Maanvi's Illness/Jeevika's Pregnancy -OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys! Im a silent member but this show is driving me insane with the draggg although i LOVE the show and all the characters! Everybody is excellently portraying their roles and to satisfy myself, im writing about my version of Maanvi's illness and Jeevikas Pregnancy.. .. :) Hope you guys like it! Do comment! I am going to include every character if i can!

I might continue if i get requested to..

im trying to carry off from where the story is right now..

Starts with Jeevika lying in bed and Viren coming to her with an idea. To test whether she is pregnant or not, he wants her to take the self pregnancy test. Jeevika first denies but then gives in as Maanvi who was peeking through the door once again screams "yes!" Jeevika hits maanvi and asks her if she knows whats going on and Maanvi says yes with excitement and so do the rest of the family members as they stand outside the bedroom door. Jeevika blushes and because the rest of the family members insist, she decides to go in the bathroom and take the test as the rest of the members anxiously are waiting for the results..

Dr. Manan is studying Maanvi's reports and he calls Beeji's phone which is in the living room apart from the rest of the family. He calls Beeji many times and Virat, who is passing by hears the rings to the cellular device..

Jeevika comes out of the bathroom and everybody anxiously questions her and she slowly responds that the test came out negative. Viren and the rest of the family are saddened but Jeevika starts smiling and says, why is everyone so upset? Im not pregnant right now, it doesn't mean I will never have kids and at her remark, everybody cheers up and agrees with her..

In the other room, Virat picks up the call and Dr. Manan starts talking thinking it is Beeji who has picked up the call. Dr. Manan starts talking to "Beeji" and asks if she showed Maanvi's reports in Chandigarh and Virat finally replies saying "Maanvi's reports?" Manan realizes that he was talking to someone other than Beeji and hangs up the call. Virat is confused thinking that why would Beeji be showing Maanvi's reports if Beeji is sick...

Beeji and Chachu are sitting in the room and planning out how to tell Jeevika because now that she isn't pregnant, they don't have to worry about affecting her child. Beeji starts questioning god as to why Maanvi? Why do both the sisters have to suffer and what is he punishing them for? Beeji is hysterical and as she is crying, Virat enters. Virat is confused.. He asks Beeji why she is crying and if she is okay? Beeji tells him she was missing Dabbu and her family in Rishikesh and Virat asks if she is lying.. He says Dr. Manan called and Beeji and Chachu are shocked. Beeji questions Virat as to if he talked to Dr. Manan and Virat says yes.. This leaves Chachu and Beeji crushed because they think Virat knows everything. Beeji stutters and asks him if he knows.. Virat says yes even though he doesn't because he wants to see if Beeji will tell him what everything is about. Beeji breaks down and begs him not to reveal anything to anyoen because if anyone finds out then everyone will be crushed especially Jeevika. Virat plays along and Beeji is about to say something else when there is a knock at the door.. Its Swamini Bua calling them for dinner. Beeji quickly wipes her tears and makes Virat promise he won't say anything which leaves Virat extremely curious and anxious.

Maanvi is sitting in her room watching tv and doesn't realize its time for dinner. She looks at the clock and realizes its time and jumps up to go but suddenly everything goes blurry. She's standing and her head is spinning.. she clutches her head and looks helpless. She is trying to make it to the bathroom so she can wash her face and relieve herself a little but she just can't walk anymore. She falls back on the bed and she is sweating intensely..

Everyone is coming to the dinner table and Jeevika realizes that Maanvi is missing so she says she will go call her quickly but Virat says that she should rest and he will go call maanvi. Viren smiles at the fact that Virat decided to go call Maanvi and he gives Jeevika a "i told you so" look which makes Jeevika shake her head saying "no." Viren nudges at Jeevika and says..."There was a time when only YOU went to go get maanvi but now my brother cares so much that he himself goes to call her..." and at this comment Jeevika smiles with jealousy.. and she tells Viren that he is trying too harddd but she knows her sister best!

Virat is on his way towards maanvi's room and Maanvi who is slowly getting up, tries really hard to hold herself up and look presentable..Virat reaches to her room and doesn't bother to even knock and goes straight for the handle.. Virat swings the door open as he's about to make fun of maanvi and sees her clutching her head about to fall over... Virat is shocked and he runs towards her and catches hold of her.. Virat carries maanvi back to her bed and gets a glass of water and tells her to drink it.. he feels her fever and is extremely worried..Virat decides to go call somebody but he is stopped by maanvi holding his hand.. Maanvi says she is fine and Virat says that she is not fine and she has a fever AGAIN so she must get checked.. Maanvi freaks out hearing this.. and before they can continue their conversation.. Viren is standing at the door...

Thats all for now.. i might continue laterrr
sorry if i bored you guys! 😵

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it! Great Os on the whole situation, very clearly written. I loved how it incorporated all the characters not just one main couple. You can never leave a story on a cliff hanger. Do continue, it was a very good read and was very interesting and engaging .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written. Please Continue. 😃

I don't know why everyone is going crazy or rather getting mad at CVS for showing Jeevika Pregnant. But dude she is not. I am 200 % sure she is not. If you watch the India-forum video of Holi celebration in EHMMBH, the way she was playing holi with manvi and dancing with Viren, It CLEARLY showed that she is not pregnant. If she was then Vadheras, specially Viren would not even allow her to walk couple steps by herself. Typical Indian drama thing 😆 But still LOVE watching them. 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please please continue i love cirat and his concerned behaviour towards maanvi oh will viren find out??? Please cobtinue this is tremendous i loved it especially when virat acted cleverly and played along as he knew abwt maanvi's illness when u do continue plsz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome... when r u going to update it???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you guys sooo much! Im glad you guys liked it! I appreciate all of your comments! I shall continue..maybe later today i will post it! I will PM you guys! Thanks again!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is awesome! Now that Virat has found some hint of what is happening to Maanvi, I am curious to see how he'll tackle the situation. Loving this:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was Great please PM me when you update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
pl continue soon and m me its update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ ksbkbtfan1

OMG!!!! beautifully written...amazing!!!! plss continue sooon... n plss PM me also...

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