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love2_soma

@love2_soma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

its ok dear...
tk ur time...
n ALL D BEST fr ur exams...

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neha gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: love2_soma
its ok dear...
tk ur time...
n ALL D BEST fr ur exams...

thanks a lot dear...😃

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_Maaneet_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

waiting for the update

update soon

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@jssood

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

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Divz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

lasttt pasrttt🤢

suspense to khol de😡

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz
lasttt pasrttt🤢
suspense to khol de😡

divz... kal khulega suspense and i am sure you will throw jutey chappal on maan and on me too..
but dear i have decided i will write 2 or 3 parts more.. so don't worry...

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@jssood

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: neha5058

divz... kal khulega suspense and i am sure you will throw jutey chappal on maan and on me too..
but dear i have decided i will write 2 or 3 parts more.. so don't worry...

wait for that

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

updating in few minutes...
is anyone here???

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neha gupta

@neha5058

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

part-11

Get smiled at his question…my happiness? What does it matters to you?
Maan-it takes..
Geet-really..!! you snatch my happiness from me before 7 years and now you are worrying about my happiness.don't be maan…she replied him coolly but from inside she wanted to hug him, kiss him..
Maan-but …she cut him and said you should take rest...

and went away... maan felt helpless...he can't see geet with some one else...this is 3rd accident in past 7 years..
next day dadi met with geet in hospital...geet saw dadi in her cabin and greeted her with so much respect
geet-sorry dadi maa mere kal ke behavior ke liye..
dadi-its' okay beta...maan kaise hai ab?
geet-wo theek hai abhi..2 din me discharge mil jayega...
dadi-ok beta..hame aapse kuch aur baat karni thi..
geet-kahiye na dadi maa...
dadi-pata hai geet ye maan 3rd accident hai last 7 years me..
geet-i know dadi maa...
dadi-how could you know?
geet-dadi, i am also in delhi from past 7 years...
dadi-fir aap humse mili kyu nahi?
geet-kaise milti dadi maa.jab maan hi mujhe chhodkar chale gaye the..she said this like a whisper...
dadi-par beta...maan ne hame kaha ki aap unke sath nahi rehna chahti...
geet-ye sach nahi hai dadi maa..maine unse aisa kuch nahi kaha..wo to mujhse jaane se pehle miley bhi nahi..
dadi-lekin unhone to kaha ki wo aapse miley the...
geet-par dadi maa...aisa kuch hua hi nahi..
armaan came there and heard everything...
armaan-sorry to disturb you both but geet is right...maan didn't met with geet when he left...
geet ne maan ko paaglo ki tarah dhoonda par wo nahi mila...
dadi-par hame to maan ne yahi bataya...
geet-par dadi maa ye sach nahi hai...maan aisa kaise bol sakte hai..i have to find out the truth...
armaan-haan geet..pata to lagana padega aakhir maan ne ye kyo kiya...
dadi-aap dono jo bhi karna jaldi karna..ab humse aur nahi bardaasht hota...
armaan and dadi left from there and geet sat on her chair... how can she forget that day when maan left her..
when maan left,next day geet went in his cottage for met him but his house was locked..
she thought dadi and maan went somewhere and will come back till evening...but she had felt some kind of
restlessness...a different feeling but don't know why all this?
she came back there again but found the house still locked...she went his office where he was working from past 6 months..
she came to know from there that his project has been completed...so now he is not there.she couldn't believe on him..
she again went his house and met with watchman and asked from him about maan..he told that they left yesterday from here..
watchman gave a letter to geet which maan gave for her to watchman... she grabbed the letter from his hand and went to the hills..
sat on a rock and read the letter...

geet
i know you will shock after know that i am going from here...i am going back to london with dadi.. don't try to find me..
don't try to call me because my number will be engaged...because that was only for india..always be happy in your life..i know that
you'll be happy with your love...try to forget me...
yours maan...

