so this update will be in 2 parts since we are doing it after a while and the scenes cannot fit in one post and we wrote lots of scenes as well.
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Shivani Loji
loji-Manyata felt so touchy by that ... she said u write this for me meri halkat veda... he said yes meri princess u know i was missing this ... she said u know when i be with u i be my self and u love me when i was not a princess u love me the way i was .. and u know i start love u from the first time but was fighting my feels...uv come closer and closer .. he put his hand on manyata's waist and said and why ?? manyata felt shy and she is not looking at him uv slowly made her look at him now eyelook and he said why u do that ?? manyata felt that the time is stop she never want this moment to end ... she said u know u was rich and i always hate those rich people coz they don't take care of people but u change my idea and am so happy that u r my sec half .. uv slowly kissed her on her cheek then she closed her eyes and she felt his breath now ...
shivani-awww too cute
manatya's eyes are closed and uv hugs manatya tightly. Both of them just enjoying the moment with their eyes closed n thinking about each other. they hug for 5 minutes and uv tells manatya it's time to go but manatya is still hugging uv n is not letting him so so uv picks manatya up and starts walking. manatya smiles to herself n blushes. Uv asks her why is she blushing? manatya it's because of u uv u always understand what i want n when i want ti. u r a blessing sent from god only for me. uv gets emotional n tells manatya i love u my princess n on this valentines day i want to confess. manatya gets scared n asks uv to put her down. uv stops n puts manatya down. manatya puts her hand on uv's face n asks him what confession? uv tells her i knew from the beginning that u were my princess because of the mark on ur back. i saw it the night at the club where i teased u n flirted with u. manatya smiles n asks him sooo a prince regonized his princesss thats gud naaa. uv yes it is but i just wanted to tell u everything about me so here i am prince udayveer of jaigarh n i am the princess manatya oopppsss... mrs.udayveer. both of them share a smile and walks to the boat. manveer reach the palace at night but uv insists on a dance since he wants to end the valentines on a gud note specially when it's manveer's first one. manatya gives in n uv takes her to the beach. both of them share a dance on pheli nazar... uv turns slow dance with manatya n turns her around couple of times and both of them have eyelock. for few minutes they just look at each other with love in their eyes. manatya smiles n uv blushes. uv asks manatya to close her eyes. manatya says ok...uv bows down n takes out a ring. manatya opens her eyes n is suprised, tears rolls down her eyes. she hugs uv tightly and firewors starts in the sky. manatya looks up n then at uv. as uv is writting i love u manatya with his finger pointing to the sky the fireworks spelll that as welll. manatya is hold uv's hand tightly and watches the fireworks for few minutes. Uv puts the ring in manatya's finger and manatya kisses him. fireworks in the background n uday lifts manatya up n turns her around couple of times. manveer sharing a smiling n a ballon shows up saying happy valentines day.
loji-omggg i really loved it so charming i tell u ...
it was so late so uv told manyata they have to leave ... manyata agreed as she didn't want her mam to be worried ... they arrived the palace .. j was there.. manveer holding hands...j saw him and she was burned .. she told uv that her father wants him in the office fast .. manyata said ok will wait for u .. uv left for the office .. uv there but b was not there ... he wondered why j lied .. then when he wanted to leave to see manyata and told her good night he just found j in the door and the door is closed ... he said what is happening j ... j said why u spend vd with that JQ .. uv said j u have to move on u know am in love with manyata .. j came near and hit him while she is crying and said no u don't love her u love me only ... uv said j stop it and he through her out and said next time don't do something cheep like that .. uv in manyata's room he saw her about to sleep ..she said what is the matter ??.. uv said u don't worry i will handle everything ..Helped her to lie down on her bed and covered by the blanket and slowly he kissed her in her forehead and said good night my sweet princess
shivani-uv is leaving and jay shows up again n confronts uv. uv gets mad n pushes jay away n leaves. manatya sees this from upstairs and calls uv outloud. uv stops and heis suprised but he gives mnatya a smile. manatya comes running down the stairs n pushes jay aside. as manatya is running towards uv, uv lifts manatya up n turns her around n both of them smile. manatya's hair is in a bun but she gives jay a smile to jay n winks at her n lets her hair open(which blocks the view) n kisses uv. jay is catches it n starts to leave. uv brings manatya down n manatya tells jay to stop. uv smiles as he is watching manatya walking toward jay, she whishpers in jay's ears that u can do whatever u want to get uv but u will never get uv not even in ur dreams n whatever i did today is a big proof that uv n manatya are made for each other so stop n stop this childish act. now wait n watch princess jaynandini u played ur games but now it's my turn no one messed with me or my uv n gets away easily. till now i never took u seriosuly actually never will. jay is leaving n manatya holds her hand. uv walks upto manatya n tells manatya bechari she did all the tricks to get uv but i belong with manatya. he hold manatya by her waist n kisses on her cheek. jay angrily tells uv can u stop this? i cannot tolerate this luv-shuv of urs. manveer smiles n manatya replies jay u r my little sister n after all i have responsibilities towards u just wait n watch. uv kisses manatya gudbye infront of jay n uv waves vye n calls jay his saali. jay gets mad n manatya just gives her a look n goes to her bedroom. jay is left all alone n she is furious .
