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<font color="#cc0033">UPDATE: i have changed the title of this thread to manveer day dreamers since me n loji daydream all the time when we r writting the scenes so i think it goes perfect as a title of this thread.</font>
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<font color="#cc0033"> So all of u guys must have couple of questions on what exactly is this topic.</font>
<font color="#cc0033"> Is it a fc? No</font>
<font color="#cc0033"> Is it a cc? No</font>
<font color="#cc0033"> Is it a appreciation thread? No</font>
<font color="#cc0033"> So what exactly is it</font>
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One night me(shivani) and love-mystery(loji) were talking about manver in the manveer powerhouse and we started writting scenes on them. We don't really have a story or a plot. Our scenes are based on our imaginations and what comes to our mind when we are writting them. Loji writes one scene and i continue it further so this keeps going back and forth.
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<font color="#cc3333"> </font>This is not the first scene we wrote actually we lost some of the first scenes so i putted together the scenes i could find.😳
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<font color="#cc0033"></font><font size="2"> Loji</font><font color="#cc0033">-</font><font color="#cc0066">UV and M both having sweety sweety sleep ... M's mam came seeing them like this she didn't wanna wake them but Suddenly J came and saw them she be so angry and yell JIJIII ..wake up ...M waked up feeling like shocked what is happening ???... UV waked up and gave J an angry look and said what happen J ?? J said nothing but jiji seems she is tired so wanna tell her to talk rest in her room ... UV feeling more angry and said u r right but she will arrived like this and he carried her ..M feeling shy and said UV ..UV said u keep silent</font>
Shivani-<font color="#003399">loved it jay toh gusse se paagal hi ho jayegi. manatya says thank u uday. uday tells manatya there is no need to say thank u or sorry since there relationship beyond any formalities. manatya blushes n she just puts her head on uday's chest n closes her eyes. uday looks at her n smiles.he is walking down the stairs since manatya got the master bedroom n its downstairs. jay is watching uday n both uday n jay make a eye contact. uday is angry n signals jay to walk away n jay just gets more furious. uday gets to manatya's room n a servant opens the door n leaves. manatya is asleep in uday's arms n uday gently puts manatya on her bed. as he is putting manatya on her bed slowly she hold his shirt tightly. uday tries to break the grip manatya has on his shirt but instead he stumbles n falls on the bed. both of them fall together since uday was holding manatya but he holds manatya tightly. manatya wakes up n both uday n manatya tries to get up but instead they keep failing n keep coming closer. both of them just stop n wait for one another to go first but no one of them go manatya is waiting for uv n uv waiting for manatya. both of them lost in each other n suddenly manatya realizes that uday's hands are on her hips as he was trying to save her.she blushes n uday hold her tightly n makes her come close to him. jay comes there n she is watching them from the door.</font>
Loji-<font color="#cc0066">M is trying to be up when she saw J but UV didn't let her move and said J what r u doing here ??..J said nothing just checking if M jiji is ok and slept or not ...M said oh J from when u start carrying about me ??? J said from now on Jiji... UV feeling awesome and really enjoying what is happening ..finally he stood up and said am leaving for now ... M said it's too late sleep here ... UV gave M a lovly look and said now if u told me this again me will never leave ...M said .then don't leave ..J bw so angry about what is happening she left from there ...UV and M didn't even relized that J gone they r in love dreamland ...after a while UV said ok will be here for more long ...</font><font color="#cc0033">-</font><font color="#cc3366">shivani ...love it ... okkk gonna start ... M still standing watching the moon ...she heard her phone rang .. it's a msg ..she wonder who will be she open it with thought that will be UV then she read the msg and it's from unniti... saying M hi u see dada..?? M be worried what happen she called Unniti and said hi unniti he didn't arrived he left from here ... Unniti while talking UV entered the room .unniti is about to tell M that he is here now but UV sign to her to be silent ..he asked her tell her that he didn't arrive ...Unniti said why ?? UV said just told her this ..unniti told M ..M be so worried she just run to DS but what she will told her and it's too late .. she stooped and called uv in his phone but he didn't replied... then she called unniti again and said i will come now ...Unniti said don't worry he gonna be fine ...UV listened to what M said... M said ok plz do tell me when he will arrive ..unniti said ok </font>
