FF: Star Crossed Lovers - Page 5

Originally posted by: _mahi_

loved your refreshing concept hun😃.. please do write the next part asap😉.. m eagerly waiting for it😆.. oh i thought u would bring in viraat too😭😆 but i like how viren takes care of khushi so much😃 do continue soon!!😳

Originally posted by: daredevilpreyas

lovely start. pm me when u update...

edit:-

if the prologue was long i hope chapters are longer😛

Originally posted by: ss374

First of all I would like to tell its very well written...simple yet beautiful!!!

It is a very different story line...especially Khushi being a model!!!

Nice concept...i think so u should continue!!!

Originally posted by: abhiyaluver1

Wow that looks interesting.. very well written..!!! love the way u wrote each and every scene in detail :) i loved the dresses too...😆 pm me your updates and continue soon :)😆

Originally posted by: cute_rockstar

oohh i love this update...
but uhhhrrgh this khushi have to go to get the preparations done!!
ur apology is accepted btw!
hehehe...

ohk this aranv seems just so lost...
what will happen wen he and khushi will meet!!!!

omg precap looks amazing ...

ohh are u givin a hint tht they'll probably meet in the next??

anyways..thanks for the pm as well as the update!!

very nice
intresting concept
please carry on

wow...a nyc update...update soon n plz pm me wen u do so...!!

Plot is getting interesting. Waiting to see what happens in the next episode :-)