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Saina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: xxAqeelahxx

Oops did i put simran couple dance with Rajbeer... sorry sorry mistake should have been preeto will change it immediatly...i think i was too sleepy
oh and she's being lazy so i thought id carry on with mine :)

Ive changed it now ... ewww simran and rajbeer ... never ... i will not let them come together in my story ... 😆

Oh Thank God it was a mistake..I was wondering why Aqeelah gave couple dance to R-S and not R-P😃

Ok, now you win our votes back😉

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Part 9 - Simran's Boutique

It was a beautiful morning and Preeto woke up by the sun shining in her eyes... she got ready and went down ... she was shouting for Meeta to make her paratha but remembered Meeta wasn't there ...

Preeto- Woh mein bhool gayi, waise Beeji koi madhat chaiye?

Bani- Tu aur khana? usai acha toh hum bookhen hain

Beeji- Chup kar tu, tujhe bara khana pakana aata hain

They all had breakfast, but it was very quiet...

Beeji- Meeta ki yaad ari hain, kitni madhat karti thi ghar ke kaam mein

Papaji- Koi na! Meeta humse door thori na hain.. hum saab shamm ko chalte hain ... usai bhi acha lage ga

After that Preeto's phone rang, she picked it up

Preeto- (on the phone) Kya? Wow yeh toh good news hain .. haan mein aati hoon

Beeji- Kiska phone hain?

Preeto- Simran ka tha... usne boutique kholi hain aur usne mujhe job offer khi hain toh main uski madhat karne jari hoon ...

Beeji- Yeh toh aachi baat hain ... tujhe achi naukri bhi mil gayi hain... saab babaji ki merbani hain ... acha puthar ja par shaam ko ajana jaldi se...

Preeto- Teekh hain Beeji ... Bye

Preeto went on her loona to Simran's and from there they would go boutique ...
she reached her house and said congrats to Simran...

Simran- Come lets go

They went out and saw Rajbeer standing by his car ... Preeto looked at him and the Simran ...

Simran- Rajbeer bhi hamari help karega!

Preeto- Acha! Tumhein kabse interest tha boutique mein kaam karna?

Rajbeer- Well, Kya karoon oh ladies mein hoon aadat se majboor...

they crack up laughing ... Rajbeer tells Preeto to leave her loona and they all go in Rajbeer's car... Preeto at the front and Simran at the back... they reach the boutique ... Preeto loves the place... they get started on the cleaning as it is an old place ... they take ages and are tired out ... Rajbeer offers to get lunch ... he comes back and they have naan and curry ... then they start on decorations ...

Simran- Oh Shit! Main toh outfits ghar pe bhool aayi... i'll just come yeah... Rajbeer can i take your car?

Rajbeer- Yeah Sure!!

Preeto starts with putting up posters ... she climbs up the stool and sticks them up with blue tack ... but the stool is shaky and she loses her balance ... Rajbeer quickly holds her in his arms... they stare at each other ... ankhon mein ankhein !!
Simran comes back at that time and coughs loudly ... Rajbeer puts her down...

Rajbeer- Woh Simmi ... Preeto girne wali thi toh mein madhat kara tha uski

Simran- Chill!! Maine toh kuch nahi kahan ... carry on ! :)

Simran puts her designer outfits on the rails ... and once Preeto starts then they would have more collections... that was all for the day !!

Simran- Not bad huh?

Rajbeer- Haan saab kuch acha hogaya ... ab tumhari boutique number 1 hogi... oh and Preeto congats for the job !

Preeto- Thanks wanks baad mein , mujhe jaldi ghar pochna hain kyunki Pankaj aur Meeta ke jaana hain...

Simran- Toh hum bhi chalte hain naa kyun Rajbeer?

Rajbeer- Oh i'd love to par mera important kaam hain ... kisi aur din huh?

Simran- Okay fine ... humein mere ghar drop kardo aur phir mein aur Preeto loone mein chal jayege...