Shivani-<font color="#003399">haiii uv is playing around with manatya how cute . manatya gets worried n she calls uv again but he doesn't pick up so she decides to call the rajmahal to see if uv arrived yet or not. a servant picks up the phone n tells manatya everything. manatya is annoyed but she smiles n says watch out uv. she texts uv saying urgent, uv calls her but she doesn't pick up her phone. uv gets worried n he tells unnati. unnati calls manatya but no answer. uv rushes to meet manatya at the mahal. uv gets there n he sees manatya in her balcony standing n smiling. she winks at uv n uv smiles back. uv yells i love u. manatya makes ssshhh... sign to uv but uv insists manatya to come down. manaaty agrees. both of them are shaking in cold n manatya tells him to go home. uv nods no n mantya pleads to him. uv still says noo. manatya asks him what he wants n he says a kiss... it starts raining n manveer is till standing there. manatya looks at him for a min n kissess him n then holds his hands n makes him sit in his car . uv is suprised n blushes. manatya tells driver to go but uv holds her hand. manatya smiles n as the car starts moving. manatya lets go of the hand. she waves bye n runs back in. manatya recieves a txt for uday n she smiles the text says i love u my princess even forever is not enough for my love for u...</font>
<font color="#003399">i know the rain part was really random but all the best romantic scenes are in rain naa</font>
Loji-<font color="#cc0066">Shivani ... this night for UV and M will not gonna end ... OK me ...UV waked up and rushed to see the time ... it's 4 o'clock am ohhh he just slept for 3 hours but he saw it as a year ... he msged M and said u waked up ?? M replied so fast ..she said i didn't slept yet *blush*.. UV replied wanna meet u ...M replied but it's too early to came here ..UV replied i don't care wanna see u now i missed u ...M replied i missed u too but we have to wait ... UV didn't replay her back she be so worry ..she send u be angry ?? but still no replay till now ...M be more worry she can't called unniti now she went out to the gate ..but no one was there ...M felt that UV gonna come ..she is feeling so sleepy ... when she turned to go back suddenly there is someone hugged her from back and she know who is he ...she smiled ..UV turned her to watch her face but still hugging her .. he said princess i couldn't wait but what about u why u here ?? M blushed and said i was waiting for u ... UV smiled and said waw princess and he kissed her on her check then he felt she be so heavy ... he looked at her but she was closing her eyes ... he knew she is sleeping .. he carried her till he put her in her bed ..come near her and kissed her in her forehead and said ..good night my princess.. <3<3<3 </font>
Shivani-<font color="#003399">chalo finally the night ended aur ek raat mein manatya got 3 kisses from uday now i am jealous uday goes home n sleeps in his room. both manveer sleep till 11 in the morning. uv wakes up n sees the time n he is suprised. manatya wakes up n komal n dadisaa is standing by he4r bed. they look worried. manatya tells them that she couldn't sleep last night that why she woke up late n tells her mom n dadisaa sorry. both komal n dadisaa leaves. jay comes in n asks manatya questions but manatya ignores jay completely n goes in her bathroom. jay is furious n leaves. manatya gets dressed up n goes for lunch. she eats her lunch n goes to hotel for a meeting. uday sends her a text to meet her up n both of them meet up at the hotel where her meeting is at uday accompanies her to the meeting. manatya asks uday about his night n he says wonderful. manatya teases just wonderful nothing else. uday takes manatya to the corner in a sneaky way n grabs her n tells her do u want the details princess? manatya- why not? but uvji we r getting late for the meeting sooo??? uday teases who cares? manatya i do so plz chodo naaa. uv lets got of manatya n manatya fixes her hair n checks her make-up. uv smiles to himself n starts walking with manatya. in the meeting manatya n uv are talking with her eyes.</font>
<font color="#003399">after the meeting manveer meets up.manatya asks uv what he is doing for the rest of the day? uv replies back nothing. manatya asks him to stop playing around n tell her seriously. uv tells her he has a imp meeting regarding hotels so he has to leave in 10 mins. manatya and uv hugs and manatya tells uv that she also has ballet classess to go n then after that she has to work on her english as well. uv offers help but she makes uv sit in a car then manatya sits in the car herself. first manatya drops uv. in the car uv is holding manatya's hand n tells her i wish it rains today. manatya smiles n says i know why uv. uv comes closer n asks her why. he is looking into her eyes. manatya moves away n blushes. uv comes closer again n the car stops. manatya leans forward n her head is about to hit the seat but uv keeps his hand on her shoulders n balances her off. both of them have a eyelock( pee loon plays in the background.</font>
