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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ff dear,just read it in one go beautiful writting
just loved the bond betwwen maaneet,u portrait different geet in ur ff
shez naive at the same time brave like lioness
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awesome thank gd she saved herself
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PART 34


Maan kept Geet's diary after reading her feelings till yesterday & kept it back.Geet was still sleeping peacefully who was smiling in her sleep.Geet's face was covered with a strands of hair which was disturbing her sleep & she was frowning in her sleep.Maan came & took the strands of hair from her face & pinned it behind her ear.She smiled feeling comfortable in her sleep.Maan stroked his fingers on her hair which was silky soft & she cuddled up feeling comfortable.She was feeling Maan's closeness in the sleep also.



Maan smiled seeing Geet's smiling face & kissed her forehead softly.Maan said to Geet while she was sleeping,"Mein tumhe kabhi aanch nahi aane doonga Geet.I love you so much."And he exited her room immediately.Maan came to his room & dialled to his private detective.The detective answered his phone.Maan said with attitude,"Mr.Adhikari,mujhe ek aadmi ke baare mein jaankaari chahiye..."


Adhikari said politely,"Sure sir,kya naam hai unka..."Maan said,"Darasal woh dilli ka nahi hai woh Hoshiarpur se hai...Uska naam hai Vikram...iske alaaava mujhe aur kuch pata nahi lekin uska rishta Hoshiarpur ke Sukhdev Lala Handa ka rishtedaar hai...I want his full information...kaha jaatha hai,kis tarah ka insaan hai,kya kartha hai...uski poori kundali mujhe chahiye..."Adhikari said politely,"Sure sir...u don't worry..."



Next morning Maan insisted Geet to go with shopping with dadimaa & Naintara so that she'll be distracted.Becoz she was feeling awkward & she asking so many questions after she came to know that she had drink bhaang yesterday.Maan didn't want her to be once again depressed.




Dadimaa was amazed that Maan was insisting to take Geet for shopping & she shopped for their engagement.Geet was fussing over in the mall seeing the accessories price.But dadimaa didn't made her to be fussed & she bought everything which was her favourite while Maan came to know abt Vikram fully from the private detective.Geet was feeling awkward seeing dadimaa pamper her as khurana's would be bahu & she dialled to her mother to pour her heart out to her.



Rano took the phone & said,"Hello."Geet said crying,"Maa,I can't do this role.Maan once again made me to break my principles.Mein yeh naatak nahi karsakthi dadimaa ke saamne...I can't take it anymore...he's telling lies to dadimaa to save her.And dadimaa bahut khush hai ki mein Maan ki mangetar hoon..."Rano was shocked & said,"Yeh kya bol rahi hai?Tu toh Maan ke liye ek jeevan saathi dhood rahi thi na...aur woh bhi jhooti..."



Geet said sadly,"Haan maa lekin woh ladki hume dhoka dediya ek khat like kar ki woh jaanthi hai ki mein Maan se pyaar karthi hoon.She reade that in my diary when she was close to us.Then I've to become his fake fiancee forcefully.Kyunki humaare paas aur koi chaara nahi tha aur Maan ko shak hogaya ki mein unse college se hi pyaar karthi hoon isiliye usse jhoota sabith karne ke liye meine unki jhooti mangetar ka naatak kar rahi hoon lekin ab dadimaa ki khushi dekh kar mujhe dar lag raha hai.Meine apne aapko unse bahut door rakhne ki koshsish ki par nahi kar paa rahi hoon.Meine apne ateet ke baare mein sab sach bataadiya dadimaa ko yeh soch kar ki woh mujhe reject kar degi aur mein free hojaungi lekin...dadimaa mujhe yeh advice dediya ki ateet mein rehne se koi faida nahi..."



