FF: Star Crossed Lovers

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys Nisha here this is my first attempt on writing an FF. Hope you guys like it.

Characters:


Khushi Kumari Gupta: A 21 year old fashion designing student and part time model. Currently work at the Vadhera fashion house in Lucknow, her parents Shashi Gupta & Garima Gupta are higher middle class people. She has a sister Payal 23, who has done a degree in fashion technology and works at the Kapoor fashion industry a major rival to the Vadhera fashion house.

Arnav Singh Raizada: A 24 year old business tycoon runs one of the most successful fashion companies in the world The AR Group. Comes from an elite (rich) family. His family consists of his Di, Nani,Mama,Mami,Akash & his Jeejaji. He doesn't believe in love and calls it a waste of time. Viren is one of his closest friends in the industry and both of them share a great bond.

Viren Vadhera: The owner of the Vadhera fashion house, it is not a big company it is a small one. He is like an elder brother to Khushi and wants her to have the best at any cost as she is a highly intelligent worker. He strongly believes Khushi has immense talent.

NOTE: All the other characters are same, if any new characters are brought in I will introduce them with a little of their background and add them above.


Okay starting the prologue now.

PROLOGUE:

It was a big day at the Vadhera fashion house Viren's new collection was to made public and Viren was super excited about releasing his new winter collection as his previous collection had received an amazing response. The best part was that Khushi his cute bubbly employee was the show stopper. She was simply ravishing is all I can tell you. The big day dawned and everyone was super tensed as they hoped it will go off well as many reputable fashion houses were coming in to watch the show and everyone had forked out a lot of money to attend the show. Viren had waited a long while for this moment and was very pleased with the hard work that his staff had put in.

*CHANGE OF SCENE*

^DRESSING ROOMS^

Khushi was getting the last few touches of make done on her. After a while she was finally done and when she stood up looking at herself in the mirror all the other models and the staff could do was open and mouths and stare at her. She was simply STUNNING, her long sleek black hair was curled and left open she was wearing a gorgeous red gown.

LIKE THIS: https://www.buzzchow.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/04/carrie-underwood-red-dress-385x290.jpg

*CHANGE OF SCENE*

The show has started and all the CEO's of various fashion houses has started to arrive and the show was about to start. Khushi was nervous as she walked the ramp 2 years ago in college and for the first time she was about to do it professional for her boss and her brother. The show started and the model's slowly started walking on the ramp and had gotten wonderful responses for the audience and Viren was mighty pleased. Now all he had in mind was his showstopper Khushi no one had ever seen her before and she was a fresh face to the fashion world. On the other side of his brain he was worried as his best friend Arnav didn't turn up, Arnav had promised him he'd be there on Viren's big day. Thoughts started flooding Viren's minding saying that could he have forgotten?? He soon put that to rest saying that Arnav was maybe late but would eventually turn up as Arnav Singh Raizada never breaks promises, he remembered Arnav telling him once. Then his PA Nisha called him to tell him that all the models were ready.

SCENE OUTSIDE THE FASHION SHOW

There was a young business on the phone yelling at someone called Aman saying he was late to Viren's fashion show due to the traffic. This young man was a stickler to time and found time very precious. He stormed in angrily only to be greeted with a bunch of nosey reporters waiting for him. He was furious. He was soon ushered in and was greeted by Viren himself who was eagerly waiting for Arnav's arrival. A whole new bunch of models graced the ramp again and Arnav was mighty pleased with his friend's collection. He wanted to congratulate him but Viren was nowhere to be found. Then it was Khushi's turn to walk down the ramp now and she did it with great poise and grace, Arnav was dumb struck at her beauty and talent and was shocked as he had never seen her in the industry before and was wondering from Viren had got her! He was busy gaping at Khushi when he felt someone tap him from behind it was none other than his right hand Aman, the guy whom Arnav was yelling at on the phone. Aman had come to remind him that they need to find a new replacement for Lavanya as soon as possible as Lavanya played an important role in the AR Group of companies and they needed someone dedicated and smart immediately as Arnav had fired her a couple of days ago due to her irresponsible behavior which cost him a few million. Arnav just silently nodded his head he was still busy looking at Khushi who was posing for the camera's and received a thunderous applause from the audience. Then Viren and Khushi walk hand in hand and pose for the media and then walk off.

