Ss:full house chapter -3 updated 18th juneon pg 10

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(chapter 1)
!!there is a beautiful bunglow surrounded by the lawns and swimming pool !!
kabir and misha knocked the door .kabir :mish we are doing piya is our besti !!she belives on us after her mother and father death .mish :kabir ,why dont you understand that ??everything is fair in love and war !!you know na dennyel will kill us if we do not pay his money on time !!.kabir :humm !!suddenly the door opened .piya entered and said :hey guys ,what you all are doing here !!kabir and mish offered her flower !1happy birthday cindrella !!piya :ohh !!so sweet you both dont forget my birthday even i foret my birthday (she smiles ).kabir and mish ;yahi par sari baate karne hai !!ya andar bhi bulogi !!piya :isme bhi koi puchne ki baat hai !!tumara bhi toh ghar hai !!.misha hit kabir mish ;boloo kabir .while piya is opening the curtuns .kabir :piyaa !!piya turned :yess kabir !!kabir :i am thinking we should celebrate your birthday !!now you can married !!you are now 18 .piya smiles :kabir you know naa !!after ending of everything !!i cant even think of marriage and most important i have loose my job and you are telling me to celebrate .huh !!mish :plz plz if you are our friend !!kabir on misha ears ;mish i dont think piya ke sath esa karnaa zooroi !!look at her uski haalat toh humse bhi buri hai !!you know that !!mish :aagli baar tumne yeh baat boli i will going to break up with you !!kabir ;Ok (like a child).mish started crying !!piya ;ohh mish please dont cry !!I will going to celebrate it ok !!kabir keeps hii five to piya :yeh hui naa baat !!.misha and kabir celebrated piya 's birthday !!they druunked piya and take her sign on house paper !!when the next morning piya awake !!the dorr bell ring !!the lawyer told her that this house is now belong to mr abhay raichand !!the superstar and bussiness tycoon !!piya got shocked she is betrayed by her own friends !!but hse packed her bags !!!then she go to her friends kabir and misha beat them with the baseball and hold kabir collor asker for the money !!kabir told him that the money is nowhere they have already loose them in the stocked she leaved them !!and reach to his she saw many mercedes !!it looks like these mercedes are the bodygaurd of the centre mercedes !!she turned and started walking but she turned starting walking back on the path of her house itself she reached @the house and saw a handsome man ,hypntic blue eyes ,musculine body !!is coming out she thinks if she is a chocalate she will going to melt right now !!piya :grr what you are thinking you stupit girl !!!then she waits every body gaurd leaved the bungalow !!she ring the bell !!and the handsome men come out !!abhay :whats up ??huh !!late night !!piya :(tell him all the story in one go ).abhay :so curly what can i do ??huh ??piya :colud you plz plz leave this house plzz !!abhay :hummm (acting to think)no !!i like this place i have no plans to leave !!piya :but !!abhay closed door in the between !!piya knock the door again and again !!abhay this girl cant let me sleep peacefully he come back coz hehas meating !!also so he has to sleep !!he come out and hold her wrist !!:stay out of it otherwise i will going to break your head !!piya get scared !!piya sleep in the bech !!its really cold out side !!abhay sleeps peacefully after some time he got awake at 3:oo as this is his hobbies and he also liked the moon !!when he seen piya from the outside of his window !!*grr this girl !!*he come ut and seen that the girl is shvering with cold and her face is now blue !!he carry her in his arms and took her in the bed !!for sometime abhay also sleeped with !!piya put one of her leg on abhay 's stomach as piya dont know that piya is right now sleeping with a boy !!and her head is on abhay 's head this girl cant even sleep peacefully !!afterthat he realized that piya is going to awake he leaved his house coz he has to go office !!!piya then awake she found her self on one boy's bed !!she then see a note !!
*curly head you have to do all the household work if you want to live in this house not like my wife like my servent *🤣
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bellaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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firstly thanksss yar 4 pm me...
thats awsome concept...
lovely scene of abhiya when he picked piya from benchhh...sleeping scene
precap sounds interesting...
do cont yar
waiting 4 it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh my god! Totaly outstanding...continue soon! I loved it! Do pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bellaaa

firstly thanksss yar 4 pm me...
thats awsome concept...
lovely scene of abhiya when he picked piya from benchhh...sleeping scene
precap sounds interesting...
do cont yar
waiting 4 it...

thanks bella yaar jab bolti hu wah comment kardeti ho😃 !!you are such nice friend !!😆na !!i!yaar aabhi toh aur bhi aane baaki hai !!!aur aapne dosto ko pm karna 😳koi bulta hai !!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shifat

wow...amazing update...loved it

thanks shifat !!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: flora212

Oh my god! Totaly outstanding...continue soon! I loved it! Do pm me.

thanks flora,i will not going to continue soon as this is a ss and it will end in 5 or 6 chapters maximum so mein update badi karungi toh time bhi jaayaada lungi !!😃!!oki will surely going to pm you !!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vampireking

thanks bella yaar jab bolti hu wah comment kardeti ho😃 !!you are such nice friend !!😆na !!i!yaar aabhi toh aur bhi aane baaki hai !!!aur aapne dosto ko pm karna 😳koi bulta hai !!😆



really waiting 4 ur upcoming updates...thksss buddy😊😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bellaaa



really waiting 4 ur upcoming updates...thksss buddy😊😛

yaar update toh dere se hogi as this is a ss and it will going to complete in 5 or 6 chapter maximum !!so i have to update long !!!and it will take time to write !!😃and now you are also a ff writer huh!!😉!!bella is your real name ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it!

kabir and misha! betrayed pia!

love the precap

continue soon and plz add me 2 ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya0006

loved it!


kabir and misha! betrayed pia!

love the precap

continue soon and plz add me 2 ur pm list.

thanku so much ,i will going to continue soon and surely gone pm you !!

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