Loji-<font color="#cc0066">they keep looking at each other forgetting the worlds ... uv comes closer and closer ..m felt that she is the most lucky girl ever .. uv is about to kiss her but someone knocked on the car's glass..M waked and told uv to go he gonna be late from the meeting ... uv left and even m for her classes ..uv ended the meeting so fast and be in m's house.. manyata is tried to learn the word u r mine but she always change the i to y and said it wrong .. uv is looking at her with smile after a while of trying m gave up and told her teacher she will leave enough for today but uv came ..m be so happy seeing uv she came closer to him and said u left the meeting or what ?.. uv said no but ended so fast as i can't be away from my princess for so long .. uv asked m what she was learning she told him but she said it with the same mistake ..uv smiled and asked her for whom u want to say this ?? m said what is important i can't say it ... uv said now u can say it now say with me and he start to teach her one by one .. now she can said it .. he said now u can say it so... m came so near ...she caught his hand and said u r mine ... uv caught her hand and kissed her and said yes am yours ..</font>
Shivani<font color="#003399">-haiii tooo cuteee</font>
manatya starts blushing and uv lets go of her hand. manatya runs away from there. uv smiles at her and manatya looks at uv smiling. manatya gives a big smile back n with her eyes she signals uv to come but as uv starts coming closer manatya starts running. they play a little chase n finally uv gets manatya and lifts her up n as he is brining manatya down the smiles fades away n turns into silence their eyes meet and the time stops. manatya and uv lost into each other. slowly uv brings her down but he is still looking at manatya but manatya starts looking down with shyness. as manatya touches the ground she stands still there not knowing how to react to the moment that just happened. uv comes closer n manatya keeps moving back. (hossana plays in the background) manatya closes her eyes with nervousness n hides her face in her hands. for a min there is no movement. manatya peeks through her hands n uv is nowhere. manataya gets tensed n moves away her hands. she looks down n uv is on his knees with a red rose in his hands.uv gets up and holds manatyas hand he kisses it first n then bows down. manatya accepts the flower. manveer walking hand in hand n a spotlight comes on them n red clowers are start showering on them. manveer walk for a while manatya head on uv's shoulder n then uv asks for a dance n manveer dances on tum ho...
Loji-<font color="#cc3366">shiv..omggg awesome yaar they really must show us manveer romantic scenes</font>
<font color="#cc3366">okkk uv asked m what about dinner tonight ?? m said with smile ok .. the ds came seeing them like this she be more sure that they made for each other .. m saw ds and told uv that enough ds is here ..uv turned slowly ..ds came near and said uv my son when u arrived here ... uv said just now ds and told her that he asked m for a dinner and she agreed... ds smiled and said ok ..j came and said omg me and my viji will also go for the dinner what about to go together .. uv be angry but he didn't show that .. uv said now i will leave will meet u later on ... uv left ..m went to her room and she received a msg from uv ..he said if am not sure i gonna meet u later on i will never leave from there .. m smiled and said even me uv... later on all go for the dinner when ever uv tried to be alone with m j came in between.. uv be more angry ever ..uv said m unniti wants to meet u ..j said i will come with u ... uv said no unniti wants to meet m not u ... </font>
Shivani-<font color="#003399">areee why do u give me most romantic ideas yaar ur ending is always perfect n it gives me sooo many ideas too gud.m goes in the room and she doesn't find unnati in there n as she goes futher in there. a guy is standing with back on manatya's ide. manatya gets tensed but as uv turns around manatya screams out of fear. uv smiles n tells manatya u r darpook princess? manatya replies saying no n where is unnati? uv laughs n tells manatya do u really expect unnati to be here in this beautiful night n this beautiful room, come on manatya that was a code word so we can leave jay. manatya smiles accha bachuu bade smart ho... uv replies bachpan se hi aadat se majboor princess. uv orders dinner n both of them have a dinner in the room with red wine, candle light dinner n at the end uv cuts the cake with manatya to celebrate the night, both of the blow the candle closes therir eyes n makes a wish. manveer wishes for togetherness, love n happiness for each other. both of them open their eyes n manatya kisses uv on cheek for the beautiful candle light dinner. she asks uv if she can leave n uv nods his head in yes.manveer leave the room with uday following manatya. uday goes another way n manatya is all alone. jay yells at her for making her wait sooo song manatya tells jay not to yell n she is not a kid so chill. jay gets angry n leaves vijay bahi glares at manatya n follows jay to her car. manatya standin alone waiting for uv. both of the smile when they see each other n hug, jay is watching them from her car n understand their plan. manveer smiles at jay n waves her gudbye.</font>
Loji-<font color="#cc3366">ok me continu...</font>
<font color="#cc3366">uv put his hand around m waist and turned her m said uv what r u doing it's public and she blushed ...uv said ohh really u know when u were with me i can't feel the world .u r just the one who make me feel the life when am far from u i feel am died ...u also feel that right ?? m blushed and said yes ... uv said ohh then we have to tell ds i can't leave u for a sec we should get married now..m smiled and said no u know i should be manyata not monya right ?? uv said i start loving u even when u r not rajkomari u remember when we met for the first time .. i never forget that... u took my heart from that time .. m blushed and looking down ..uv took her hand and kissed her and said meri rajkomari can i have this dance with u ?/..m blused and said yes .. the music was so romantic and is so slowly uv slowly made m came near and near ..then it rains ..</font>
