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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pkyekrox

Heyy!!! U didn't PM me!! And I think I am already ur buddy...coz I wz reading ur FF(or maybe it was urs) "Mad Love" or something like tht!! Pls PM me next time!!

Ohh !!i am really !!sorry !!you dont read my ff!!my ff name is loose their control!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hello guys ,i am updating my next !!!i know i am updating after ages but for some reason i have decided i will not going to continue this ss but for my adopted sister rumki !!!!i am updating !!!

chapter 3
piya was crying like hell !!!!how dare you kissed me you moreon !!1i will not going to leave you !!!you !!!!youuu see i dont even have words to explain how bad you are !!!!you will i will go to court noo noo you have make a big mistake !!!i am not going to leave you easily or jo mein kehti wo mein karke dikhati hu !!!!dont estimate me ,myself or baaki i will tell you later on !!1abhay started laughing :i have nevar such joker like have you ever check to some sychectrist !!!you should be kept in the museum !!!1you are the only peace in this world noo no universe !!!1haha 😆piya :you dirty fellow ,basterd !!!!ghande abhay :how dare you call me genda how dare you ??(abhay tolding himself to be quite abhay quite )abhay opened the car !!!!leave !!!piya (furstrated )who will going to live with you ??i will going to take you to the high court 😆!!!abhay car has already moved on !!piya (saying herself)ahmm aab mein kaha jaau !!!!!!😭😭😭piya has been tired restless ,rebelloes hairs ,hungry she seen a some gang of boys and they were eating something !!piya is very hungry she herself goes to them ask for some food !!!!!!😭first boy :we will feel good for giving you somefood !!!!!then suddenly a men hugged her from behind he started giving her wet kisses on her cheeck piya restless cant do anything no energy no food akhir wo ek insan !!hai bhai 😆third men (looking like pitbull 😆)if you will give me the taste of your lip i will give you the taste of this (he give the signal of pao bhaji )piya restless ok !!!!!but first food !!!!(like a child )i want food i want food (jumping like a kinder garden )uncle plzz plzz give me food third men :dont call me uncle call me jaanu !!!!piya :ghanju janu ghanju janu ghanju yeh !!!
haha 😆(girls they have given her some drugs already ok !!)suddenly they started opening hte strip of her shoulder dress !!what are you doig uncle !!!hehe 😆third men (nothing my child he laugh in evil )suddenly one muscular come from behind and hold her from his neck and cut it down in one hold then he kicked on the second person men hood !!!!they all run ohh !!!and even piya also 😆piya cried ohh bachoo gunda gunda then suddenly all the mens started looking at her what she is saying he saved his life from us !!!then suddenly stop piya from one hand and said do you want to carry them or do you want me to carry all of you 😡😡piya :some one save me plzz 😆...abhay dont listen anything to her and carry her in his arms put her in the car !!!piya :wow what a men you are using your musculine body on me !!!!abhay :if i have just used single thing you should have been in two peices 😡!!!!!!
(next day )
abhay awake everything was in his perfect place abhay come from his room and seen piya clearing the window !!!abhay throught to say sorry !!!but suddenly someone knocked at the door abhay go to open the door piya smiles evil and started tearing herclothes !!one police inspecter came and said :mr abhay raichand i through you are a respectable citizen of this country but you done this !!!!!and she point to the pia look at her she is young age girl and you are taking work from her like a donkey !!!you told her that you will marry her and raping her since 1 weak abhay :what ??😲the hell is going on (he look at piya with angry eyes !!inspecter :then ...abhay :can we talk into the room inspecter :sure ...
after they both leaved ...for room piya ;oyee oyee ek theer se do nishane ghar bhi mera abhay ki propery bhi meri !!!!(she is doing bangra )😆then suddenly she heard some noises from the room i think that inspecter is beating abhay !!1piya :abhay jaisa bhi tha he saved my life many time i cant let this happen !!!!i will ...then she enterted in the room and the inspector is upon abhay they both were naked covered with the blanket !!!inspector is kissing abhy on his check !!!!the clothes on them were spreadng on the floor !!!!!piya closed the door piya started whispering *jo meine meine dekha wo judh tha *suddenly the inspector come laughing with abhay >.piya :i dont think abhay can do this with you he is such a nice guy !!!!!i think you have done something wrong !!!i will going to make a chargesheet against you to make such image of such hot and hapening...guyyy!!!!ppiya :buttt mam !!!inspecter :i will do this or not (ina seducive voice )abhay no dariling i will going to pay her for this !!piya get scared mam plzz plzz inspecter leaved quickly piya tired to go abhay quickly closed the door and started coming quickly starting opening one by one button !!!!!😳...piya closed her eyes abhay plzz leave me piya started moving backward and she touch the door from his back !!!!!!then...
please do comment and told me do you liked it or not !!!!sorry no pm dont have much time to do that !!
Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Sis I thought u started this ss for me, who is rumki, I am romita, u forgot my name 😭 Ok now coming to the update, it was awesome. I was just laughing hard reading abhay and piya's convos. I loved the way abhay saved piya from the goons and omg piya's childish acts were so cute. Abhay is such a besharam, with inespector too, cheee, characterless and bechari piya,don't know what will happen to her now. Waiting to know what happenes next and if ur adopted sister is me then thanks a lot. Love u sis.
Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
thanks thanks and so much thanks 4 dis update... i am waiting 4 dis 4 long time... plz complete dis lovely story. and thanks to rumuk also 4 dis... and dear rumuk ur ff's are also wainting 4 themself to get updated
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
thanks 4 updating after long time, mujhe laga tum ab kabhi update nahi karogi and i sent u requet please accept it and pm me from next update. ha sorry that main updates par comment timely na kar pao but still i love to read all ff's silently.. please dont mind
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
great update sis...👏
piya was so childish...😆
abhay ka to character dheela hai hi...😛
OMG...!!! inspector ke saath bhi... pata hai ye dekhe mughe 'axe' perfume ka ad. yaad agaya...😆
loved when abhay saved pia from those goons...😃
so pia is back in abhay's house...which was her own before...😆
update soon...😆
ye dekho jab maine kaha continue karne ke lie to suna hi nahi...😡😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Rmuk