Rano smiled at cute complaint but said softly,"Lekin beta tu kyun sach chupa rahi ho?Why r y burning urself inside that accuse?U know that he's opening his heart to u & is sure that he'll understand u dear.Why r u burning urself in that hell dear?Pls come out of it,I can't see u suffer anymore.Look you'd got permission from Darji that ur choice of boy will be his & our choice.Am sure that Maan misunderstood u that time but he'll not misunderstand u all the time.He's matured dear & he knows his limits & this world.He'll understand u dear,just confess the love to him.Apna dil halka kar de beta uske saamne...tu uski result ke baare mat soch aur jo karo jo meine ab kiaha hai beta..."



Geet said fearfully,"If he misunderstands me once again then what I do maa?"Rano said warmly,"Then u come to me immediately & we'll think abt that further discussing with ur father dear.Don't worry dear,you're not alone,hum sab tumhaare saath hai..."Geet felt peace hearing her mother's words & said wiping her tears,"Ji maa."And she disconnected the phone immediately.



Geet decided to confess her feelings to Maan.Geet walked towards the mansion to confess her feelings to Maan but before she talk to him.Someone held her from behind from her neck & said huskily which made her afraid,"Surprise!!!"On that time Geet freed herself & saw the man who held her & shouted,"Maan..."And she ran into his room.Maan was alarmed to see panice Geet running towards him & said,"Geet..."



Geet ran & hugged him tightly & said,"Mujhe usse bachaalo woh mujhe nahi chodega...mujhe bachaalo..."She held him tight.Maan was shocked to see the scared Geet & said hugging back,"Calm down Geet...kaun hai woh batavo...batavo kaun tumhe pareshan kar raha hai..."On that time Naintara ran inside Maan's room & said,"Veerji...woh dadimaa..."Maan & Dev who were trying to soothe the panic Geet asked with panic in unison,"Kya huva dadimaa..."Naintara was abt to faint but Dev held her but she said before fainting,"Woh aadmi ne dadimaa ko pakadke rakah hai neeche hall mein..."



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Geet was panic & ran into the hall immediately while Maan & Dev followed her making Naintara sleep on his bed.Geet saw the scared dadimaa who was standing in the gun point of Vikram.



Geet said panic,"No dadimaa ko chod do..."On that time Maan & Dev came there & asked angrily,"Who r u?Tum ander kaise aagaye...guards..."Vikram answered laughing manically,"Tumhaare ghar ke guards toh choohe hai mere saamne...sab log behosh pade hai baahar...Mera naam hai Vikram...mein Geet ki cousin hoon aur uski mangetar..."



He saw her lustfully.Then he grabbed Geet immediately pushing dadimaa.Maan came forward & caught dadimaa before she falls...Vikram held Geet from her neck & licked her face shamelessly & she shuddered with his touch in front of Maan.Maan's lips tightened & anger started to circulate in his veins.Geet said breathlessly,"Look you want me then,leave them as they're no concern of u."Vikram said laughing maniacaaly,"Yeah baby I want you very much as u're so much beautiful.But let me kill this present fiancee of u."And he pointed the gun towards Maan.On that time driver ran silently & phoned up to the area police station who had recognised the man from the hotel.Geet said shockingly,"No,don't do that what he has done to u that u've decided to kill him."



Vikram said laughing maniacally,"Yeah baby,he hasn't done to u anything becoz I am the one who have to taste ur beauty & relish it & after that he can do anything with you.I won't mind abt that anymore after tasting u."Maan gave a disgusting look to him & said,"You will feel my wrath if u see her like that..."And he came forward on that time Vikram shot him & the bullet scratched his shoulder & Geet said,'No'.And then anger went through her venis & she bit his hands powerfully till the blood oozes from Vikram's hands.



