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Posted: 13 years ago
That was wonderful, i love how Anjali made them realise and basically made him admit his love for her

This was really good!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wwaooww! Confession time...yayyy...please update soon n pm me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update! Loved Anjali here. Her dialogues were very much strong!
Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
another fab update...
wow wat shd i say...
u tooo gud
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVE THIS FF!! please continue soon!! waiting eagerly for the next PM !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...that was interesting...the way anjali got him to confess and her explanations...interesting take on the situation...pls continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol...I waz like W*F is wrong with Anjali...to support such a cunning husband...and then she got Arnav express his feelingz toward Khushi...Best way to get him to confess is to drive him nuts 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry I know I am late... was busy with office work and could finish typing.. will try to do the next update faster.. and yeah... Leave comments please.
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Part 13
After an erie silence, Kushi spoke.
"Dont take whatever Di told to heart, I mean she didnt mean it"
Arnav smiled before he answered.
"I got the meaning alright... I know what my Di meant"
"I know she meant well, but you are far better than shyam, no actually it is not right at all to compare you both"
Arnav was amused, this girl was more hurt that he was compared with shyam, than the underlying meaning in his sister's conversation
"Di was not happy with how I treated my wife.. I think she was kind of feeling responsible for my actions, probably she feels that she has failed to imbibe some chivalry in me to treat my woman well"
"you were tricked!" she told him
"that does'nt give me any right to treat you the way I treated!" he replied her calmly
Kushi looked a him for a long time.
"yeah, I guess you are right..." she said slowly and left the room
Arnav sighed watching her leave then broke into a sad smile, thinking of the irony of the situation, of all the ways he thought this apology would go, he never imagined that kushi would be defending him against himself.
****

It has been a week after that and Arnav was back at home after a tiring day at office. He had changed his dress and was picking up his laptop to finish his pending tasks.

"Have your dinner first" He looked up to see Kushi smiling at him, carrying a tray in her hands.

They both slowly started to act normally around eachother, there was no ackwardness anymore nor was any romance in air. To their surprise, they discovered that they both could get along very well in each others company, there was bickering all the time, alright. but that was something that they had accepted to be a vital part of their relationship.

she layed the tray on his stool, moving aside his laptop and file.

She then saw a box laid at the bed, curiosity overcoming her, she too it in hand


"What is this"
Arnav did'nt reply, but was shooting nervous glances at her. She opened it to find a beautiful saree in red with intricate designs in golden embroidery.
"wow!" she said excitedly, a gold coloured blouse fell out of it. and underneath in the box was a sorry note.
"not again" she muttered and sharply looked at Arnav, who quickly turned the other way. She dumped the saree and Blouse into the box.

"What happened?"
"I didnt like it"
"Your expressions didnt say so"
"I didnt like the low cut blouse!"
"What the" Arnav tried to control the annoyance creeping inside him "I designed it"
"that does'nt change my opinion about the blouse" she snapped at him "nor the sorry note!"

"you have prejudiced opinion..How can you tell without trying?" he asked he still annoyed "You simply want to annoy me with your comments!"

"then why dont you try giving me directly once... How long would you leave it in the dresser, on the bed for me to find out your gifts? What do you expect me to do? come behind you asking did you get it for me?"
Arnav was short of words for a second. kushi started moving out of the room
"Kushi!"

She stopped in her tracks

"And I would have thought you have started working on the problem at hand... No...a sorry note really? You thought these gifts will really do the trick? undo the fact that you did not trust me?" she asked him angrily " and what did you say just now? the whole day your sister annoyed me and now you! and you say I am annoying you?"
"Di?" Arnav asked surprised "what happened?"
"Oh god How adamant she is... I spent hours and hours trying to convince her... no she wouldnt budge...and I thught you are the most Adamant... I was forced to change my opinion on it"

Arnav nodded.

"I told you it is not going to be easy"
"She refuses to see Reason...I think it runs in your blood... to be Adamant...But Naniji, jeejaji, mamaji are all not like that... Probably, you both took after your father... was your father adamant too?"