<font color="#cc3366">loved it waise we loved rain kyunki humare scenes we just make it rain out of nowhere inti rain toh tv serial main bhi nahin hoti hogi loved it haii uv toh gaya kaam seee... lets just end this night a bit faster than we did last time or if u want to make it long it's fine.</font>
Shivani<font color="#003399">-it's starts raining and uv gets completely wet with manatya.manatya starts to run to her car but uv holds her hand n then pushes manatya closer to her. manatya slightly bangs into uv and the eye lock starts. uv pushes manatya away from him but manatya hugs uv tightly and gets a hold of uv. uv lifts manatya up and makes her sit in the car. as soon as uv closes the door manatya gets out and starts dancing in circle all happy and smiling. uv just admires her beauty for 2 mins and suddenly realize that it's a reality not a dream. uv picks up manatya on his shoulders n manatya screaming leave me i want to dance in rain. uv tells her she will sick n dadisaa will get angry. manatya stops screaming and uv tells driver to take them to his hotel. manatya asks him why uv replies komal maa n dadisaa will be mad naa. manveer goes into a room n a room service lady bring clothes for manveer. first manatay changes and then uv. both of them driking coffe n sitting on sofa together. manatya is drying her hair and the splashes of water is going on uv's face. manatya doesn't notice but uv keeps smiling. manatya realizes it after a min n wipes uv's face with a towel n both manveer share a smile.</font>
Loji<font color="#cc3366">-uv said thanx ..m said oh i should go now i think ... uv said what about tomorrow ... ?? m said let it comes first and then will see ... uv said ok u should give me a good night kiss... m said ohhh this will only be after or marriage .. m moved but uv didn't allowed her to move he brought her closer to him and said r u sure of that manyata said yes and now before ds and ma be worried i must go.. uv said ok he dropped her ...m entered the palace and saw ds she told her not to worry as she is here now m entered her room be in bed to sleep ... ds suddenly saw uv she asked him uv u here at this time ?? uv said oh m forget her phone so am bringing it to her ..ds said ohh she went to her room ..uv said ok will meet her and will leave after that ...uv entered the room he saw that m is already slept ..he came closer put the phone near her and slowly kissed her in her forehead and said good night my princess ... he arrived the hotel and slept dreaming about the day ...</font>
<font color="#cc3366"> rocking scene now i am dreaming about manveer</font>
Shivani<font color="#cc0033">-</font><font color="#003399">manveer r thinking about each other n how close they come now n how they can't live without each other. manatya gets the flashbacks of uday pushing her far away when she was trying to hug him. she gets worried n calls uday, uday doesn't pick up the first 2 time. manatya is angry finally he picks up the 3rd time. manatya yells at him ask him why he pushed her? uday calms manatya down n tells manatya that i just wanted things to be under controlled u were getting driven by ur emotions princess. i am not kind of that guy anymore who treats girls as objects he can use n throw. manatya u r really special n my true love so ur honor is mine. i didn't want you to do anything for which you would of regerted ur whole life. i love u more than my life but for me ur respect n dignity is equally important. after all u r going to be princess with lots of responsibilities so plz manatya don't get me here my princess u know i love u like forever. manatya has tears n as she is wiping them off her cheeks she has a smile thinking how much uday loves n most importantly how much he cares for her reputation as well. manatya starts sobbing n tells him a squeaky voice i love u my prince charming, u r the best give life has ever given me u r my happiness, sadness and the most precious person in my life. idk how to thank u but i just want to i love you forever n always will...uday smiles n so does manatya.</font>
Loji-<font color="#cc3366">unniti came and saw uv was smiling she asked him what happen u r talking to manyata ?? uv suddenly realized that unniti is talking with him he said yes ... m said is that unniti can i talked to her ..uv gave unniti the phone to talked to manyata ... unniti asked m what u gonna do today ?? m said nothing much as normal my lessons and after that will go shopping with j omggg i need help .. unniti said what u think should i came and go with u and leave j .. m said ohhh awesome idea .. uv is listening to the conversation between them ... unniti said ok well will came after an hour is that ok .. m said ok but will let j go before us and will not let her know that we r going ok ?? unniti smiled and said ok done .. m is so happy she went to j and said am ill can't leave will u leave alone ... j said ohh that's great then she realized what she said and said ohh jiji get well soon .. then i will call uv to come with me ... m be upset </font>
