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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayapari
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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Chapter 31:

note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' for pms. or tell me i will add.

recap: Maan comes to know that he has a daughter maanvi. Maan n others meet geet in his office after 2 long years. Adi follows swetha n gives her address to maan n geet will be scared seeing sid there. Rishab n karthik comes to banglore n tells that anand is out of coma. All will be very happy n a person comes to the office n will be very happy seeing rishab, maan n sudha. Geet tells that someone tried to kill anand n its not a accident.

Maan gets angry hearing that n asked kisne kiya yeh sab.

Suddenly they heard maanvi crying. Maan rushed to her n took her in his arms. Maan is patting her back not to cry but maanvi is crying continously.

Beta why u r crying? R u hungry asked maan.

Geet yeh meri poti hain na? Asked rishab.

Ha papa hamari maanvi told geet.

Maanvi again slept in maan's arms cluching his shirt with her tiny tiny fist.

Geet is very happy seeing them n had tears in her eyes.

Geet goes near karthik n hugs him.

I miss u yaar told karthik.

Miss u too chinna. By the way who is he? Asked geet pointing towards that person.

I dont know yaar.

Sudha n yash hugs geet.

Kaha chali gayi tu. Tumko pata bhi hain hum kitne darr gaye the. 2 years geet, ab aur nahi tum hamare saath hi hogi. Ab koi bhi humko alag nahi kar sakte. Chalo hum sab delhi chalte hain told sudha.

Geet dont know what to tell to change the topic geet asked dii who is he??

sudha looked at him n smiled but immediately her eyes became red due to anger. Geet observed that n asked

di aap thik tho ho na?

Ha main thik hu.

Sudha turned towards maan n told maan call swetha.

Suddenly geet became nervous n told nahi di plzz dont call her.

Rishab took maanvi from maan. Maan went towards geet n told geet jab tak main tumare saath hu tab tak tumko kuch nahi hoga. Swetha ne tumko jhoot kaha.

Nahi maan what she told is right. Meri wajah se sab kuch meri wajah se hua.

Maan signalled adi to call swetha. Adi nodded n called her n told her to come to office.

Kuch nahi hua geet, dont u trust me asked maan.

Geet nodded but still not convinced.

All are silent for sometime. Just then swetha entered office. She is hell shocked to see geet there. After seeing her she is sweating heavily.

Geet held maan's hand tight. Maan signalled sudha to go near swetha.

Oh welcome swetha. How r u?? oops sorry wrong question.

Swetha got annoyed n asked why did u call me?

We want to listen what u told to geet.

What did I tell to her? She is in front of u. why dont u ask her. See how is she? Dont she feel ashamed for what she did? smirked swetha seeing the condition of geet.

BAS EK AUR BAAT NAHI MERI GEET KE BAARE MEIN roared maan.

Kya kaha tumne vinod bhai ka maut geet ki wajah se hua haina?

Ha main abi bhi yehi kehti hu. Vinod bhai ka maut geet ki wajah se hua hain.

Geet sat on the floor n crying bitterly. The person who is standing there is hell shocked to listen this n shouted what the hell r u speaking.

Why u all r shouting on her. Sab kuch meri hi galti hain na, main tho bus 2 saal ki thi isiliye muje kuch bhi yaad nahi hain. Par meri shararat ke wajah mere bhai ka maut hua na. Abi tak muje pata bhi nahi hain told geet crying bitterly.

Dekha geet ne bhi maan lia ki uski galti hain told swetha.

Shut up just shut up. How dare u to talk with my sister like that told that person.

Geet's head shot up n looked at him questionigly.

Ur sister?? asked geet n swetha.

That person went near geet n made her to stand. Geet is just staring at him. He placed his hands protectively on her shoulders n told MAIN GEET KA BHAI VINOD HANDA.

Geet n swetha are hell shocked to hear this. Same with yash, karthik n shanti.

Geet meri behen hain. Muje kuch bhi nahi hua. Aur swetha ek aur baat sunlo ainda se meri behen ko kuch bhi bolne se pehle soch lena ki uski bhai uske saath hain. Meri behen ke khilaaf ek aur baat nahi. Just GET OUT FROM HERE. OUT.. told vinod angrily.

Swetha left from there angrily.

Geet had tears in her eyes n asked aap sach mein meri bhai ho??

vinod cupped her face n kissed her forehead n told ha geet, I am ur brother.

Geet hugged him tight n crying bitterly.

Sachi?? aap kaha the itne din. Muje pata bhi nahi the aapke baare mein. Swetha ne kaha tha ki meri wajah se apke...

vinod broke the hug n kept his finger on her lips n nodded in no.

Muje kuch nahi hua. Tum mari princess ho, tum aise kaise baat kar sakti ho. Ab main aagaya hu. Main hu tumare saath. Ab rona mat.

All had tears in their eyes seeing them like that. Maan is more than happy today. His happiness have no bounds.

Ek baar mujhe bhai kaho na asked vinod.

Bhai called geet.

They both hugged tight. After a long time he met his sister, his brother like friend maan, his father rishab. Now he is gonna meet his family his dad, his mom. How happy they will be seeing his son alive. They never thought in their dreams that this day would come.

Bhai called maan. They broke the hug n looked at maan.

Bhai yeh kaun hain asked maan pointed towards karthik.

Vinod looked at him questionly n again smiled widely.

Hamara chinna. Right?? said vinod. Karthik is surprised how did he know? Only maan n geet will call him like that.

Haan bhai yeh hamara chinna told maan.

Vinod n karthik hugged each other.

