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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start👏
very well written
plz do continue and pm me ur future works
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very sweet... please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part three:

Khushi held the box and kangans but suddenly the weight of the box and kangan became too heavy and her hands fell to her sides...

Khushi sat back down on the bed and placed the box next to her...

She began to caress the kangans, admiring and looking at the beauty of them. She never really gave them much thought because of the way they were given to her. The day she had gotten them... the way Arnav had smiled at her, flirting with her... and then she gulped in when she thought of the fact that it was all fake...all a show for mami!

But today, they looked so much more beautiful, they carried a special bond and meaning behind them.

She then placed the kangan down and looked at the box...hesitantly she picked it up. There was a battle taking place within her. Should she open the box? Should she read the letter? But with what right, she is not the bahu of the house and Arnav never gave her the letter. He did not give her the right to be his wife! She put the box down and stood up.

No! I have no right, I am only here for 6 months and whatever is in this box is Not for me!

She walked over to the doors leading to the poolside... she looked out at the poolside, only to get flashbacks of all the moments they shared and then came the vivid moments of holi. "Pati jo hun" rang in her ears, the way he put colour on her and when he said "hamari dharkanen ek hogati hai"...

Her heart began to beat faster now, she could not shake off this feeling that he truly felt something for her and what was Di saying, I was the one responsible for Arnav's smile...

Khushi's confusion had no limits...she turned around and looked at the box...

She walked towards it, picked it up and began to read the letter

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just a reminded on what's written in the letter

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ok so it seems like i am going in circles...

but trying to express khushi's turmoil...i hope i am successful in doing that!

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EDIT

I decided to put that in for now...let me know if u want me to continue..if i end here will it be a good ending??

Edited by Sadie101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liked all three parts... short and sweet but brings out khushi's turmoil
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sadie it was amazing...read both the parts in one go...
seriously girl you really have to continue...

thanks for the pm dear..😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arnavandkhushi

sadie it was amazing...read both the parts in one go...
seriously girl you really have to continue...

thanks for the pm dear..😃



and now the third part too...
it was awesome.

muahh for making my day after so tiring exams😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update👏
loved all the 3 parts
very well written
loved it,do continue and update ur next part soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read all the three parts in one go, too good, please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sadie sorry I got late...read all 3 parts in a go and I loveeed it...hahaha...it is now way a first one girlie...its fab !!!
Finally Khushi gets to know the mystery behind the kangan and letter - "seriously yeh chote bhi na"...how much of a goner he is...he'll either run behind his wife or away from her...but always forgets to do the more important things...
hey btw plsss do a next part...would love to know Khushi's reactions !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seriously guys from the bottom of my heart...THANK YOU for ur comments and likes!!! 🤗
i would reply to all ur comments but running out of time...
@priya
the whole buildup was to finally pen down khushi's reaction ...
but i can't bring myself to write it now..it has to be emotional and i don't have time...hopefully tonight before i go to sleep...

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