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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's crazy how two strangers, all their lives living in a whole different world, with different set of values & different classes come together in a moment and become so much for each other. Come to mean so much to each other that when separated they struggle to breathe.

I never thought I'm one of those girls who dreamed of their mr. right, of being married to him with all their loved ones surrounding them, secretly watching each other with love & loyality spread in them.

I had never thought of these things, it was my jeevika di I had thought of, it was her happiness she had dreamed of, her sadness she dreaded. Her di was her life, her lifeline, her breathe.

It was she had heard of her di's impending marriage had she broken down, she had cried as if there was no tomorrow but after seeing her di with viren jiju had cleared all her doubts.

The way her di used to see her jiju with dreamy eyes like all the world had ceased to exist, it was only them together had she felt the happiness radiated from her di & she could see the care & comfort her jiju gave his di was when she had for a moment let herself to believe that yes, love between strangers did exist.

After that everything was merry in manvi's world, she was happy cause her di had met her match & her family was happy. Manvi was a mischievious person but she was mature enough to know when she had to do her masti.

There were many people in her di's sasural, she liked mostly all of them. there was dadaji, chachu & chachi, shlok their son, swamini bua ' she was strict but good when impressed, then there was her fave member of the family- her di's mother-in-law, she was the best, even manvi used to call her ma & she was treated like a spoilt daughter by her maa.

There was also her jiju's brother who was practicing law in London & supposedly was good at singing and dancing. He was to shift back to india in a week's time. Manvi could have cared less if he hadn't come atall to the wedding, she had never good relation with a guy to save her life. On the top of that that devar of her di's was to become her dance partner in all the functions of the wedding.

It was 1 week before the wedding that mr. virat vadhera showed his face to all his family members, he was to come 3 weeks prior to the wedding but due to some case in priority he didn't come early. Manvi chaudhary was angry oh whoever this virat vadhera thought of himself was.

If manvi had 1 thing in this whoe world then it was broken promises & her di's devar had done it. Without even seeing virat manvi ran out of the vadhera mansion in the garden facing the house, she wasn't angry she was furious.

"how could he that smug b******, what did he think of himself , coming here as if he were some king of sorts. Well he hadn't met manvi chaudhary yet'''."

And on she went filling virat with some of her colorful language.

it was sheer madness driving in Mumbai traffic after a flight of 8 hrs, man was he exhausted. It was his brothers wedding, he was shifting back to india, back to his beloved family. He had promisedhis brother that he would come 3 weeks before that wedding but some cases had come to the firm that only virat could've handled & so he was delayed. His bhai had also told him that his bhabhi's sister who was a bubbly little women(his brothers words) was a force to beckon with & was angry on him because he had broken his promise & they couldn't have practiced without him and also given the ultimatum that she wanted her partner changed if virat did not come in next 2 days.

Well he would go and see that fire cracker himself, he didn't think he would get bored in this wedding of his brothers.

As he entered the mansion he felt a breeze pass by him, he was going to turn around to see what was it when he felt himself engulfed by his family members.

His brother hugged him & then introduced his bhabhi to him. His bhabhi was so very beautiful & the wat his brother saw her with pride bought tears to his eyes, it was really a marriage made in heaven, it looked as if they were meant to be together & separated again & he vowed he would do everything within him to make sure that they are never separated.

Well now to meet that fire cracker of his.

The first thing he thought after seeing her was she angelic, she stood there with a bunch of red roses in her hands which were a moment ago given to her by shlok for helping him in his studies & her arms wide in the air.

Manvi let her hands down in a good mood now after cursing that vadhera & receiving a bunch of roses from shlok was walking out of the garden to the vadhera mansion when she heard a sultry but mischievious voice from behind her'.

"o meri bhabhi ki behna'.."

" tum kaun ho??? "

"main, tumhara hone wala pati'.."

"kya, pagal ho kya"

"mera matlab hai main hoon virat , tumhare jiju ka bhai'"

"accha toh tum ho mr. virat vadhera, ab time mil gaya aane ka tumhe aane ka, nahi nahi ab kyun aai ho rehte wahin London mein aur shadi ke baad aana than na, tum to bade jaldi aa gaye'."

" haan maine socha toh tha ki baad mein aau par wo kya hai na bhai ne call kiya aur bola ki agar main thoda late aata toh tumhe koi aur mil jata aur aisa toh mai hone nahi de sakta tha na'"

"kya''tu..tum sanki ho kya, tumhara pura parivaar toh thik thak hi lagta hai, sirf tum hi aise ho?"

"haan sirf main hi aisa hoon, kya karoon jab bhagwan ne hamari Jodi banayi thi tabhi mujhme official changes kar diye the warna main tumhe kaise jhelta, sochne ki baat hai"

"khair chodo , sochne ka department bhi bhagwan ne mujhe hi diya tha'tumhari koi galti nahi hai"

"hey you, tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho, haan.bade aaye. Ek to apne khud ke bhai ki shadi mein promise karke late aate ho aur aake help karna to door yaha dusron ko pareshan karte ho, sharam nahi aati tumhe'"

"hai 'main marjawan, tu to gusse mein bhi soni lagti hai aur waise bhi tujhse kya sharam aur to aur tumhe ye saab pata hona hi chahiye, shadi ke baad zyada problem nahi hogi."

"mr. virat vadhera tum apni haad se aage ja rahe ho, samjhe"

"soniyo, tumne meri haad ab tak dekhi kaha hai"

"shadi to hamari hokar hi rahegi"

"impossible"

Saying this manvi goes inside to help with the wedding preparations.

Their first metting was crazy & so were they both.

Bhai used to say that the first time he had seen manvi he knew that she was ment for me,born to fill the gap in my life & love me like there was no tomorrow.

He was not much of a flirt but a charmer?- anyday. It was her innocence & mischievious nature that attracted him to her. She was like no other girl he had ever met, she was down to earth, full of masti, mad was the word for her.

He was a flirt that's the first thing that came to her mind after first meeting him, a charmer of sorts. Crazy guy. Not arrogant but cute, not that she would ever tell him that, no need to blow his ego.

It was the caring guy in him that attracted her to him. Not that any guy like him would ever notice manvi chaudhary' that's what she had thought after first meeting him.

Who would have thought that virat vadhera would make true on his promise to marry her, manvi chaudhary. Crazy, ain't it?

After their siblings wedding & setting up his practice in vadheras law firm, virat had gone & done what no one in their right mind would ever do for 2 exceptional reasons asking manvi's hand for marriage from her family'.

One-fearing manvi chaudhary's wrath

Two-knowing manvi was not interested in marriage.

And as our ancestors used to say the rest is history and a story for some other time.


love ya,

vishruta😳


kaisa tha?? chalo batao jaldi!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it...sooo cute...do write more😊

love virat and manvi's convo... :D sooo VirManish!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...dat wz such a cheet n cute os...truly luvd n njoyd readin it...👏
luvd their convo a loot...ek cotta sa suggestion n a request too...knw itz n os...bt plz do cont it as a ff...would luv to read their furthr nok-jhoks during the marriage ceremonies n hw our bandariya wud fal 4 her chep...so plzzz...do cont ...
n pm me weneva u update or pendwn ur virman fantasies...thnx in advance...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww loved the convo betweent maanvi and virat. please do continue and pm if you do continue to write in the future :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow... Only 1 word... "MAST"
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!!👏 can u plz continue it wid some more parts?? I'd love to know Maanvi's reaction to the marriage-proposal.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start plz... do cont. and pm me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!!!!! Its osum do continue soon plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please please please please continue this is way to good please PM me when you update...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NICE N WAITNG 4 NEXT PART

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