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my first os..hope u njoy reading it!
kria & rey are best friends & room-mates.they both know that they hav some feelings between them..
kria comes home all frustrated & throws her bag & starts mumbling something to herself. Rey who was watching a movie was nt surprised to see kria in hyper mode. he asks casually
Rey: baatcutter, kya hua? what happened??
kria: muje hindi aati hain!
rey: what??
kria: "kya hua?wt happnened??" it means the same rey..
rey: ok..ab batau hua kya hain?
kria: kuch nahi
rey moving closer: muje nahi bataugi?
kria: wo..wo..
rey: kya wo..wo...? tum uss ladke ko nahi bataugi jisse tum "XYZ" feelings feel karti ho?
kria: "xyz"?
rey: bhulgayi??
kria goes into a flashback..
*flashback*
kria returns back from college & finds a girl with rey. they were chatting n having coffee.
rey sees kria n says
rey:hy kria! meet shravya my frind..& shravya, meet kria my baatcutter..uh.. i mean my best frind..
kria throws a fake smile n says: hi, nice to meet you.
rey notices it n gets confused..πŸ˜•
s: hi kria, nic to meet u too..😊
s: rey is a gud friend right? he's fun to be with right??!
kria jst nods n rolled her eyes at rey..
rey jst smiled n is still confused!
they spnd sum tym n den shravya leaves..
after she left, kria glares at rey..😑
rey confused asks: kya hua?aise kyun dekh rahi hain?
kria : u r impossible! tumne usse yahan kyu bulaaya? woh bhi muje bina bataye?? kya zarurath thi usse yahan bulaane ki??uh!! ab chup kyun ho?batau kyu bulaaya??😑😑
rey: chill baatcutter!!πŸ˜‰bolne ka moka toh do..?
kria: ok.. bolo..
rey: shravya ne muje aaj assignment mai help ki..issilye maine socha ki usse coffee pe invite karke special feel karke thank karunga..
kria full on angry mode: main toh humesha tume tumari assignments aur projects main help karti hu.. tumne kabhi bhi muje thank ya SPECIAL feel nahi karvaya hai Mr. REYAANSH SINGHANYA!! 😑 😑 😑
rey: accha! tum ab muje soch kar batau ki tum kis baat par gussa ho?
1st: ki maine shravya ko ghar bulaaya
2nd: ki maine usse toda special feel karvaya ya phir..
moving very close to kria & holding her waists
isliye kyu ki maine tume 'SPECIAL' feel nahi karvaya??? stressing the wrd SPECIAL..
kria is nervous wid d closeness n stammers
kria: wo..main wo..
rey smirking: wo tum..wo kya baatcutter??
kria still lost fr wrds says nothing..
rey: kyu tume bura lagta hain jab mai kisi aur ladki se baat karta hu ya phir usse ghar bulaata hu?? kyu kria??
kria: kyu ki...tum.. mere best friend ho!
rey:yeh answer nahi hai kria.. kya koi aise wall ko hug karta hai jab bst frn pass aata hai??
kria realising tht she was leaning against the wall fr support straightens herself...
rey chuckles n says: jawaab hai kya??
kria: bst frn toh aise itnaaa... paas bhi nahi aata hai.. (stressin 'inta')
rey: bingo!! to kya hai humari beech mai??
kria:um... uh..'XYZ'!
rey: huh??
kria: humari beech 'XYZ' feeling hai! jaise math mai hume 'x' ko solve karna padta hai vaise hi hume yeh 'XYZ' feeling ko solv karna hoga!! she said it wid a sweet smile..
rey who knew wt dey felt fr each odr jst smiled at her kiddish behaviour n daid: ok! πŸ˜ƒ
*flashback over*
kria: haan yaad hai..
rey: toh kaho kya baat hai??
kria: woh.. main bhulgayi..
rey: kya??😲
kria dreamily: jab bhi tum paas aate ho.. mai apna gussa bhulkar tumari aankon mai kho jaati hu...😊
rey: oh! really??! n smirked..
kria realizing wt she jst said cursed herself n said
kria: uh.. nothin..(feelin embarrassed)πŸ˜³πŸ€”
rey: u sure?? he asked huskily..
kria: nahi..haan.. i mean its ok..
rey:ok! jab tak tum 'xyz' ko solv nahi karti hum bhuke nahi bait sakte na? chalo kuch yummy sa khana banathe hai..
n he left smirking & leaving bhind kria who ws lost in her thghts n said
kria to herself: hey universji!! yrh kya horaha hai mere saath?? 'xyz'huh!! isse jaldi solve karna padega varna mai paagal ho jaungi.. & she went to the kitchen to help rey..! πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰










so how was it?? sorry if u guys dint lik it.. its the first tym am writin an os.. so.. hope it came out well.. dont frgt to like & comment plz... 😊😊










part 2 - pg 4
part 3- pg 4
part 4- pg 8
part 5- pg 11
part 6- pg 14
part 6 continued- pg 18
part 7 (last part) - pg 21
Edited by kria1996 - 13 years ago

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crazysky thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i really liked the answer xyz wali feeling lol so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome ...loved it very muchπŸ‘
xyz feelings was awesome
please continue and pm me
Edited by luv_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww... XYZ!!!thats so cute...plz continue...and plz plz pm me...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh cool "XYZ" i loved it do cont nd pm for ur nxt update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really good please pm me when you continue :D

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Posted: 13 years ago
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XYZ feeling loved it!!!!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it ! Xyz feeling so cute. Plz pm me whn u update nxt time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyce concept . . . . I love dis flatmate idea . . . . . Upar se xyz feeling... So cute... Plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it especially xyz. plz pm next time u update

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