Ss:full house chapter -3 updated 18th juneon pg 10 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanku so much dear,i will try to continue soon and surely gone pm you !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the the story

thanku so much dear,i will try to continue soon and surely gone pm you !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

superb update

poor piya got cheated by her friends

Abhay picking piya up and taking her inside was cute

eagerly waiting for the next part.

thanku so much dear,i will try to continue soon and surely gone pm you !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: abc123chiti

awsome concept...👏
wondereing how could misha n kabir do dis to her...😡
but i liked dere betrayal also coz now pia gets to be wid abhay...😳
da bench wala scene...n ven abhay came to pick her up was cute...😊
precap is interesting n confusing...😆
if its bout abhiya's marriage den i m supa happy...😃
continue soon...😊
waiting eagerly...😊
n plz pm me ven u update...😊

you are my best buddy dude !!you always comment where i tell you !!and offcourse !!koi aapni adopted sister ko bhulta hai definetly gone pm you !!thanku so much itna bada comment karne ke liye

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akshi0019

Hey amazing plot dr... gr8 work...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm

thanku so much dear,i will try to continue soon and surely gone pm you !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: anjali0111

amazing update!!!!!!!👏 tumne toh pia ko abhay ki naukrani hi bana diya🤣
nice story...eagerly waiting to see her journey frm his naukrani to his beloved.😉
dont forget to pm me.😊

thanku so much dear for itna badda comment !!stay tuned !!ise story mein tumhe bhut maazaa nae waala hai !!i will surely gone pm you next time but send me a buddy request !!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmonaya

hey dear amazing SS I loved it really , awww poor piya her friends cheated her , abhay is soo kind hearted love abhiya and precap is marrige but of whom ? I wish it's abhiya , really intresting SS can u plsss pm me can't wait for next upd so plss upd soon u rock