loji-poor J..vb showed ... he came near J and said u have to forget him... i tell u .. j gave him and angry look and said never he gonna be mine and mine only and she left from there .. VB ohhh poor j u don't know that manveer is more stronger than u can destroy.. then he saw unniti came to the palace ..VB winked to her and said ohh my princess is here ..unniti felt like omggg what is going on now silently ... unniti said ohh vb i need to talk to mnayat and my brother is waiting for me ..vb said oh u broke my heart i thought u here for me ... unniti smiled and said ok bye .. vb said ok bye ... unniti came to manyata's room and telling her that they will go for a trip tomorrow will she join them .. manyata said ya sure .is uv coming with us ? unniti said no he is so busy so u came or not .. manyata said ohh she felt low but she told unniti that she gonna join them for sure .. then unniti said ok bye cya ...unniti left then manyata looked down she saw uv there waiting for unniti she keep looking at him and suddenly he looked up and saw he he smiled to her .. then he send a fly kiss to her to catch it and send him another one back .. then he left ... manyata couldn't sleep as she always got kissed by udayveer before she sleeps ... she finally slept but she felt that uv really kissed her in her forehead and told her good night my princess ... uv was there seeing his princess he smiled ..then he be down ..in the car unniti asked him why u went back.. he said this is love unniti and u gonna know it soon i hope and he winked at her.
shivani-tooo gud loji brilliant specially the last part where uv winks haiii uv is soo hot ok nvm i need to concentrate on scenes now getting distracted by uv is noo good actually it is but i am gonna continue without dreaming about uv(i blame u for the distracting me )manatya wakes up and she smells uv's perfume n smiles. uv is sleeping and thinking about manatya n he recieves a text saying i know it was u uv sweet dreams n i love u. uv smiles n thinks to himself i never even imagines that i would get the most amazing person like manatya in my life and smiles again. both of them staring at the moon n remembering each other uv text back love u too mrs.udayveer. manatya blushes n replies hain nahin toh... n manver says the hain nahin toh again admiring the moon n smiling.
loji-omggg now am dreaming of them ,,, awesome and amazing one .. short but all dreamyyy...camera still showing them watching the moon manyata once and uv once ... both r dreaming about what happen in vday .. how lucky they r coz they have each other .. both pray that both be together ever and for ever .. both said i love u in the same time uv said i love u miss haan nahi toh and manyata said i love u meri halkat veda .. both feeling shy and really blessed and so adorable ... (yaar be in manveer dreamland will never be off .. am still dreaming).