Vikram screamed with pain & left her & she ran towards Maan who had held his shoulder & was writhing with pain.Geet saw that pain & anger coursed in her veins & she went & kicked Vikram & twisted her hands & said,"Bahut shock haina tumhe doosron ko barbaad karne ka...meine galathi ki us din tumhe chod kar...tum kisi ke daya ka bhi laayak nahi ho...and she held his hand twisting it while



He pushed her powerfully & pointed the gun to dadimaa & shot her.Before the bullet pierce dadimaa someone had came between dadimaa & bullet.The bullet pierced the woman into her stomach & it was Geet Handa.Maan shouted,"Geet..."And Vikram stood there shocked to see Geet who writhed with pain holding her stomack.Blood started to ooze out from her stomach & she was abt to collapse but was caught by strong arms.




Geet said fainting,"Maan,don't blame urself that this ur fault.This not ur fault..."And she fainted immediately.On that time police came & arrested Vikram & they called ambulance to take Geet to the hospital.Maan was still holding Geet rubbing her hand in the ambulance,"Geet aankhen kholo Geet...dekho mein apne aapko guilty mehssos nahi karoonga...sirf ek baar aankhen khol kar mera naam bolo...Geet..."



Maan was so panic & he was in that state as if his heart has stopped to beat.He wasn't giving attention to his wound but was scared to His Geet there like that.She wasn't responding him or opening her eyes also.He was scared of losing her & hadn't any strength to lose her anymore.From 5 yrs he had suffered the guilt that becoz of him that she died in an accident teill he saw her 5 months ago.


Doctors took her opertion theatre as Vicky came there hurriedly as dadimaa informed him abt this incident.Maan didn't gave permission dadimaa to come to the hospital as Naintara was unconcious.Vicky understood his mind state but he consoled Maan as he's his bro.Rajji ran to the hospital to see Geet & came to know that she's in OT.



She met Pinky who was crying in the corner continously.When she came to know that Geet has been shot hen her heart has stopped beating.Geet's friends & Adi had came there after getting news from Pinky.Vicky consoled Rajji as she was broken down seeing her sister in that state.After 3 hrs of operation & surgery,doctor came & told them that she's out of danger & can be shifted to ward.On that time Geet's family came there & heard good news.Everyone was happy hearing the news & Maan ran to see her without asking anyone's permission.



Geet was still in sedatives & her face was sour.Maan came there & sat beside her & held her hand & kissed it softly closing his eyes.Tears poured down from hias eyes & when he touched her hand feeling it then Geet's eyes moved slightly.She felt his cold lips which was kissing her hand as if no tomorrow.She slowly opened her eyes & saw the person who was sitting beside her.When her fingers moved then Maan looked up & saw her smiling broadly as she opened her eyes.When she saw Maan then she muffled immediately,"Dadimaa kaisi hai...?"Maan smiled at her concern & said,"Don't stress urself,she's alright...Kya zaroorat thi apne zindagi ko jokhar mein daalneki...???"


Precap-Maan is becoming possessive of Geet.😉


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww Geet got shot trying to save Daadima...

Vikram himself came in front and now caught by police...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
kya yaar maan ney to vikram ko kuch nahi kiya
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PART 35


Geet searched for dadimaa & asked meekly,"Dadimaa kahan hai?"Maan answered firmly,"Geet tumhe dadimaa ke baare mein phikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.she's in home & fine.Don't stress urself."Geet said meekly,"Aap meri baath samjh nahi rahe hai...woh bahut khatarnaak hai...woh kisiko bhi kuch bhi kar saktha hai...woh Vikram apna kaam karwane ke liye kis had thak bhi woh jaa saktha hai..."Maan said calmly,"Geet,philhaal abhi keliye uske baare mein chinta karna chod do,kyunki woh police mein pakda gaya hai..."


Geet was happy that Vikram was captured by police.Daarji who had entered the ward was panic & asked worriedly,"Geet,woh Vikram yahan bhi aaya tha kya???"Geet nodded meekly.She tried to get up but couldn't but Maan heldher & helped her to sit back.He kept more pillows around her wound & made her to sit more comfortably.Geet said meekly,"Darji,yeh Maan hai mere KC boss."


