My first OS (part5 pg6) - Page 3

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Ok before I begin the fourth part...I am writing an OS on ma ke kangan and forgot the very fact that it was mother's day today

Now while writing this I am thinking of my mother and mother-in-law (who is like a second mother to me), needless to say both of whom I love dearly...

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Khushi opens the box and her hands were shaking...

She opens the letter and begins to read...

"Hamare Chote ki bahu ke naam,
waise to hum yeh kangan ap ko khud hi pehnane wale hai...
per app ko eik raz ki bath batani hai
isiliye likh rahe hai

Dhihan rakhiye ga aur sawdhan rahiyega
Hamare chote ki nak pe bohot sara ghussa rehta hai

By the time Khushi finished the letter, she was shaking and sobbing. She had to read the letter a few times because every time she tried to read, her eyes would well up and she would not be able to continue.

Khushi hugged the letter and cried like a baby. Somehow she could feel the love of her mother-in-law, she felt that her mother in law's blessings were with her but one thing broke Khushi from within...IF only this letter was for me! If only Arnav would give her this right, the right to love him, the right to be with him... His anger she knew she could deal with but love...

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Arnav returned home late but before he entered the house, he looked up at the terrace to remind him of the ugly truth of Khushi and his good for nothing brother-in-law. Since holi, it had become a routine thing to do. He had to make himself feel the pain & angst again and again so that he could keep his feeling in check in front of khushi. It was becoming harder and harder to keep himself away from her. But replaying the scene at the terrace made sure he was successful in avoiding her.

But today when he looked up at the terrace, he saw something very different. He saw Khushi looking up at the sky from the pool side windows and his heart skipped a beat.

She looked so beautiful in the moon light...all of a sudden he wished time would just stop, he wanted to forget everything and just admire this beauty from a far. He whispered her name "khushi" and suddenly she started to look around her as if she heard him call her name.

Arnav smiled thinking 'why am I not surprised by her reaction?'

He knew he had an effect on her, his presence made her uneasy but was that a good thing or a bad thing. And all their tender moments came flooding into his mind...the way she held his hand and asked him about her dharkan... he closed his eyes to reminisce those moments for a bit longer. He opened his eyes and looked up only to meet her eyes.

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Khushi was looking up at the stars not talking to her Amma babuji today, today was the day she would spend talking to her mother-in-law. To gain strength from her so she could face Arnav when he comes home. She is not sleeping tonight and she was ready to confront him if he was going to try to avoid her again. She needed answers but more than that she wanted to hold him close...

Suddenly she felt his presence and a few seconds later she heard her name. She looked around but he was not there. She looked out the window again only to find him looking straight at her.

wow! this was awesome!! :D

Are you awake Sadie? Please continue soon.. I'm dying out here to know what happens next. plus that precap.. was a killer! Write soon. 😊

Very nicely written !!!!
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Part 5:

When he entered the room, she stood up... leaving the kangans on the bed next to the letter, Her eyes had tears and she whispered "these do not belong to me..." and walked out to the poolside

He extended his hand to stop her from walking out

His heart was calling out to her... 'these belong to you and only you!'

"Khushi...wait" he whisper, she did not stop and had already stepped out..."Khushi, I said Wait!" this time in a stern voice, "Khushi!" now he was angry.

She knew how to push his buttons. He was fuming, why does she effect him so much! Why does she do this to him! Why does she not listen the first time! But what was eating him from within was why is she crying?

One thing he knows for a fact he hates tears in her eyes and this time if he is the reason behind them, then he is going to sort this mess out!

He clutched his fists and walked out behind her, he grab her arm and turned her around to face him.

"How many times do I have to tell you to look at me when I am speaking to you!"

She let out a moan "Aahh"...his grip was too tight and he suddenly let go of her arm.

She looked up at him, right into his eyes...he looked back at her questioning, trying to figure out these feelings that they shared.

(OK I have to continue with the dialogues in hindi now because i feel it has a better effect)

"Ma ne sach kaha tha (still looking into his eyes)...app ki nak pe bohot sara ghussa rehta hai...(then she slowly placed her right hand on his heart and said) aur app ke dil mein..." she hesitated to continue, his heart was beating really fast and all his anger had disappeared the moment she mentioned ma and placed her hand on his heart.

His gulped down in order to control his emotions, looking into her eyes, her eyes were questioning him, his throat went dry but he wanted to complete the sentence.

He placed his left hand on her hand and said "...bohot sara pyaar.." he whispered back completing the sentence.

She had tears of joy in her eyes and his eyes were glowing too. This was a very tender and emotional moment for them. He had just confessed his feelings for her.

They don't know how long they stood there looking into each other's eyes, Khushi blushed and tried to move her hand from his heart, but he held her hand in it's place and wrapped his right hand around her waist and pulled her closer. Now he could feel her heart beats.

"Ma ne kuch aur bhi kaha tha...ghussa bardasht kerna, aur pyaar..." he said.

"...sood samet lautana" she completed the sentence blushing she looked down and then wrapped her arms around him in an embrace that they both had been wanting for a long time. He hugged her tight, never to let her go, they both had tears of joy in their eyes and time just stopped.

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Alright this was the last part.

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great update👏
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