ohh!!thanku so much !!dear ,i will surely gone pm you but next time also plz plzz give such big comment i like them alot !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello guys ,my name is prerna not vampy !!.thanku so much for the love and support for my last update !!i have decided if there is no big comments and i will not get good comments then i will not going to continue it !!this is my guarantee !!you guys have never read this ff like this !!this is different !!!kahi pein bhi ese story nahi milegi !!
chapter 2
piya was tired ,her hair are rebelleos !!her cloth are getting dirty !!she is so tierd !!that she cant even walk now her feet are now so weak !!while cleaning the window piya *grr kute ki maut marega !! !!after devil his turn his only !!i wish he will die quickly !!basterd child !!!haramjaadaa !!!while crying but what can i expect from the stranger !!whom he did not know me he is allowing me to live in his house anyways he is a nice man there is no mistake of him !!!!i wish !!i had not drink that day !!my friends are so b*** ...i wish noone will get the friends like them !!i belive them they are the only one who helped me when i am new in this city !!i cant believe they do this to me !!just to pay some stupit *money *!!omg !!i have not done the complete work and my interview is there !!i should do work quickly !!!my iterview is there !!she started working !!when the work is competed !!piya keeping her hand on stomach *omg i am so hungry right now but she watch the clock and its 8 :30 !!piya *i took three hours to complete the work *grr and i am hungry too but once i got this job then my some problems will be solved !! i will make food after coming and use kameene ke liye bhi !!!she baths and wash her hair she wears this dress
*first impression is the last impression *piya come to the hair after getting ready so mirror who is the most beautiful girl in the world she smiles off course me !!she takes her script and some important documents and leave !!piya humm i am feeling hungry and so tired !!i should sleep but no piya !!right now you have to concentrate on your interview !!she quickly leaved the house !!!
(in the office )
piya reaches on the time but seen there is a long line of girls already here for the secretary !!the bossi looking at the form of them !!he is feeling strange !!after seeing pya 's name !!he look from his office down !!and he seen piya sitting!!and call her receptionist !!receptionist :yes sir !!boss :cancell the meeting with piya !!anything happens but piya shoud not enter here !!after some time all the girls gives their interview !!one girl sitting with piya "humm do you know the boss is so breathtakingly handsome !!but he wants some sexy girls in the place of his secretary !!so no chance for us !!piya "humm "!!and all the girls give their interview !!tears starting dropping from her big browny eyes o her angelic face !!its like the rain is happening on her cheek!!but she controls her hunger and tiredness !!she goes to the receptionist and said ;your form has been cancelled !!i am really sorry !!piya :but why ??i am the topper of my school and college then why !!i cant get this job !! receptionist :i am really sorry but mam sir has said no to your form and strictly advice us that you should not enter !!i am really sorry !!piya :plz plzz just once *i really need this job *!!piya runned from there and security gaured tried to stopped him !!but piya opens the door and get a shocked *you reach here also !!why dont you just leave me alone huh !!!you !!abhay :hey whatever !!!huhyou come here !!andyou dont have some manners !!i told you !!you cant give this interview !!piya :why (shouted )abhay :first of all !!learn some manners aur waise phir mere ghar ka kaam kaun karegaa !!!piya 'tears started dropping out from her big browny eyes !!abhay noticed that !!hey dont you show me your fake tears !!piya gets faint and before falling abhay hold her in his arms !!jahsi ki raani ke baad ise ka number hai !!then abhay carryher in his arms and leaved the office all the office workers are looking at abhay with goo goo eyes !!that whats is happeining with sir !!they got mad !
(in the car )
abhay is driving !!while piya is murmuring something !!abhay !!i have to go to a offical party of the superstars !!so you will reast in the car !!and i will the enjoy party ok !!piya :humm !!while unconscious !!abhay leaved the door open !!and the security gaurd already seen piya so tey that might be the sAy ay ayir girlfriend !!while abhay is enjoying the party !!piya awake and smelling some food !!without thinking she got out from the car !! bodyguards stopped her but the security gaurd told her that might be the abhay 'girlfriend !!allow her otherwise !!we will be fired !!piya reaches to the party !!and started eating everything she takes one plate and full her with food and stated eating everything like a hungry loin which gets the food after the years !!people were staring at her the way she is eating she is not looking like she belongs to a rich family but her beauty is breathtaking !!abhay seen her and trying to avoid her so nobody gets to know that she is with her !!otherwise media will make a garam masalaa news on him !!abhay seen her girlfriend panchi !!today also she is looking beautiful in her read gown !!like in the past days when she used to come at this party with her !!but now she is with another man !!!he remembered the past !!!the way she used to feed him !!they eat together with one icecream !!one coldrink two straws !!he remembered
her their first date panchi wants to click one pic with him !!
when panchi is jealous after seeing abhay with another girl !!he is consoling her
they come to near abhay !!sid :hey bro !!are you alright !!huh !!i know its difficult to watch your gf with anyone !!(he laughed ).abhay tight her wrist (in mind )if this is not a party i have broken his teats from that he was talking !!sid :so bro !!nowalso you are devdas !!or you are changed huh !!new someone !!panchi :tell me is there someone new (teasing)!!if abhay stands here for two or three seconds he will going to cry !!he loved panchi so much !!!now also he cant believe that panchi betrayed her !!panchi :leaved him sid !!he cant forget me !!sid :haha !!abhay :i have someone !!abhay go from there !!while piya again making one plate for her !!abhay come to piya and hold her hand turned her towards him and then no one can imagine abhay hold piya 'face and forcefully kissed her !!on her lips !!piya is shocked while abhay savours piya 's lips !!!abhay teased piya 's lips forcefully and first bite her upper lip then lower lip !!abhay is holding piya delicate figure otherwise piya has already fallen on that time !!after 5 minutes !! piya put her both the hands over abhay 's neck and then respond him back with full pasion !!when abhy leaved piya !!piya is breathing heavily !!and he cant imagine this !!!all the media click their pictures makes video of both while kissing each other !!!!after that they both will feel embarrassed and leaved sits in the car !!abhay starts the car !!piya started crying :you moreon you ruined my first kiss huh!!!
NOTE :DO TELL ME GUYS DO YOU LIKED IT ORNOT !!WHEN THE STORY CONTINUE THE MARRIAGE WILL OCCUR FORCEFULLY THEN THE HONEYMOON !!AND OFFCOURSE WHEN THEY BOTH MEET WITH EACH OTHER THEY WILL GOING TO REALIZED THEY BOTH ARE ALMOST SAME !!WHEN ABHIYA WILL BE FRIENDS THEN !!THEY WILL HELP EACH OTHER TO OVERCOME THEIR PAST !!SO STAY TUNED !!!
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story

thanku so much dear !!but i am not going to continue this ss !!😆

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