Boy & the toy and sissy and puppy! Note updated!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Disclaimer: This is work of pure fiction and none of what is written right from this point on wards is true!!!!

Today I will tell you story influenced by Children of heaven and IPKKND.

Once there lived a boy and his sister whom he loved a lot and she also loved her brother a lot!!!

The brother and sister duo were all alone in this big bad world with no one!!!!! The boy was determined to take care of his sister and he started doing odd jobs like gardening and washing windows and giving cloths fro stitching and bringing them back and thus started earning a few pennies to provide for himself and sister and he felt good that he can provide for his sister and take care of her. As he loved her very much!!!

One day the sister took fancy to adorable looking puppy and so the boy got that puppy for her and it was really a cute and adorable thing and the boy also loved this puppy a lot.

The puppy used to go wherever the girl went and go round and round her feet and was totally devoted to her. But maintaining this puppy was costing them a lot, so the boy worked extra hard to get good and costly brownies for the puppy!!!

One day when the boy completed gardening in Garden of Eden and did some odd works for Mr GODOT along with money he gave a very pretty looking toy cum doll to the boy.

The toy cum doll was a very pretty thing but did not look very costly so the boy was not very happy with it. He secretly loved the toy. HE took the toy home and his sister also liked it and asked him to keep it he pretended to do it for his sister and was very happy to keep it!!!

He often looked at admired the toy cum doll and then when he realized what he was doing would push it to far end of his wardrobe!!!! He alternated between enjoying looking and playing with toy and pushing it away lest someone sees his admiration for such a toy!!!!

On the other hand the puppy now lost its interest in being devoted to the sister and started wandering off and on one of his wanderings he discovered the toy cum doll and he was really liked the toy cum doll and decided to play with it. One of the neighborhood man who was also the store owner from where the toy cum doll was originally bought tried to price it off the dog teeth and got bitten.

Now whenever the boy came the dog used to avoid using the toy cum doll. but one fine day the dog was meddling with toy cum doll and boy saw it. He was very angry'.very very angry. He decided to let it pass for the moment as he knew the sister loved the puppy and can't let it go. So he decided to show the toy cum doll and the puppy who is the master there.

He took the toy cum doll and threw it down a few times ripped of some of the paint it had and stamped it with his feet in anger. Then he felt very bad and spent time trying to repair the damage by guilty holding it.

He can't throw away the toy cum doll as he really likes it, He can't send the unfaithful puppy away as his sister likes it so that how the story goes!!! So he alternately remembers the nice moment he spent playing with toy cum doll and then puppy playing with the doll and then gets angry and throws the doll a little more.

To read more watch this space from Monday to Friday at 8:00 PM

PS version1 (This is for the story given above): There we many who know the boy and his sister and the doll cum toy (they believed in Animism and thought the doll cum toy had a soul!!!) and each liked one of them in its own way. When all this happened a few blamed the boy while few understood him. Few felt bad for the toy and fee felt the toy is inanimate so there was no need o t worry and many hated the puppy and couldn't understand its fascination for costly brownies or the toy cum doll

and a few decided to blame the manufactures of the Toy cum doll and Mr Godot!!!

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PS2: I will not be updating it so why waste your time here please if you have TV switch to Star Plus and if its internet you have go to https://www.startv.in/channels.asp?channel_id=1

The CVS are giving such a track and actors working like hell just for the TRPs so at least let it increase!!!!

PPS: My intention is not to hurt anybody sentiment. So those decide to get hurt by this piece of ree(a)l fiction please ignore me!!!



Would love your comments!!!! and likes (Ducks behind the wall to avoid rotten tomatoes and stones and brick bats!!!!)



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Posted: 13 years ago
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HaHa!! What a post!😃
On a more serious note, I remember that you were one of the most calm persons on this forum for a very long time. I read your posts where you supported the CV's umpteen number of times.
Your frustration is a sure sign of this senseless and never ending track.
I still can't understand how people are enjoying the track.😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UBR,
I totally understand, why you wanted to post this. I am with you on this one.
Rgds
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i think the boy should neuter the puppy, and keep the doll cum toy on a very very high shelf that only the boy can reach.. or find his sister a cuter, cuddlier puppy and send the old puppy to a shelter. Then he should repair the doll and then they can all be a happy family.

worst case scenario, give teh doll to the puppy and and drop them both far far far away from home where the puppy wouldn't know what to do with the doll, since he cant have brownies or nice dog treats.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What a post.. I salute you for this.. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: trs21

HaHa!! What a post!😃
On a more serious note, I remember that you were one of the most calm persons on this forum for a very long time. I read your posts where you supported the CV's umpteen number of times.
Your frustration is a sure sign of this senseless and never ending track.
I still can't understand how people are enjoying the track.😕


AWWW thank you!!!! anybody else seeing my ran would have decided i am impatient but you are right there are many a times when i supported CVs!!! but now i am at me tethers end!!!

Originally posted by: stafhtad

UBR,

I totally understand, why you wanted to post this. I am with you on this one.
Rgds


Thank you so mucH...anything more you want to add to the story you are welcome!!

pssst: I absolutely love your long rants!!!

Originally posted by: serialjunkie

i think the boy should neuter the puppy, and keep the doll cum toy on a very very high shelf that only the boy can reach.. or find his sister a cuter, cuddlier puppy and send the old puppy to a shelter. Then he should repair the doll and then they can all be a happy family.

worst case scenario, give teh doll to the puppy and and drop them both far far far away from home where the puppy wouldn't know what to do with the doll, since he cant have brownies or nice dog treats.


Thanks darling SJ...a very sensible suggestion but would the boy do that???? would the puppy and sissy agree????
What would Mr Godot and toy manufacturers say!!!!! Won't neighborhood (audience) people withdraw their support!!!!

I wonder!!! Thank once again!!!

@ Greenarrow!!!! ah!!!! thank you so much!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it Rima. And I can absolutely see why you wrote this one... It's wonderfully written and with my limited imagination there's nothing much I can add in here😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww thats all I can say...I have to say that you emoted this very very well...I wish I could be this calm but right now as you know dear am raving mad :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sree, That Was Amazing !!!! Truly.⭐️

You sketched the analogies so so well.

But what a coincidence, I just finished downloading "Baran" by the director of Children of Heaven and there comes your post !!

It is OUR wavelengths that match. Mind considering that Holy Matrimony thing ?? 😳 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: evenjleena28

Wowww thats all I can say...I have to say that you emoted this very very well...I wish I could be this calm but right now as you know dear am raving mad :(


pssst even i am raving mad dear!!!! only you can't see it as in madness i can't even string two words together!!!
I am totally frustrated as to why i am still watching it!!!
ha ha ha!!!!

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