ArHi FF: Check Mate! (completed)

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#841

wow i loved this story its amazing, the way you write i could feel d telecast.
read till part 18 in one go.
i wish show was like this Anjali bit strong, Shyam all evil but smart a true lawer.
loved the album part i could imagine Barun barging in room and " wat da khushi" then see album and that cute face.
Thank you will read remaining now.

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Lanu16

@Lanu16

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#842

I just located this story...really awesome...

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

very nice ff 😊 reading part 23 😊

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falu73

@falu73

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Fab read all the parts together

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sirivalli

@sirivalli.t

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#845

hey owsem ff i had read it in all one go.

it is superb

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canvasdreamz

@canvasdreamz

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#846

The alt universe that u have created is nothing less than a movie plot it seems...👏

The pace at which ur story has progressed is keeping me on tenterhooks every time i finish a chapter..the repentance of arnav was much needed rather than khushi accepting everything in the name of arnavs unproclaimed love.loved the arshi moments which brought them together after arnav came to know the truth.it was fun to read khushi browsing through the album and arnav thinking whatevr he was thinking☺️...i alws wanted to see a bit of pool romance in the show..my wish is fullfilled now 😳 later a bold and nonchalant arnav spending "quality time with family" ...lol..absolutely adorable👍🏼

like the character Ashokji,Anjalis much needed companion