Kushi kept on chattering, never realising that she had treaded on a sensitive spot. but the mention that they both were like their father blew off his cool. Kushi realised it but a second later, biting her tongue, but it was done, He stormed off angrily towards the pool.
"Arnavji I am sorry! please please.. Actually I didnt mean to hurt you, it was a casual comment..."
"leave me alone"
"I am sorry... I didnot"
"get out"
"Arnavji? "
"Didnt you hear me?"

she also strode of angrily.
But was back after a few minutes... draping the saree that her had bought her, the first saree that he had bought her... She stood silently beside him, but he pretended not to see her. She silently placed the dinner tray beside him.
"you havent taken your dinner still"
"I dont need it"
"dont punish your hunger for my sake"
"I dont care a damn about you or.." He looked at her angrily, but stopped short of words.
"how is it? " she asked, breaking into a smile "you know what... You were right.. it fits" she told him sitting beside him in the recliner by the pool "Perfect fit" she mimiced him
He looked the other way, biting back a smile which was creeping in. She simply took his hands in hers.

"How was the day?" He didnt reply first."I told I am sorr..."
"very tiring! things didnt seem to click and I was in a foul mood throughout..."
"then it means that you had a normal day" she chuckled, while he stared at her."but you seem to be in one of your rare good mood now.. I mean atleast you were before I spoiled it."
"we won a deal by the end of the day"
"oh ok.."
"So how was yours? My sister made your day tough?"
"no actually I think it was the other way around..."
"I thought you told you were annoyed with my sis"
"I was... First I was telling her to leave Shyam but then she was not responding at all, I was going back to square one...then I told her Ashok ji would be a better life partner for her. She lost her temper"
"You told her what?"
"Look, thats the fact. She will be better off with Ashok Ji"
"Kushi, why do you always think everything should end like a fairy tale? I only told you to work on convincing her to agree for divorce... We should not force her into another relationship just because... I mean, its her choice"
"I am not forcing her... I was just suggesting... and now she is not talking with me... and Ashok ji called... It seems she blasted him for planting ideas like this into our minds...He innocently asked what happened"


Arnav placed both his elbows on his knees, and caught his head with both his hands, letting out a deep sigh...

"Kushi, This approach will not work.You cant decide for her on these grounds..."
"Why it will not work? I am not suggesting her a new person.. He was her first love... It will always be there Arnavji, somewhere hidden deep inside... Right now she burst out because I touched that deep feelings...and what are you excatly doing? waorking on her divorce.. is it not something that you are deciding where she ought to? "
"Thats different!"
"Its all the same, Both of us have the same thing in mind... Her welfare. Now you concentrate on that.. I will concentrate on this.. because in matters of heart, you are no expert.. I am...I know my way..."
"you come up with stupid ideas"
"Yet they succeed... You forgot Jiji and Jijaji love plan?"
"whatever!" He agreed finally
"Did you speak to the Lawyer?"
"yeah.. He says, if it is Mutual she can get out of it in 6 months. but the problem is to make shyam sign the papers for a mutual divorce"
"If you ask me, making shyam sign should be easy...we have to worry about making your sister sign"

Arnav looked at kushi. Somehow making shyam sign the papers being easy was not giving him a good feeling.

"Ok I am off to bed" She told and walked off only to turn back to him near their bedroom entrance.
"And have you forgiven me?"
"For what?" he asked her puzzled, then remembered "oh for saying I am like my Dad? No!"
"I told you I didnt mean it"
"and Have you forgiven me? for not trusting you and putting you thru all this ordeal? You avoid talking about it all the time"
"you know what..."she said walking back to him "I dont understand why you have to be so angry when people talk about your father"
"not again" he was annoyed. She diverted the topic again and chose to speak about his father "great" he muttered
"see, did your mother speak ill about your father anytime? No right? For all you know he was a good man, and your mom knew it. perspective can be different you know... from her letter she comes across as a kind and a sensible lady..."
"You dont even know about my father kushi.. shut up"
"No, think... lets say if we both were to have children in future and they come to know about our wedding... they might think that you are a very cruel man... But My point of view would be very different and I Know you are good actually..but I cant tell the reasn to the kids... the same could be fr your parents as well...makes sense?"

Arnav looked at her confused... Trust her to come up with weird ideas and examples...

"The only thing that makes sense in your speech was us thinking about having children in future" he told her with a smirk
"what? it was just an example" she explained quickly
"Nothing wrong in turning it into reality" He aswered back.
"I am going to sleep" she muttered turning back to go into the bedroom again
"Kushi!" He called her "by the way, the saree looks beautiful on you! and you were right... hmm the blouse seems a little low cut too..." there was a mischeivious look in him
she blushed while he continued.
"but it fits perfectly... and I like it on you"
she had a feeling he had made it low cut purposefully.. But didnt ask him.
She saw him smiling at her amd smiled back then she left.

to be continued...

Edited by abavi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!! Aww, "if we were to have children in the future" that was adorable!!
~Ashu <3
Edited by london_doll - 13 years ago

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