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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

BTW... if geet says ILU..koi grantee nahi hain..he would reply ILU
he may just be ok.. well I knew that😆😆😆
u know MSK attitude
then don't kill me🤢🤢🤢
who said she i snot masti & fun.. didn;t u see her attitude when she threw his bday cake in the bin
& not approving of his joining other office
its her dream .. trust she won't let go
double update.. umm.. muskan trying..
& typing😳

THANK YOU! Who is better than you?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

THANK YOU! Who is better than you?

puchki...
😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh i just love the update my maanu jaanu is shooo cute
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks


PART 175


While driving back home.. two impt person in his life didn't wish him...not that such things mattered to him.. but he felt sad.. or was it lonely.. or something missing.. exactly... he felt ..his first day in office went perfectly well.. this company seemed perfect. His dream job!!! still something was missing!!
he sighed changing the tracks in the CD.

Well the moment he reached home he had his full attitude on.. happy shappy... celebration mood.
He planned his evening out with Raj.
They had their full masti getting drunk.. session
Maan went ga ga abt his job & how much he loved it etc etc..
after all the masti.. & having dinner.. he became all saddy saddy.. again
veer she didn't wish me he pouted cutely
she doesn't like me
she doesn't like wat ever I do
she is angry with me
raj thought of calling Geet & tell her to take him home.. that would be best thing to do especially with all his pouting
& he didn't think a bit ..just simply called Geet..
raj ' hi
Geet ' raj??
she looked at the time & wondered
raj ' wo Maan
she got really worried
raj ' he is ok... actually we r drunk. Can u drop us home.. ?
but then she was not allowed to go anywhere alone she didn't know wat to do. had it been before the incident in mumbai.. she would have been there.. but here she is at KM.. she can't do anything like that
Geet ' I am not allowed to go out alone
raj saw his plan failing.. he sighed ..like he was disappointed types..& disconnected the call.
He some how wanted Maan to meet her like this.. so that he speaks out all his pouting to her. at least she gets to know wats in his heart.

He drew to KM & dropped Maan at the outhouse & sneaked out after knocking the door.
Geet opened the door with a stick in her hand...
Maan looked at her with stick & pouted ..mar lo.. bus yeh hi rah gaya tha
ek tho mujhe wish nahi kiya
aur abhi mujhe bday ke din mar bhi rahi ho
puchki u never knock the door, I didn't know its u

she looked around for raj.. then wondered why did he drop him here
he gave a suspicious look.. whom r u opening the door for then... he went around her looking for some mysterious guy.. he looked at her zaroor Karan hoga
puchki ur drunk
no
he tried to stand straight in full attitude
I am not drunk
she pushed him in closing the door behind.
Sach main puchki u have become irresponsible .. kal office jana hain & look at u
why r u bothered.. tum tho yeh hi chathi ho ki main office chod doon
iss liyen tum ne mujhe wish bhi nahi kiya

his eyes looked into her eyes deep complaining.. pleading..like nothing else mattered at that moment.
His hands went around her waist pulled her for a dance.. keeping her captive with his eyes.
he pressed some buttons in his phone & played some music...
its was the best day of my life... I love this job so much he said still looking into those almond eyes that began to search the reason for his sadness when he is so happy with his job.. & now masti with raj
they even cut a cake for me in the office
like a small bday celebration.
they found it cute.. first day of the job ..
he emphasized dream job.. & bday on the same day
bday bhi aisen no one wished me
she looked at him puzzled... just now he said he celebrated in the office
dad ne bhi wish nahi kiya
he turned her around with the music & tucked her closer still looking into her eyes.. his deep eyes were diluted. Tum ne bhi.. before..he could complete... she leaned against him a little & pressed a kiss to the bottom of his chin. She gave him a wobbly smile. He was not able to dance further.. just stood their gaping at her wanting to believe wat he felt looking intently at her she kissed him again, rising up on her toes to meet him..the kiss was a total surprise & she held him until her lungs burned for air...
gasping she whispered against his lip happy birthday still clinging to him, eyes locked closely., he could clearly see a blush rise to her cheeks . She was shivering within with her own audacity. With strong trust he pushed her against the wall.. framing her face with his hands kissing her until her head spun. Over joyed .. tipsy only with her kiss now.. he kissed her again & again.. not wanting to .. slowly pull away.. I need a shower.. he whimpered between the kisses.


Precap
Maan busy with his new profile
-PREV PART 174 NEXT LINK THREAD 28-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Geet ne maan ko wish kiya yippie aur to aur gift bhi diya hmmm dreamy loved the way maan say mar lo.. bus yeh hi rah gaya tha
ek tho mujhe wish nahi kiya
aur abhi mujhe bday ke din mar bhi rahi ho
thanks 4 the double dhamaka di awesome update
Edited by zeeenu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan finally got his wish 😛
Edited by -memorable- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. Finally, Geet helped him with hir job. Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for update. THese two are driving me insane. Why can't Puchki confess to Mistimia. Cant' wait Muski please update soon.

Waiting Eagerly

Waiting Patiently

Waiting Impatiently

Waiting with eyes wide open


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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful
luved it
maan is soo cute nd so is Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice prt di
but lscdont drag more di
cant take more
mse them.to express tere live
wsiting.fr next prt
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