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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys
ok so i have decided to take the plunge and jump on the bandwagon...decided to pen down my first OS.
As most of you can imagine...i am shaking right now!
Bear with me and i hope you like it
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I don't know what i was thinking when i wrote this but the build up is important for the last part which i hope will turn out good and might please some of you...
So lets begin...

It has been a few days now since holi and Khushi has vivid thoughts of what might have taken place at the poolside. Arnav is avoiding Khushi... by the time she wakes up in the morning, he has already left the room. They are rarely alone and she always comes back in the room after she thinks he has gone to sleep.

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Anjali has been really happy for the last few days because of this new change she has noticed in Arnav but she sensed that there was some tension or something going on between khushi and arnav...they seem to be avoiding each other. She was wondering why, maybe chote told khushi off for making him drink bhang, "oh my brother, he is in love but still doesn't know how to treat his wife... i know my Chote, expressing his emotions is hard for him, I think I will have to speak to Khushi."

She had so much to share with her bhabhi. She was shocked and angry at Chote for the quick marriage but now she is the happiest and luckiest sister in the world. Khushi is the best girl for my chote, Anjali thought and headed to Arnav's room.

Khushi was sitting by the dresser looking at the red bangles Arnav had given to her (the kangan were sitting next to the bangles) and trying to recollect those tender moments they shared just a few days ago. 'He did not want to let go of my hand...he did not want me to leave his sight...then why is he not speaking to me, why is he avoiding me??' Khushi thought, she wanted those moments to come back, she wanted him to hold her hand again, she wanted to look into those eyes...

"Khushiji, oh I mean Bhabhi" Anjali interrupted Khushi's thoughts, she was standing at the door.

"Oh Di, come in" Khushi looked up "do you need something?"

"No, I wanted to talk to you..."

"Umm talk to me" 'what did Di want to talk to me about' Khushi thought a chill went down her spine. Khushi stood up.

Anjali came in and sat on the bed and gestured to khushi to sit next to her.

"Yes, I have been meaning to speak to you about something very important, something very close to my heart..." Anjali said, her voice was cracking and she had tears in her eyes.

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ok that was part 1
let me know if you want me to continue
feedback is most welcome...
eagerly waiting to read comments 😊
PART 2 - Page 2
Part 3- Page 3
Part 4- page 5
Part 5- page 6 (last part)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice OS.. :) please continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very very good plz plz continue soon and pm me next part plz plz 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Obviously you should continue!!!
Very nice!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for liking and commenting 🤗
just proof reading the second part...
will put up soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great, are you sure this is your first? It's short but I really liked it continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok cricket match plus Man.united playing...so my mind is all over the place...oh n new spoiler yippeee...

Here goes part 2:

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"Yes, I have been meaning to speak to you about something very important, something very close to my heart..." Anjali said, her voice was cracking and she had tears in her eyes.


"Di, what is it? Tell me please..." khushi sat next to Anjali

"Oh it's nothing serious, it's just that I wanted to Thank you!"Anjali said with a smile but her eyes still glowing with tears. She continued now holding Khushi's hands "Thank you for coming into my chote's life, thank you for making him smile, thank you for accepting him the way he is, I know he is short tempered but he really lov--..."

Anjali stopped for a second and looked at khushi's bare hands...

"Oh khushiji, you are not wearing ma ke kangan??"

Khushi who was so touched by the way Anjali was thanking her, she herself had tears in her eyes, both of happiness but also of sadness that this happiness will be short lived...it will end in 6 months...no matter how much Khushi wanted to be the one who brings happiness into Arnav's life...she might not be able to...she felt her heart sink, she felt pangs in her stomach and the words of gratitude were now numbing her from within...

Suddenly she snapped out of it, when Anjali asked her about the kangan and looked down at her wrists...

"Huh! Ma ke kangan?" Khushi blurted out...

"haan..woh rahe (yes..there they are)" Anjali spotted them on the dresser and got up to get them

'Ma ke kangan??' Khushi thought, she was confused, these were just kangans Arnav gave me to show off to mami...

"Yes, these are our mother's kangan...chote didn't tell you??"Anjali asked. "Chote bhi na..acha did he give you the letter with these?"Anjali knew Arnav found it hard to express his emotions but she was a bit taken a back that he didn't mention the importance of these kangan's to Khushi.

Khushi looked blankly at Anjali...

"Oh God! Let Chote come home today, I will speak to him" She started walking towards his closet and took the box which the Kangan were suppose to be in and handed it to Khushi (kangan in the left hand and the box in the right)...

Khushi took the box and kangans, she did not know how to react...

"There is a letter in here...from our mother for her..." Anjali said, again with tears in her eyes

"Anjali bitya..." called out Nani

"Coming nani..." replied Anjali, looking towards khushi she said " make sure you read the letter" and she gave khushi a warm smile and walked out of the room.

Khushi held the box and kangans but suddenly the weight of the box and kangan became too heavy and her hands fell to her sides...

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still working on part three...i was gonna end it at four parts...but lets see
plz do comment :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I'm getting hooked - CONTINUE!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks again guys
part three is ready...just proofing it
will be up soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice start u continue plz!!!

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