she didn't understand why he wrote that always be happy with your love... she cried a lot after reading the letter..
she didn't know why he left her? why he gone back? why he didn't met with her before leaving? so many questions in her mind..
she didn't know that time where to go? she sat there and cried..bani & ridz came there finding her and saw her in this condition and read the letter..
they couldn't believe that maan has been left her... like her life has been stop at the right moment... her both friends made her understand
and left her to her home... after 3 months she came to know that she is 3 months pregnant...her friends told her that abort this child but she denied..
and said she will give birth of his love.. ridz shout on her...once she didn't know the meaning of love bite and today she is 3 months pregnant...
she came out from her thoughts and decided that she have to find out the truth..
two days passed and armaan discharged him from the hospital because he can't see geet in this state...he don't want that geet will see his face again...
who was not for her all the while in every problem then why this time...? maan was passing from the corridor but a voice stop him..
ridz-wait mr. khurana...
maan stopped and turned..saw ridz there...
ridz-the great business tycoon mr. maan singh khurana.. you are a loser...
maan-what? he greeted his teeth...
ridz-you can't go back like this...
maan-who will stop me...you?
ridz-yes..i'll...you have to answer of so many question which are left in mid..which are not making sense... we tried very best to find out the answers
but can't...but you have the answers...
maan-why i'll give answers to you?
ridz-for geet's sake... hearing geet's name he composed himself and asked straight question...
maan-which questions?
ridz-come with me...
maan-i have 15 mins..so ask... they went in ridz cabin...
ridz straightly asked him that why did you left geet?
maan was dumbstuck at this question because he was not expecting it will be come...
ridz-what was her fault that you left her? she loved you so much then why did you left her? she gave her whole life to you then
why did you left her? her voice increasing one by one questions... she wanted you..she gave herself to you then why did you left her?
she searched you like a maniac in whole shimla then why did you left her.?.she almost shout on her... maan stood there like a statue hearing her questions...
he had answers but don't know should he tell her or not... geet stood at the entrance of the gate hearing all the questions
but said nothing because she also wants the answers...
maan-because...because...he didn't know what to tell her or what not?
ridz-because what? huh... tell me..because what? she raised her voice...may be you didn't realize how much geet loves you..
you know she missed you in small-2 things..like whenever she help meet in studies that she remember you that how you told
some tricks... whenever she made your so called fav pasta..she remembers you...you know whenever she drives the car she remembers you
..she told how you teach her that how to drive a car.. ridz in tears while telling him all this... and maan's heart shattered heard
his remembrance in small-2 things... you know she always wanted that she will becone physiotherapist but she became a surgeon because she missed
you in every exercise she used to do... she always told me these things and never know how many nights she spent without sleep...
fighting with herself..searching the answers why you left her...she never hide anything to meet because she don't want that her daughter
ask anything about her father when she will grown up..so she told her daughter everything...you know when meet was born that time geet told that she looks like as you..
you know what was the first word meet had told...paa..she never got father's love but her first word was paa... but how can you understand...?
and all this just because of you...just because of you..have you any explanation of all this...?

maan-ridhima, you are not making sense...maine kya kiya hai?
geet-what? you are asking that what have you done?
both turned at the voice..and
jab mujhe aapki sabse jayada jarurat thi tab aap mere paas nahi the..
jab meet ko aapki jarurat thi tab aap waha nahi the...jab school me parents meeting hoti tab aap waha nahi the...
jab pregnancy me mera mood swing hota tab aap waha nahi the...jab mere daar ji ki death huyi,tab mujhe aapki sabse jayada jarurat thi tab aap waha nahi the..
and you are asking what have you done...she broke in tears holding her knees...

