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Posted: 13 years ago
Good Update...
Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshi_t


omg don't do that šŸ˜”...that's the thing i luv abt ur ff that u update fast...u see almost everyone here updates like once week and u do every 2-3 days...so whenever i cum here i make sure to check if u've updated or not and u nvr disappoint me...so it's a humble request...plz don't slow down 😊


awww, sure i won't slow down. at the moment i'm stuck for ideas but when one pops into my mind i just type away. will update as soon as i can šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for Updating after such long time. Have been caught up in watching DEK and with school studies. Hope you like the update, i've added a small twist to it. DO enjoy and comment. 😊


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Chapter 13


(UV POV)

Unniti came back out of her room. "Dada, I'm sorry I was the one who told you everything," she said.

"It's not your fault choti," I told her, "Manyata probably didn't want to tell me yet."

Unnitit nodded and then walked into the kitchen. I decided to go and see how Manyata was getting on, and if she recovered.

I walked out of my apartment, just about to go into Manyata's when Jay stopped me.

"Kaaha jaare hai Udayveer? Aren't you going to see me, or would you rather visit that brat Manyata?" Jay spat at me. I turned to look at her annoyed.

"What did you just say?" I said, clenching my teeth. How dare she call Manyata a brat? She doesn't even know what's been going on in her life!

"You heard exactly what I said. Have you forgotten me or something Uday? Or has this new Manyata person poisoned your mind?" She told me. What's wrong with her? I just wanted her to go away.

"Look, you have no right in saying that Manyata's a brat. You've only talked to her twice, I wonder what first impressions she got of you." I shouted at her, angrily.

"Yeah, well its not my fault that Manyata got my dress ruined. Otherwise we could have been good friends," she said the last part, roling her eyes.

"And what good friends you will be," I muttered under my breathe, and turned towards Manyata's door. Just when I was about to open it, the door opened and Manyata stood there shocked.



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(M POV)

I woke up hearing some people shouting somewhere. Standing up, I looked out of the window to see if the shouting was going on there.

There was no one there. But then a figure starting to walk nearer and nearer. I tried to see who it was. Trying to get a better look I leaned my forehead on the window.

Aakash.

But it couldn't be. He was dead.

I saw him die right in front of me, but how could this be right? He couldn't be alive? He's going to kill me, I had to go and find Uday.

I quickly walked out of my room and towards the front door. I heard two people shouting, one was a mans voice. Uday. And the other was a girl's voice, but I'm not sure who's it was. Soon they stopped talking, and there was a long silence.

I opened the door, coming face to face with Uday.

"Princess? What's wrong, you look shocked?" He asked me. Jay was behind him, making a surprised face when he said princess.

"Aakash.." I whispered, frozen at where I was stood.

"What about Aakash? Manyata he's dead remember," he whispered the last part to me. Jay laughed. Uday then turned to look at Jay. "You know something about Aakash don't you?"

She just shrugged, and them gave a smirk before saying, "I might know something, but then again I might not."

"I know that you know something," This time Uday said, clearly and loudly, tryong to make his point go through.

"Well what's the point of me telling you when the suprise will come here straight to you," Jay stated, with an evil smile.

Uday opened with mouth to say something, when Aakash came out of the lift.

"Aakash," I gasped.

"Aakash?" Uday asked.

"Aakash, how are you babez?" Jay said, hugging him. Babez? Since when did Jay call Aakash that?

"Oh hi Jay, who are these people?" He asked, looking at us.

"Just some friends," She told him, literally pushing him into her apartment.

Uday turned to look at me, who was equally as shocked as I was. I opened my door, letting him come in. I knew we were going to have one weird conversation.


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(UV POV)


I gulped, now knowing that Aakash was back. Knowing that there was more to then what we saw in the forest.

I followed Manyata into her lounge, and sat next to her.

"Aakash is back.." she muttered. Then there was an eerie
silence between us.

"If Aakash is alive, then who was that guy in the forest?" I said, trying to figure out things.

"Maybe Aakash didn't get killed, maybe he acted in front of us," she said.

"No it can't be, that Aakash we just saw doesn't know us,"

"But if Aakash is alive, what will happen to me now?" She whispered. That was what I was most worried about. If Aakash was back, then Manyata would be his target now. I had to do everything in my power to save her now, she has no one else to rely on.

"Don't worry Manyata, I will do something." I reassured her, and she nodded. "Just don't make the mistake of going out anywhere by yourself, and make sure you always lock the door," I told her firmly.

"Okay," she said, looking away from me. I cupped her chin, and made her face me. Taking her hand, I gently placed a kiss.

"Stay safe," I told her, seeing her blush crimson red. With that I walked out of the room, into my apartment.


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Please add me if you still haven't and want to be PMed. If you have any special requests which you want to be seen in the story to come, plz leave it down in a comment or PM me.

Thanks,

Niha x

Edited by -Niha- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yippe im the first
Anyways i loved it and Aakhash is bak? and also lost his memory? well it got intresed and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: please6

Yippe im the first

Anyways i loved it and Aakhash is bak? and also lost his memory? well it got intresed and thanks for the pm


no probz, glad your interested in the new twist.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update Sissy...The New Twist is gonna be splendid..Ty for the PM and pls update soon this time:)
Regards,
Neha
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Posted: 13 years ago

Again a beautiful update akaash kbhi bhi hamara peecha nahi ch0rega:x bt i kn0w uday ix their for manyata niha n0w add s0me n0k jh0k n l0ve scenes bt overall ur ff is realy interesting n0w update s0on
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nia-

Awesome Update Sissy...The New Twist is gonna be splendid..Ty for the PM and pls update soon this time:)

Regards,
Neha


Aww thanks behna. will try to update soonšŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: manveerlover


Again a beautiful update akaash kbhi bhi hamara peecha nahi ch0rega:x bt i kn0w uday ix their for manyata niha n0w add s0me n0k jh0k n l0ve scenes bt overall ur ff is realy interesting n0w update s0on


Thanks, but this time Aakash is shown as the badie šŸ˜‰ will try to add some more romantic scenes, just need some inspirations on what to do...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!Totally wow! I can't wait for the next update.PLZ PLZ PLZ and PLZ update soon -Niha-.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi NihašŸ¤— beautiful chapter and another awesome twist...so Akash is back and btw is he suffering from memory lost or is he just pretendingšŸ˜• anyway am loving it the story is getting interesting.
Thxs for the pm and update soon

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