Rajbeer- Okay your choice

Rajbeer dropped and went ... and then Preeto and Simran went on Preeto's loona... was a bit weird for Simran ... she's used to cars but she didn't want to complain... Preeto knew her family must be at Meeta's already ... she went there and they were ... Preeto met her Sister and said hello to Pankaj... Simran did the same... Beeji , Papaji , Pankaj , Sonu and Bani were having snacks and tea... Preeto and Simran accompanied Meeta in the kitchen ... later bani and sonu came insisting they want to see Meeta's room... she led them up...

Bani- Wow di!! kamra toh acha hain aur dekhon na itni saari tasweeri Meeta di ki... Jiju toh baare romantic hain

Bani and Sonu looked around the room...

Preeto- Neend toh achi aayi na raat ko? huh?

Meeta- Preeto tu bhi na!! Waise tere Rajbeer ji kaise hain?

Preeto- Topic maat change kaar !

Meeta- Kyun ? Hum thodi si masti nahi kar saakte ... waise mujhe lagta hain tumhe dinner date par jaana chaiye ...

Bani- Yes Meeta di... haan Preeto di aapko date pe jaana chaiye... waise bhi tu aur Rajbeer baar nahi ge... mera matlab akele ??

Simran- Yes Preeto... aur tumhein perfect opportunity mil gayi hain ... Next Week Rajbeer ka birthday hain ... tum kuch special plan karo sirf tum dono ke liye??

Preeto- Wow phir toh hum jayege baar ... Rajbeer ka birthday hain ... toh mein usai perfect shaam gidt karna chahti hoon... par tum saab log?? yeh fair nahi hain?

Simran- Come on Preeto ... Bilkul fair hain ... hum uske liye party throw karege mere ghar pe aur saab ko invite karenge aur shaam ko woh tumhara hain ... thab dinner date kar lena ya jo bhi ho tumhara suprise ...

Preeto- Great Idea ... Preeto smiled... Rajbeer's Birthday ... the perfect day for a suprise ... now she couldn't wait for the day to come soon and she had the perfect plan :)

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Saina

@--Saina--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Ooh RB's birthday coming up can't wait for Preeto's surprise ..Thank you dear

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Bobby1810

@Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Nice one. Really short and sweet. I would like to know what Preeto has planned for Rajbeer's birthday.

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wolfen009

@wolfen009

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

wowww goood job my dear Aqeelah👍🏼

i've really enjoyed reading ur amazing story keep going

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Aneesah

@xxAneesahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Amazing story ... Carry on :)

Edited by PrincessAneesah - 13 years ago

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Maria

@neha fan1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

great update! yipee rajpreet alone tym...FINALLY!

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fehmida

@fehmida

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

very nice Aqeelah !! i loved the idea about rajbeer birthday and waiting for preetos big surprise !!

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Thanks sooo much guyz ... i cba so did a boring episode ... but rajbeer's bday ... abhi toh mind mein tohde tohse ideas hain par 2 ya 3 din mein post karoongi... pressure with other work to but don't worry iss week free hu toh will try to put together some lovely ideas for rajpreet alone!!

bet you lot love the rajpreet scenes ... hu doesn't 😉 xx

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

🥳🥳🥳Part 10 - Rajbeer's Birthday 🥳🥳🥳

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Day of Rajbeer's Birthday & Rajbeer was still asleep, his phone rang and he picked it up half asleep

Rajbeer- Hello?

Preeto- Happy Birthday to you , Happy Birthday to you , Happy Birthday dear Raj - beer... Happy Birthday to you

Rajbeer sat up & smiled

Rajbeer- Thank you Preeto ... so sweet of you ... waise mera gift kaha hain?

Preeto- Gift baad mein milega

Rajbeer- Nahin mujhe abhi gift chaiye phone pe

Preeto- Phone pe???

Rajbeer- Haan Preeto phone pe... ek kiss (he made a kiss noise)

Preeto- RAJBEER! NO!