(please imagine this as a background song on the situation)

Bolo Na Kya Hua
Hum Ko Ye Kya Huya
Hui Aisi Baat Kya
Bolo Bolo Na

Tum Ne Mana Bura
Meri Kisi Baat Ka
Maine Kuch Hai Kaha
Bolo Bolo Na

Tune Bhi, Maine Bhi
Badla Kyun Raasta
Bolo, Bolo, Hai Baat Kya
Bolo Na, Bolo Na

Hum Dono Mein Hai Baat Kya
Bolo Na Bolo Na

Yu Tuttne Ki,
Sab Chhuttne Ki
Wajah Hi Nahi
Thi Bachi

Hum Dono Mein
Kaisi Bhi Chup Ki
Jagah Hi Nahi
Thi Bachi

Phir Main Chup Kyun Hui
Fir Tuchup Kyun Hua
Aisa Kuch Kyun Hua
Bolo, Bolo Na

Choti Si Baat Ne,
Roka Hai Rasta
Hai Hai Hai Baat Kya
Bolo, Bolo Na

Tune Bhi, Maine Bhi
Badla Kyun Raasta
Bolo, Bolo, Hai Baat Kya
Bolo Na, Bolo Na

Ek Duje Ko
Sab Kehne Ki
Chahat Ko Kya
Ho Gaya

Batein Hawa Me
Udane Ki Apni
Himmat Ko Kya
Ho Gaya

Wo Himmat Kya Hui
Wo Chahat Kya Hui
Wo Fitrat Kya Hui
Bolo, Bolo Na

Kaisi Bhi Baat Ko,
Dil Pe Kyun Le Liya
Hai Hai Hai Baat Kya
Bolo Bolo Na

Tune Bhi, Maine Bhi
Badla Kyun Raasta
Bolo, Bolo, Hai Baat Kya
Bolo Na, Bolo Na

maan whispers her name...par tumhare sath to armaan ko hona chahiye tha na...
geet shocked at his question... why he thought that armaan should be there with me all the while...
she stood and replied him back..yes...armaan was there all the while with me but as my best friend who helped me lot...
he loves meet as his daughter...he loves me as his best friend...
maan was totally shocked...he didn't understand what is she saying? he didn't making sense of her talks...he is still stucked
in his silly assumption which he was living till whole 7 years...he thought geet doesn't love him..she loves armaan... self thought ohh god i was thinking that meet is armaan's daughter but the fact is that meet is my.. my daughter... meri beti.. he is very happy after found this... double happiness... geet doesn't love armaan...
he started to tell her why he took that step...

past

one day maan went to hills and found geet & armaan there...they were talking on serious note... he was very worried..
he had some notes and cards in his hands and geet was seeing them...actually those cards & notes was for ridz..armaan
was going to propose her that day as geet is best friend and knew ridz very well then only she could help him..geet
said to him that he should do practice with her like how will her propose to her? what he will say to her.. for some minutes
geet became ridz and talked to him like ridz but maan didn't knew that..he only listened their practice when armaan was proposing her
and she was replying him back as ridz...
armaan-i love you..
geet/ridz-yes...
armaan-will you be mine forever?
geet/ridz-yes and hugged him...
maan saw all that and his heart shattered there in to many pieces..he loves her a lot and he couldn't thought in his dream
that geet loves armaan..she all the while passing time with him but what was that he has seen in her eyes? why she spent night with him?
but for him geet's happiness was on the top..he went back from there cried...but rain started and on one saw his tears that were
mixed with rain..he was whole drenched in rain...Maan clenched his fist as he saw her hugging another man…confessing her for him..
he could crush them in his fury but instead of that he just left the place couldn't bear the unknown pain….but he had imagined that they would spend the rest of their life together. & didn't wanted anyone else. he loved geet with all his heart. There is no way to describe the hurt and pain he felt. It was like every cell in his body was being torn apart and run through mixer maan self thought If she would be more happy with someone else rather than me, that was her choice. ..

then he decided that he want geet's happiness and if geet will be happy with armaan
that it will be right for both...self thought "I realized at that moment that if you truly love someone, you want them to be happy, you want the best for them even if that means not being with you".

his project was almost done and that night he booked his flight tickets and packed his stuff...
told dadi maa something crap which doesn't made sense...and next day early in the morning they arrived to delhi and from delhi to london..