Shivani-<font color="#003399">sorry for the late reply bas woh tweet ne mood kharab kar diya but i am fine now</font>
<font color="#003399">manatya and unnati meets up at a mall. both of them looking for uv and uv is coming with j holding arms and smiling. unnati is shocked n manatya is furious. she looks at uv with anger in her eyes.manatya goes upto jay n tells her this is my uv stay away from him. uv calms down manatya and kisses her on her cheek. manatya gives a smile and manveer hug. j is furious and unnati is smiling at manveer with a awww expression. jay promises herself i will take revenge. vijaybhai comes from behind n taps on jay's shoulder. jay screams and vijay tells j ki stop making the revenge promises ur plans always fails let just chill n start shopping we need a hot new bf for u babes. jay gets more mad n leaves. vijay- chalo jay ko chodo i am going for a date myself...phela nasha plays in the background n vijay all happy,smiling n shopping his heart out.</font>
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<font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif"><font size="2">Loji</font><font size="2" color="#cc0033">-</font><font size="2" color="#cc0066">After j left m be angry and told uv to leave her and why he came with j and arm with arm .. uv smiled and said she is ur sister u remember... m said ya i know she took unniti 's hand and left from there then she looked behind but uv wasn't there ... she be more angry he gave up so fast ... then she told unniti that she wants to leave from there .. unniti received a msg from uv she said ok let's go ... m felt so bad as unniti must call uv and told him to be back to make m happy but she didn't ... they left after they arrived m realized that was not the place neither the hotel .. she asked unniti where r we .. unniti said go out of the car and u will see ... unniti winked to her ..m said what is happening ?? m be out then unniti drove the car and left her there ..m didn't understand anything</font></font>
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Shivani<font color="#003366">-manatya calls unnati but she doesn't pick up. manatya is furious then she calls uv n uv picks up n tells her to come inside. manatya refuses but uv insists n manatya gives in. manatya starts walking n when she opens the door it's dark inside and a spotlight is on manatya. she gets scared n stand there for a min n suddenly flowers starts showering from above. manatya smiles n keeps on walking in search of uv. as she comes halfway all the lights turn on n there are pics of manveer everywhere. manatya smiles n has tears in ehr eyes. she loudly screams for uv asking where are u? plz come out. uv comes from her behind n manatya is still screaming uv's name but she is unknown of the fact that uv is behind her. uv comes close to manatya n covers her eyes with his hands. manatya touches his hands n says his name. uv says hain nahin toh...</font>
Loji-<font color="#cc0066">ok me... manyata smiled ...uv leave her and now she is infront of him face to face .. they keep looking at each other for a while then manyata is about to say something but uv but his finger in her lips and said ssshhh... then he slowly make manyata come close and close and close ...he put his hand around her waist and told her to put her hand around his neck ..manyata slowly do it then she blushed ... and she looked away ..uv said merii princess look at me ... manayata slowly looked at him now they keep looking at each other ... uv whisper ... now u know am not interested with j and will never be and he moves slowly and put a soft kiss in her forehead ...manyata closed her eyes and enjoying the moment she can't feel the world she and uv is only the human in all the world ... after a while manyata opened her eyes and watching uv ..she really realized she is the most lucky girl in the whole world ... she whisper ..yes now i know ...uv smiled and said ohhh u took so long to answer ..manyata about to say something but</font>
Shivani-<font color="#003366">uv says ssshhh... just enjoy the moment manatya we always talk but now i want to live this moment n cherish it forever. manatya just gives him a smile and both of them do a slow dance on (teri meri). manatya puts her head on uv's chest and closes her eyes. uv looks at mantya n smiles to himself. manatya falls asleep and uv just admires her beauty. uv puts her hands arounds his shoulders so she can get gud support n picks her up in his arms. manatya's hair is flying and uv just looks at her n starts blushing. he takes her to his car n makes her sit in the car n then he sits himself. manatya wakes up n realizes she fall asleep. uv looks at ehr n asks her what happened? manatya ask couple of questions n uv tells her how he brought her in the car since she fall asleep n didn't want to wake her up n all. manatya just shyily says achhhaaa...bade romantic ho gaye hoo aaja kaal. uv hold manatya's hand n tells her agar tum jaise beautiful princess ho samne koi bhi romantic ho jayega n then both of them say hain nahin toh n laughs.</font>
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<font color="#cc3366"> </font><font face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0099">Thank you for reading</font>
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