Darji saw Maan & said smiling,"Nice to meet u young man."Maan was amazed that he was talking in english but Geet answered his questioning look,"He's graduate in Agriculture subject..."Geet smiled at Maan warmly.Darji continued,"Thank you for saving my grand daughter Mr...!!!"Maan said with attittude,"Maan...Maan Singh Khurana..."Darji nodded & said,"Yeah...Mr.Khurana...humare wajah se aapke ghar mein ashanti phel gayi uske liye humein maaf kardijiye..."



Maan was a bit awakward but said warmly,"It's ok sir...bhavishya ko hum kaise jaan sakthe hain...isme aapki koi galathi nahi...mein Geet ke boss se zyaada unka achcha dost hoon...unke liye toh apni jaan kurbaani deni padi toh mein peeche nahi hatunga..."Geet was amazed while Maan continued,"Inhone meri dadi ko bachaya hai aur woh ek baar nahi baar baar bachaya hai...toh unke liye hum kuch bhi kare woh kam hi hai..."Darji said proudly,"Woh aisi hi hai...meri poti hai..."Rano was crying silently seeing her daughter's state.



Geet said smiling sweetly at her mother,"Kya baat hai maa aap kis liye ro rahi hain...oh ab samjhi abhi tak nahin gayi hoona upar woh kya hai ki mein agle 20 sall thak aapko chod kar nahi jaane wali...kyunki aapki boy friend se toh milna hai..."Rano wacked her head immediately & said,"Chup kar...har waqt mazaak mazaak mazaak..."Geet said rubbing her head,"Ah...dheere...agar aise hi maarogi na toh mein phir se behosh ho jaungi..."Maan said glaring at her,"Aisa sochna bhi mat...nahin toh tumhaare dusht daanav ban jaungi...pata hai jab tum behosh thi tab mera kaisa haal huva tha...aisa laga ki mera jaan jaa kar waapas aaya hai."



Geet was amazed with his anger but she cleared her throat as everyone seeing him curiously.Doctor came there to change the awkward sitaution.Doctor examined her & said she's fine but she needs a lot of rest as she has lost so much of blood.So everyone were relieved & Rano decided to stay back beside Geet while Geet's family went to stay with Manchanda's.Geet insisted Maan to go home but Maan refused pointedly saying that it would be better that he would stay with them.Rano was happy seeing Maan who was so concerned abt her daughter & prayed to babaji that their differences will be destroyed very soon.Geet's family knew abt Maan but they didn't see him so today they saw him.



Darji was impressed seeing the handsome man who's polite & cares for his grand daughter.He had decided that Maan will become his granson-in-law but he was also worried abt Geet.Becoz it was his fault that he took hasty decision in case of Vikram which made Geet to be quiet from abt 1 month.But this time he saw a strange twinkle in Geet's eyes for Maan.When Maan was scolding her for saying some waste words to her mother then he also felt that Maan loves Geet.



Though what happened in their past which is no concern to them & he can give approval for this relation.Darji knew everything abt Khurana as Geet had told them clearly.Darji wanted to ask the opinion of Maan's dadimaa who was head of the family.Darji was a bit hesitant that though Maan's dadimaa was fully modern but then also she'll be having her own principles which he have to listen.Darji had broken Geet's heart once taking hasty decision in case marraige & was a bit reluctant to not hearing no from Maan's dadimaa.



Firstly Darji decided of tell the truth abt her past & then only he can hear her decision.Darji was scared to hear no from Maan'd dadimaa becoz of him only Geet's future was destroyed.He chose a wrong man & it is affecting her till now also.But then only he decided to talk to Maan before he ask his dadimaa becoz he's the one who'e gonna marry Geet & spend the life with her till the death.So darji decided to talk to Maan directly.