Little did Arnav & Aman know that Viren's PA Nisha had heard ever single word and had gone off to tell her boss about it.

SCENE CHANGE-

Party after the fashion show

Khushi was extremely happy that she had gotten positive reviews from everyone and was also happy for her brother Viren. She changed out the dress and wore this dress https://www.thefavourgallery.co.uk/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/red-puffy-prom-dress-211.jpg

Viren had told her to go change as soon as she could as he wanted to introduce her to all the gentlemen there. Khushi had walked out of the changing rooms to find Viren waiting for her he took her arm and started introducing her to everyone.


Viren says "Khushi I want you to meet my best friend since college Arnav Singh Raizada". Khushi gives a smile and brings out her hand for a handshake. She didn't notice him when she was walking on the ramp but all of the people Viren introduced her to she liked Arnav the most. He was extremely handsome and had the most expressive chocolate brown eyes ever. Khushi's eyes pulled her all along the visual treat in front of her his face, his chest with those strong muscles and the black and white tux he was wearing made him stand out amongst all the men present in the room & his cologne was something that she thought would drive her crazy if she had to meet him every day. Arnav noticed her looking at him and smirked knowingly as he had this effect on girls. Then Viren had to spoil Khushi's treat by talking had started telling her that Arnav was a successful business man and was the head of the most reputable fashion house across the globe "The AR Group" was all Arnav's said Viren. Then Viren realized that Khushi wasn't paying attention and snapped across her face to get her to reality, Khushi was embarrassed and she looked up to Arnav and realized he had seen her staring at him for a long time and smirked again. This time Khushi felt that she might faint.

PRECAP: Viren's PA Nisha goes and tells Viren what she heard between Arnav and Aman. Viren gets happy and an idea strikes him!

Well this was a MIGHTY LONG prologue! 😆
What do you guys think of it??

LET ME KNOW WHETHER I CONTINUE IT OR NOT?

Do I write a PART 1? YES or NO?

If its trash please forgive as it is my first piece of writing.

PLEASE SEE:
Please comment and like.
More likes and comments I will be motivated to write more.

Interested readers may buddy me for PM's. 😃 😊

BUT please just don't give me one word comments or say that update soon.

Give me honest feedback, how you felt about it.

GOOD or BAD both will be accepted. 😊

People who give me long comments will stay on my buddy list, will people who give me short comments or just ask me to update soon will be removed.

I know this sounds harsh but it is a HUGE task to PM a lot of people and it takes a long time to sit and write all of this down. 😭

Hope you guys understand!

SORRY GUYS PM's are gonna be sent a little late! 😭

THANKS!

<Nisha>


INDEX:

PART 1: CHAPTER 1

PART 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2885561/ff-star-crossed-lovers?pn=11

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2885561/ff-star-crossed-lovers

Part 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2885561/ff-star-crossed-lovers�

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was a fantastic start.
Realy interesting.
I thnk viren send kushi to work 4 arnav.

Cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Deifnately continue:D...plzzz I am begging u...and thanks for the pm:D...oooh and definitely add lots and lots of Arhiness in it...duh!...ofcourse u will...hahha silly me!!:p
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW amazing ff...u must must must continue... plzzz PM me da nxt part... i added u to my buddy list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start!
Please PM me when you update! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like how it started! can you pm me updates? ill surely read this!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb concept Nisha!!!!'Would luv to see how their story progress in future... Thankx for the PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved your refreshing concept hun😃.. please do write the next part asap😉.. m eagerly waiting for it😆.. oh i thought u would bring in viraat too😭😆 but i like how viren takes care of khushi so much😃 do continue soon!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept
particularly the title is very good and excellent
i like viren's character
i dont think arnav wil be rude to kushi like in serial
kushi's costume are really attractive and nice
👏👏👏
pls add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great start! I like the concept too :D
By any chance does this Viren Vadhera have any connection to the Viren In Ek Hazaron Mei Meri Behna Hai serial except he's not a lawyer in this one, lol.

Amazing start! Thanks for the PM and continue soon :D

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