Can I close this one too Please MOD.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all i Love NAMAN SHAW!!

WOW! Beautifully written! Zee this was just fab!!

Aww i love the way he wanted her to be her usual "sherni" self. I found the bro-sis love so adorable! The way he noticed that there was something wrong was really amazing, i had tears stinging my eyes promise i aint lying. 😆

Even the irrational-fool-Payal didn't notice the pain khushi was going through eventhough she had been with her for so long yet her brother being away from her can still tell that she was upset.

LOOOL! I was on the verge of falling from my bed at this bit:- Arnav held out a hand to him, Krish slapped it immeditely...Omg i can imagine the confused "WHAT THE" look on his sexy face! Ahaha

HA! There is someone that can be as tough and rough as Arnav Singh Raizada.

Thanks for the pm

Much love.

xx


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahhh i loved it Zee!😃 Krish, Krish, Krishhhyyy thats my favourrite name, Its sooo cuuute!😳 And Krish is just amazinggg he's here for his Khushi, Everythings going to be okay for Khushi now!😃 Awww another part? prettyyy please, I know you get annoyed but please, I want to read more Krish!😉

Update soon if you do and thanks for the PM!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks zara. First i liked the way he searched for her irritating her. Second i liked how he found something was amiss just by looking at her. Third i liked how he hugged arnav. Fourth i loved how arnav felt uncomfortable. Fifth i am really glad there is somebody for khushi. Sixth was the samosa thing. Seventh was arnav getting nervous. Eighth was for you writing this. Awww thank you. I really missed you this weekend and i wish people comment on your ff so i could have an update. Thanks hon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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zeee this is not an os but infact an ss...already love this krish character and would love to see brother vs brother...plz do think abt it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful os!!
I wish something like this happens in the show too!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you WILL continue.
and that was NOT a request.
it was a DEMAND!
zeee you are fabulous...brilliant...i may keep you!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hw i wish dis happens on da show..😍
it'll b a treat 2 watch Arnav lyk dis..uncomfortable,guilty,angry n scared..😈
loved it 2 bits Zee..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahahaha, I liked this introduction! Khushi's brother seems very cute! I enjoyed reading it a lot. Fantastic OS, I loved reading it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nyc os..but u need tp cpnti it :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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zeee
this is not fair
u left me hanging
like literally yaar!!!!
not fair at all
wudve loved if u continued but ur not going to
so im not going to ask u too either...im just gna make up wat i think shud happen and then erm...if i feel its good enough may post it...u never know

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