Rajbeer- Fine mein tumse baat nahi karoonga bye

Preeto- Rajbeer tum bhi na bacho ki taara ziid karte ho ...fine yeh lo

Preeto looked around & gave a kiss on the phone , she whispered ...

Preeto- I love ...

PREEETO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Preeto- Oh teri !! Beeji bulari hain ... bye

Sometime later Simran phoned Rajbeer

Simran- Rajbeer mere ghar ajana shaam ko okay ... want to talk to you about something personal

Rajbeer- Sab teekh toh hain na?

Simran- Yeah everything's fine just wanted to tell you something ... okay bye

Simran did that just to get Rajbeer at her house in time ... she got her house in full decoration with colours such as dark blue and light blue and silver ...

Pankaj , meeta and Preeto's family arrived to Simran's house where Dhruv was busy putting drinks and stuff out ...

Simran- Okay guys ... jab rajbeer ayega hum saab usa big surprise denge ... lights jab mein off karoongi tum sab chup jaana okay ...

Preeto- Superb Idea Simran ... shhh lagta hain Rajbeer agaye ...

Rajbeer came in ... it's very dark he thought ... he started walking forward saying koi hain ???

In an instant the lights flashed & everyone shouted Surprise .. HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAJBEER ...

Rajbeer- WOW!! WHAT A NICE SURPRISE !! Thank you maine yeh expect nahi kiya ..

All the rest of the guests came in through the door ... the air force officers came & shook hands with Rajbeer ...

Rajbeer's other friends came from Mumbai ... these were his college friends ... who he knows very well ... Dhruv called them as a surprise for Rajbeer...
Rajbeer was very happy seeing them ... he introduced his friends to Simran , Preeto and the others ...

Rajbeer- WOW!! How nice of you all to turn up ... guys meet my friends ... ye mere saab se khaas dost hain ... Meet Saina, Sneha, Gowrisa, Bobby & Maariyah ...

Rajbeer- Waise tum saab ko party ke baare mein kaise pata chala ?

Saina- Dhruv ne phone karke hum saab ko bulaya ... anyways happy birthday ... apne dosto se nahi milo ge ??

Rajbeer- Yeah sure .. kyun nahi ...

He met them all with a hug :)

Rajbeer- Thanks Dhruv ... I'm very happy to see you all ...

Sneha- Us too , after a long time seeing you ... waise we found out that you joined the air force ... bauth acha laga sun kar ..

Bani- Acha no more gapai shapai ... dance karte hain ... couple dance ... oooh

So they had a dance ... Rajbeer took Preeto's hand and held her waist by the other hand & swayed slowly to the beat of the slow song... Ishu & Dhruv did the same as well as Pankaj and Meeta who were looking funny dancing ...
Eveyone cheered them all on ... ecspecially Maariyah & Bobby who were screaming loudly ...

Sneha, Saina, Gowrisa, Bobby and Maariyah danced with random guys in the party ... after a bit loud music came on with disco lights ... everyone danced doing their own moves ...

Turn by turn Rajbeer danced with his friends ... just for a laugh ... first Sneha , he twirled her around ... then Saina , then gowrisa and then bobby and Maariyah ...
they were having a laugh ... den they just boogie woogied with him ...

Preeto felt a bit jealous there were girls with Rajbeer but then she didn't take it to heart coz they're just his friends ... nothing else ...

-------------------CAKE TIME-----------------------

The cake was a big round icing cake with red icing on top saying happy birthday rajbeer...

Everyone sang Happy Birthday to him , he blew the candles and everyone cheered

Sneha & Saina threw poppers who were joined in by Simran , Bani and Meeta

He cut the cake and gave it to Papaji and Beeji and then Preeto ...Preeto then fed him ... Rajbeer fed cake to his close ones and friends ...