Here Maan was awed seeing Darji that though he was the leader but then also he didn't had any attitude.He thought that seeing Geet's behaviour that her Darji is strict abt principles.He thought that Darji gonna blast at her for hurting herself but he didn't know that he's so cool.Darji was never strict person,he wanted that everyone be happy & that's why he had built some of the principles in his mind.He never forced others to follow his principles but the Geet's environment made her to struck in his principles.


In the hospital,after sometime everyone went one by one to their home seeing Geet safe & sound but Maan was still sitting there only as he's not going to leave his life there alone.Geet saw the fear in his eyes & said trying to calm him,"Maan,aapko meri chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi...mein thik hoon...ghar mein dadimaa akeli hongi unke saath aapko rehna hoga..."Maan said firmly,"Ghar mein Dev aur Vicky hai dadimaa ko dekhne ke liye...tumhe unki chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi...ab so jao tumhe aaraam karna chahiye..."



Geet was abt to argue further but he kept his finger on her lips & said warmly,"Don't worry abt me I'll be alright."She felt her lips burn with his simple touch & Maan also felt like her only & he left her lips immediately.He helped her sleep on the bed & left the ward.



Rano who had gone to the bathroom saw Maan's concern & was happy.Rano's eyes welled up & smiled with happiness at Geet.Geet asked,"Aap has kyun rahi ho?"Rano sat beside her & kissed her forehead & said,"Kya tumne Maan ko apni dil ki baat bataadi?"Geet nodded no immediately & said meekly,"Baat karne hi wali thi lekin yeh sab kuch hogaya..."Rano was a bit disappointed but said,"Bahut jald batado kyunki mujhe yahi chahiye daamad ke roop mein..."



Geet saw her mother with amazement & she opened her mouth slightly...Rano said seeing her daughter's surprise smiling,"Moo band karo nahin toh makhi ghoos jaayegi..."Geet closed her mouth immediately.Rano said smiling,"Geet am happy for u both...zyaada der mat karo..."Rano peered outside the ward & saw Maan who was asleep on the chair peacefully.


Days went & Geet started to recover.Darji had talked abt Geet to dadimaa abt Geet & Maan's relationship.Dadimaa was happy hearing abt this from darji.Dadimaa was very much impressed abt Geet becoz Geet had told abt her past without any hesitation.Dadimaa was very much impressed that she liked this behaviour of Geet as she had told everything abt her past without any hesitation.Dadimaa liked this character becoz Maan only liked truth telling persons at any cost.



After this incident Darji was happy that Geet didn't kept dadimaa in the dark & had said everything to her.Darji was happy & had decided to forward the relationship & perform the engagemnt between them.Darji was happy that Geet had got a very good family where they love Geet unconditionally.



Maan wanted to know Geet's decision abt this matter & took a month time as Geet have to recover & have to make her comfortable with him like in the college.Geet was perfectly normal after few days & decided to go & live with Pinky but Maan made a way to stop her back in the outhouse only.



Geet started to go to office but a dangerous news had reached Maan that Vikram had escaped from the jail.Maan was so tensed & had et up a security behind Geet without knowing her & was always with her as her shadow.Geet was amazed seeing the changed Maan who was concerned abt her & was always accompanying wherever she goes which made Sasha furious.Maan had warned strictly her to take the security with her wherever she goes.



Geet thought that Maan is acting weirdly after that icncident as if he owns her.She also felt that Maan also loves her very much like she loves him selflessly.Maan was always angry whenever she left the security & went alone.One day Geet went alone without the security...


PRECAP-Geet to Vikram-no one si there to save me from u but no one is also there to save u from me...do u forgot my punch...or shall i give u a demo??


PREVIOUS PART 34-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2884605/jeevan-sangini-thread-2


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent ... both the parts are great...
precap sounds very interesting...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome updates
love the way Geet conforted Vikram when he shot Maan
So they are getting engaged but did she confessed to Maan about her love?
Oh precap is exciting
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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awesome update
precap sounds very intresting
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awesome part dear...
precap is very intersting ...
continue soon...

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