shivani-next day manatya wakes up and she recieves a call from akash at first she is suprised on why did akash called her in the morning but she checks her phone n she has 3 missed calls from akash so she calls akash back. akash is happy and tells manatya that ur my bff chikki loved the idea uv gave me so i want to do something for u guys. manatya is happy for akash n tells him that it's not needed but akash keeps on insisting on doing double date dinner. akash with chiiki n uv with manatya at first manatya has her doubts but she gives in n akash tells her to come at the restaurant by 8 n thanks her once more n then hangs up. uv calls manatya to say gud morning and manatya tells uv about akash's plan for tonight. uv is pleased n tells manatya u did the right thing princess bechara akash ke paas bahut mushkil se pyaar aya hain toh celebration toh banta hi naa. manatya and uv smiles at each other n hugs. manatya calls chikki and tells her baout the plans. chikki says yeah i know but what should i wear? manatya laughs n then tells her that we will do shopping, eating n a total girls day out no boys allowed. chikki gets happy n says ok sure meet me at the mall. manatya hangs up. right then uv shows up as a suprise n manatya hugs him tightly n whispers sorry in his ears. uv asks her for what? manatya makes a sad puppy face n tells him about her plans with chikki. uv makes a sad face but manatya convinces him. chalo mere rajkumar don't be sad now look chikki needs me waise bhi i am bored of staying with u all the time toh mujhe bhi break chahiye naa.uv hold manatya tightly n brings her closer. uv- toh acchaa tumhe humari company bilkul pasand nahin. manatya looks at him n then down n looks up she grabs uv's shirt n tells him maine toh aisa nahin kaha... uv- toh phir kya irada hain( whats on ur mind?) manatya looks at him for a moment n winks. uv smiles n tells manatya- kya matlaab... manatya- kuch nahin bas flirt kar rahi thi but u r too gud soo i give up waise bhi ab toh tum mere husband hone wale ho toh yeh bf/gf wala rishte ko enjoy karna chahite hoon before we get married. uv tells manatya toh phir chalooo... goaa...manatya jumps in joy and asks uv if it's for real... uv nods his head n tells her yeah they are going to get... uv stops midway n tells manatya it's a suprise for her. manatay keeps asking uv but he just kisses manatya gudbye n leaves... see u tonight princesss... akash calls manveer to make sure they are leaving on them. everybody arrives at the resturant. chikki in blue sari with akash they come holding hands. manveer comes in uday in a white shirt n blue jeans and manatya in skinny jeans with a dressy top. both couples enjoy the dinner with laughter and smiles. after the dinner the couples do a dance on tum mile...chikki n akash lost in each other n manveer lost in each other. after the dance the couples wave to each gudnight manatya n chikki hugs and akash n uday shakes hands n the couples leave.
loji-then manveer be alone ... uv drove manyata till the palace ... in the gate manyata about to leave as she was angry that uv didn't talk and never mentioned anything ...uv hold manyata's hand and he brought her closer and closer ... manyata smiled and didn't turn uv be so close and whispered in her ear and told her u just wanna go like that ... manyata turned and now manveer eyelook ... manyata said u didn't tell me why we r going to goaa?? ... uv made her closer and said why u thinking of that right now we have something else to think about now?..manyata blushed and asked like what?? uv came closer now manyata can feel his breath near her cheek ..he whispered like have a kiss from u my princess ... manyata closed her eyes ..uv kissed her in her cheek slowly... then he was about to ...jijiii... uv Cursing in a low voice and moved step back from manyata ..manyata opened her eyes and slowly turned to see j standing there .. uv gave an angry look ... he hold manyata's hand and walked forward ... manyata said yes j andu still waked ??.. J looked like she will cry now and said yes jiji ... and u have to go in as it's so cold ...manyata said u start caring so much for me ... manyata said to uv come inside .. uv said u go i will follow u as i have to talked to j ... j smiled ... manyata said don't be late .. and she smiled to uv ... after manyata left uv came close to j and said if u do this again i promise u will hate the day u saw me ...
shivani-Jay is scared and has tears in her eyes. Uv tells jay that I know whatever u did was a plan but listen to me once n carefully me and manatya belong together n now no one will keep us apart n jay u know me too well to play this childish plans so plz mind ur own business or u know what will happen naa...(uv puts his hands on her cheek n tells jay be a good girl hain nahin toh(smiles) n leaves.Jay standing there n burst into tears n today she realized that uv belongs to manatya only but she stands up n tells herself uv I am not going to give up on u n walks away.Uv enters the room n manayta is waiting fir him n asks him what took him soo long uv replies bas ur sis never understands that we belong together so I was explaining. Oh god... uv jay is just nuts about u n i have stopped taking her seriously bas we need to watch out from her.
loji-uv come closer and said let's forget this j and continu what we were doing .. manyata blushed and run and said no first tell me why we r going to goaa... uv looked at her Lazily and said come on princess i will tell u but and he start running to catch her but manyats be faster and after a while he caught her ...uv said now u will not scape ... manyata said leave me uv ... uv said never now tell me u love me .. manayat looked at him and said i hate u . tell me why we r going to goaa... uv said ..ohh princess it's a surprise will not tell u now .. manayat said then good night ...she freed her self .. uv said princess don't be like kids ..then he found an idea .. he said i will tell u but u have to do something for me first .. manayat said what ?? uv come closer and closer .. he said u know what i want now right ??.. manyata blushed and said u will tell me right ??..uv said of courseee my princess ... manyata looked at him manveer eye look ..then uv said am waiting my princess
Edited by Miss.Colorfull - 13 years ago
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