-----------------------PRESENT TIME------------------

Preeto gifted a big teddy with i love you on
Papaji , beeji , bani & sonu gave a big photo frame which had pictures of all of them
Ishu Dhruv gave a jacket
Pankaj Meeta gave box of jalebi's hand made
Simran gifts designer clothes
Saina gifts deisal Perfume
Sneha gifts mug with Rajbeer's name on it
Bobby gifts a android phone
Gowrisa gifts a chain with love hearts... she gives 2 one with letter R and one with letter P ...
Maariyah gives Keyring with a photo of him and Preeto on

Rajbeer thanks everyone for the gifts ...and says he loves them all
and says to bobby he needed a new phone ... he thanks the rest for every gift he received... he hugs all his friends while they leave and he is also about to leave when Preeto tells him to come with her
she takes him to the boutique for a candle light dinner ... she couldn't find him a better place ... more private place just for them 2

They arrived and Preeto led him to where the round table was placed with dinner and candles... it made the atmosphere romantic ...

Rajbeer- Wow Preeto ... this is superb ... candle light dinner ... best idea ever akele rehne ka

Preeto - Thoda sa ajeeb lagra hoga na kyunke boutique mein hain ... koi achi jaga nahi mili ..

They both took their seats ...

Rajbeer- Preeto yeh best place hain ... agar tum mujhe dhabai mein le jaati toh bhi mujhe acha lagta ... tumhare saath kayi bhi avha lagta hain

Preeto- Mujhe bhi ...

Rajbeer- Waise mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum itni romantic ho

Preeto- Woh toh mein hoon

They ate the food ... and enjoyed their time ...

Rajbeer- Khana is superb ... very tasty ... kaha se laaya

Preeto- Meri friend bauth achi cook hain usne banaya ... mein toh kuch bana nahi sakti

Rajbeer- Haha mujhe toh tumhare jale huye parathe yaad hain ... ykya parathe thhe

Preeto- Tum mujh par hasre ho ...

Preeto got angry and stood up ... Rajbeer got up and held her from behind ... putting his face on her shoulders ...

Rajbeer- Sorry Preeto ... mein toh mazak kara tha

Preeto- Tumhe acha lagta ke mein tumhe oot balao .. nahi na

Rajbeer- Kaha na Sorry ...

Preeto- Teekh hain mafi given ...

She pulls his nose and runs away ... saying come on fauji get me

Preeto- Come on fauji ... dekhte hain ke tum mujhe pakar paon ge ya nahi ...

Rajbeer - challenge ha ??

Preeto- Yes challenge ...

Rajbeer- accepted ... mujhe harni ki aadat nahi hain ...

Preeto- Dekhte hain Fauji Rajbeer hahaha

She ran around the table and then tried to go behind the work table but Rajbeer grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him

Rajbeer- Yeh fauji jeet gaya ... ab ek dance hojaye my princess

Preeto- Teekh hain handsome

They danced ... and then he turned her around really fast ... she nearly fell but he grabbed her waist and hand and held her down so she was in his arms ... they stood staring at each other ... ( music played nazar se nazar mile)

After some time he pulled her up and then tuned her so they were both facing the front ... he held her tightly putting his arms around her swaying side to side ... Preeto could feel rajbeer's breath on her neck ... rajbeer leaned closer and kissed her ... preeto turned around and hugged rajbeer... they were in each other's arms for a lot of time ...

Rajbeer pulled Preeto from his shoulders slowly and then bent down ... he got something out of his pocket ... and held it up

Rajbeer- Preeto main tumse bauth Pyaar karta hoon ... and tumhare bina ek pal bhi reh nahi sakta ... tum mujhse shaadi karogi ???

Preeto cried with happiness

Preeto- Haan Mein tumse Shaadi karoongi ... I love you Rajbeer

Rajbeer put the ring on her finger ... and then got up ... he held her face

Rajbeer- Ab kyun ro rahi ho ??

Preeto- Khushi ke aasoo hain ... maine yeh pal kitni baar imagine kiya ... aur maine yeh kabhi expect nahi kiya .. itni jaldi nahi expecy kiya par main bauth khush hoo ...

Preeto hugged him tightly ...

Rajbeer- I love you Preeto

Preeto- I love you Rajbeer