past ends

geet fell back on ground... how could you think like that maan..ek baar mujhse puchha to hota... she was sobbing..
maan's voice was almost chocked..wo to sab practice tha armaan ke liye..aur aapne socha..socha ki...mai aur armaan...
kaise? kaise maan? kaise? she is sobbing shattered on the ground... maan sat on the floor next to her...tried to touch her..
geet-don't... don't try to show sympathy to me...just leave from here...
maan's voice chocked... whispers her name only...geet...
armaan came there and the sight broke his heart..his best friend & his love are in tears...
armaan grabbed him by his collar and made him stood on his feet .maan was not in his sense listening all this..
armaan-isse pehle mai kuch kar baithu...chale jao yaha se... just leave us...
and dragged him outside from the cabin...maan went from there with his lifeless body from there... his face was in tears..
driver opened the car door for him but he didn't respond him back and kept walking without knowing where to go only walking on the roads..
rain is pouring his pain...his heart stop beating...his whole body drenched in rain...he went to some silent place ,sat on his knees and scream loud..
(imagine this song as a background song on man & geet's situation…)

Dil sunta hai
Teri sada
A rubaru
Ab toh zara
Bechain si
Meri zinda..gi
Sun kar teri
Yeh dastaan…

He was shattered hearing all this…feeling her pain..hearing that how much she suffered in these 7 years…he was restless…..

Jeena mera…
Asan kar..
Tu milke yeh..
Ehsaan kar
Kahin kho gaya
Chehanu se sukun
Tere dard ko
Ab jaan kar…

He want to again meet with geet…want to sooth her pain….his life became a burden on him…

Jaaniya..
O.. jaaniya…
Bas roye dil mera
Ansoo palkon pe
Nahin hai bewaja…a..
Dil hai gum sada jaaniya

he found geet or lost.. self thought maine geet ko paa kar kho diya ya kho kar paa liya.. some confusions in his mind...

Tujhe paa liya
Ya kho diya
Iss baat par
Dil ro diya
Tu na aa.. sake
Tu waqt hai

in all these 7 years, there is not any single day when he didn't missed geet...

Guzra hua…a…a..
Tujhe rakh liya
In yaadon ne
Ek phool sa
Kitabon me
Iss dil me tu
Rahega sada ha…
Aur mehkega
In sanson mein..

Raaton mein tu jal jata hai
Chehre mein tu dhal jata hai
Tara hai tu mujh mein toota sa…a..

Neendon se jaga deta hai
Palkho ko bhigo deta hai
Dariya hai tu mujh me dooba sa…a…

Har waqt khwabon ki tarah…
Tu aata raha…………

Jaaniya..
O… jaaniya…….
Din kya raat kya
Ahat ho koi
Lagta hai sada…a..
Ke tu hai wahan jaaniya

Jaaniya..
O.. Jaaniya…..a…
Bas roye dil mera
Ansoo palkon pe
Nahin hai bewaja…a..
Dil hai gum sada jaaniya

crying loudly... on the other side ridz & armaan calming her..

precap

maan manofying geet

tell me friends hows it?
i know you will throw jutey chappal tomatoes eggs on maan and then on me coz of this silly assumption maan left her and i also seperate them...
your cursing session accpting..
waiting for your response...
love neha

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

hey neha... awesome update dear...
i am crying after reading this update...
i just hate maan... ek baar geet se baat kiya hota... what a MU yaar... he didnt trust his love n left her not even informed her...
geet is searching maan like a maniac... i am very very sad with this behaviour of maan... i didnt expect... n moreover he thought meet is armaan's daughter.. wah maan ji wah...
poor geet she suffered so so much... but loves maan still... thats really great geet...
if maan atleat talked with geet once they might be together now n taking care of their princess meet...
now maan should work hard to get his mishty back...
awww meet first word was paa... that was really heart wrenching...
happy that still 2-3 parts r left...
continue soon...

love u dear... hugs to u...

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago