i enjoyed readin it a lot! Keep up d gud work n dnt 4gt to drop me a pm 😊

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#500

So excited Gargee!😃

R E S : )

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Okay so i had to read it twice and i think i got it, The beggining, The woman is saying 'Aditya', What the That bit i was plain confused on!😆 and still am, Wondering who and what they are and were doing :P🤣

Khushi, Arnav scene was beautifully written! Completely loved it, So amazing and cuute, Awww finally there comfortable with each other and i love how you wrote it, So cute and sweet!😳 Arnav is so cute, I can't believe he killed the novel for her!🤣 Although i was laughing at that bit, So cute, Locing this cute Arnav-Khushi relationship, Its so beautiful!👏

Payal and Akash scene was so cute aswell, Literally adored the bit where Khushi teased Akash, made me smile!😆

Finally the Anji-Shyaamu scene, Okay there im confused now. I thought they had a good relationship?😳

Update soon and thanks for the PM Gargee! : )

Edited by CHIKA784 - 14 years ago