Sis I thought u started this ss for me, who is rumki, I am romita, u forgot my name 😭 Ok now coming to the update, it was awesome. I was just laughing hard reading abhay and piya's convos. I loved the way abhay saved piya from the goons and omg piya's childish acts were so cute. Abhay is such a besharam, with inespector too, cheee, characterless and bechari piya,don't know what will happen to her now. Waiting to know what happenes next and if ur adopted sister is me then thanks a lot. Love u sis.

dude ,naam mein kiya rakha hai !!!!!kaam mein aur i have finished my work acctully coz of some reason if i will not update on that day the updating again after ages😆as i am kid of lazy person and offcorse studies !!!grr i hate studies !studies ko utha lo bagwan😆thanku so much i am glad that yu liked my update !!!!tell me are you watching mb >??😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

thanks thanks and so much thanks 4 dis update... i am waiting 4 dis 4 long time... plz complete dis lovely story. and thanks to rumuk also 4 dis... and dear rumuk ur ff's are also wainting 4 themself to get updated

awee so sweet !!!!!i will surely gone complete this ss if it did not get much response or not!!!!i will surely gone complete this ss !!anywyas !!i will not going to update soon !!😆 mein kabhi jhud nahi bolti haha😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanvipareek

thanks 4 updating after long time, mujhe laga tum ab kabhi update nahi karogi and i sent u requet please accept it and pm me from next update. ha sorry that main updates par comment timely na kar pao but still i love to read all ff's silently.. please dont mind

awee so sweet !!😳thanku so much yaar i am glad that you liked my ss so much that you are slilent member and comment on my topic !!!
btw my ss getting really less response but i will surely gone complete this ss 😆!!!no problem !!!😉i will surely gone accept your buddy request !!!!

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