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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
superbbb start dear...
really loved it...
eagerly waiting for the next
cont sooonnn...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
superb 😆
plx pm me da next part if possible 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
wooohooo awesome start :) plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
nice start...
so Maan is married and he loves Geet so much...
and i hope the girl hes married to is his Geet...
cont soon and plz pm me...
sent the buddy invite...
also update on the FF thread...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
nice part...why i feel he married to geet only...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi gals...thanks a lot for ur comment...so here i m updating the next part...sorry i was unable to reply to u all individually...

p.s: add teju_pm to ur buddy list to get pm's...sorry i cant pm from this id as i have total 180 frnds in this but only few are reading my updates and i m unable to know who to send pm and whom not to...more over i have less time...mine is a hard schedule...hope u understand...

Maan's love

part 2

Maan singh khurana is now married…..and there my geet will be waiting excitedly for my return…..

As the announcement came maan stood and walked forward not even caring a bit about the girl following him silently……well may be say she is scared….why wont she be scared….she is married to him a day ago..waited for him in their SR but he dint show up and then suddenly travelling altogether to some place…out of country….and here he is not even caring a bit about her…forget about caring she don't she he even remember that she is his wife……

Maan walked forward and for the 100th time tried to call geet….but every time he call her he got the same answer….he called her yesterday night…..

"maan….i m so busy yaar…..look I got another meeting to attend now since u r out of town…..waise as u said lot of times work is important hain na…but still I miss u a lot maan…..u know how much I hate working alone….why did u go leaving me….haan haan I know that ur dadi is ill….okay man whatever…plz come back soon…..i m missing u like hell…..okay now I should get going…..adi sir already took the clients in now I should go…."

"but geet listen….its really important"

"what is more important that 100 c deal maan….and that too the deal that we are looking forward for, from so long"

"but geet"

"maan honey plz its already late……bye"

Arghhh those are the words I told her whenever she came to me asking me to take her out….'work is more important'……now I really regret saying those words.

But I still tried calling her again this morning.

"maan is this the time to speak yaar….arey see the time yaar…I m so sleepy"

"but geet listen…."

"okay tell me what"

"geet its really horrible here"

"what!!!...is ur dadi okay???"

"haan geet she is okay but its actually about me….i…..i mean i……they ….i mean….they made me marry a girl…but geet….trust me I don't really agree this marriage but…..geet…..geet…"

The other side was totally silent….she would have shouted by now and have started her scoldings….then what happened?

"geeet…..geeet"

He again tried.

"geeet"

He literally shouted this time.

"arhhh maan…..let me sleep….whatever u want to say say tomorrow morning"

"u sleeping!!!!!!!!!!"

"plz maan good night"

She hang the call. This is really a masterpiece…..she is not even giving me a chance to explain her the position…..but may be its better to say it to her by person than on phone.

But still he tried to call her again and again until he reach the plane and the air-hostess asked him to switch off his phone. He silently went and sat on his seat and the girl came and sat beside him. He just hated that. He immediately stood up and asked the air-hostess for a seat exchange and he made sure that the person who are going to sit beside that girl is a lady as he knows she wont sit beside another man.

He took another seat as far as possible from her but still made sure she was safe. He again tried to call geet for one last time but he got the same reply 'no response' he quickly left a msg saying his return and asking her to meet him soon. He silently switched off his phone and closed his eyes. after like 3 hours he opened his lappy and connected the net. He opened him gmail and found her mail.

Hey maan,

How r u? missed u a lot dear…..well about the project…..that deal is ours…yippee…..i m sorry I was really busy and dint speak to u well but will make sure to pay u back as u always say….ur payback…..for this deed….so when will be back…I have lot of things to share

love u honey

ur Geet…..

Maan looked at…..well stared at the screen and tears formed in his eyes….how much she loves him…..he quickly press the reply and started writing but soon the chat box opened….

Hey maan

Geet

Missed u honey

Meet too love…

Want to say u something imp

In chat!!!!!

No in person…

Wow so u r coming back!!!

Yup darling…

Was on flight already

Grt….

I m sooo happy maan…finally after a week

Yup darling

Maan the meeting went so well and the deal is also signed

I know darling u can do that….i read ur mail…

Ohh then y dint u reply

I m doing the same now

NOW!!!!!!! 😡

I sent that a day ago maan😡

I was so busy dear I m unable to open my mail…

Ohh so u r that busy that u were not even able to check ur mail in phone which u often do even when u are with me……

No darling listen….this was really something horrible

What happen u okay na

I m fine….but life is not really fine

Maan what happened to u….why are u speaking like that

Will say u dear but in person….

Will be home by 4 this evening….

Ahh still 8 hours left maan….its still 8 here…

I cant drive a flight darling

Ahh grt joke….

So u getting ready for office???

Yup maan

Okay go ahead don't be late…

Yeah yeah I know….u don't like to be late…

😃

Okay then bye honey

Bye love.

How can I say u geet….how can I say u that I m married….


will be back soon gals...

but this time i expect more likes and comments😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
aww..that was so sweet..
But wat s happening?
Is ds not geet..?
me getting more worried..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome upadte
loved it
me worried about geet now
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
hey
nice concept. . . . .
update soon. . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
oh gosh i am getting worried, maan is married

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