Wow... bhai aaj tho itne khushi ke din hain told karthik.

Tumko pata hain I use to call u chinna n geet ko princess told vinod.

U used to call me chinna asked karthik.

Haa yaar.

Sudha introduced yash to vinod n they both hugged each other.

Aap yash malhotra hain na? Asked vinod.

ji... aap doctor vinod. Aapko mere saath appointment the na aaj asked yash.
Ji.. main doctor n yes I have appointment with u told vinod.

But here out cutie pie maanvi is jumping in her dadaji's arms.

Arey yaar hum tho iss VIP ko bhool hi gaye. See how she is jumping told rishab.

All of them turned to them n smiled. Maan took his princess in his arms n told bhai yeh meri beti maanvi.

Yehlo.. yeh kaisi baat hain pouted geet.

Vinod looked at her questionly but geet continued.

Maan yeh sirf tumari beti nahi, hamari beti hain told geet.

Kya?? meri princess ko princess asked surprised vinod.

Ha bhai told geet shyly.

Vinod took maanvi in his arms n kissed her forehead. But immediately he frowned seeing her.

All of them saw his change of expression.

Kya hua bhai asked geet.

Who is vicky?? asked vinod.

Doctor its me. Maine hi aapke saath appointment fix kiye the told vicky.

ok... hum kal hospital chalte hain told vinod.

Hospital kyun bhai asked maan.

Tumko nahi pata asked vinod.

Nahi.. told maan.

Bhai, maan ko nahi pata told geet.

Kya hua geetasked maan.

Geet had tears in her eyes n hugged maan tight.

I am sorry maan, I am so sorry told geet.

Maan broke the hug n cupped her cheeks n asked kya hua shona.

Maan, maanvi ko breathing problem hain. Isiliye vicky ne bhai ke saath appointment fix kiye the.

Maan panicked hearing this. Immediately he took mannvi n kissed her cheeks n asked bhai maanvi thik tho hain na. Kuch nahi hoga na meri beti ko.

Maan kuch nahi hoga tum shaant hojao. Yeh hamari princess hain, main usko kuch nahi hone dunga. Aur kuch serious baat bhi nahi hain told vinod.

Hello meri princess main aapki mama hu told vinod smiling at her.

Just then geet saw shanti who is smiling at her. Geet went n hugged her.

Dekha babaji ne kya kiya. Ab tumko aur maan bhai ko koi bhi dur nahi kar sakta told shanti.

Geet just nodded n told thanku..

chup kar tum muje thanku kab se kehne lagi told shanti making baby face.

Geet turned to vinod n told bhai she is mu best friend, my sister shanti.

Shanti smiled n told hii bhai.

Hii shanti.

Aur ha yeh chinna ki hone wali patni.

Wow.. really, thats awesome. Congrats shanti aur chinna congrats dude told vinod.

Thanku bhai told shanti n karthik.

They all left from there n headed to KM in banglore. After so many years vinod again coming to his house.

In the car:

karthik is driving n shanti sat beside him. In the back seat maan, geet n viond sat. geet is in the middle of maan n vinod n their princess maanvi in maan's arms. Our cute princess is playing with his hair n messing it up n giggling.

Geet yeh bilkul tumari tarah hain. Kitni shararat karti hain dekho mare baal ko kya haal bana diya told maan.

Awww main shararat karti hu. Main kitni achi bachi hu. told geet making baby face.

Tum achi bachi, joke of the year told maan making innocent face.

Maan kya kaha tumne, joke. Dekha bhai aapne kaise chida raha hain yeh mujhe complained geet.

Maan, dont tease my sister told vinod.

Bhai, aapko iske baare mein kuch nahi pata told maan.

Bhai, aapko pata hain maan hamesha muje chidata hain aur jab main choti thi he use to scold me for not studying complained geet making baby face.

Vinod smiled n told main tumare saath nahi the, jab tumko bhai ki jaroorat thi tab main nahi the.

Bhai aisa mat boliye ab aap aagaye na. Maanvi ko maan ke saath chodte hain aur hum dono bohot saare baatein karte hain told geet.

Vinod smiled at her cute sister n hugged her sideways. Geet held maan's hand tight n rested her head on vinod's shoulder.
Today again her life became happy n two important persons in her life are with her.
Her brother who seemed dead came to them n her maan, her husband, her life met after long two years. Today again she is normal. But here maan is restless how to ask her about sid. After many days she is happy n again asking about past will be opening the wounds again. But her brother who is very happy meeting his sister, how will he react when he comes to know what happened with her sister 2 years back. He dont know that they all are meeting after 2 years.
What will be maan's reaction after knowing the truth, will he be able to control his anger? First of all will geet be able to talk with maan n her brother vinod. What will vinod do when he comes to know the truth.

Precap: karthik-rishab n geet's talk.

Maan n vinod taking care of their princess.

Will geet be able to tell the truth??

hii friends here is part 31. hope u all like it.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.

Will be waiting for ur response. 😳

part 32: page 69

Love
-jyothi.

Edited by jyothikrish - 14 years ago

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

loved the update dear...they r all together

very eager to know what Sid did and where was Vinod so many years

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Reshu

@mayapari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

loved the reunion...

swetha got wat she deservrd!!!!!!!!

awesome update dr!!!!!!!!!!!!

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

awsem update shweta idiot ko answer vinod ne de dia love the update maan have breathing problem

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Amazng update jyothi..wow geet's bro zinda hai and that unknwn persn is vinod..swetha ki toh bolti band hogayi..omg hamari choti princess ko breathng prblm hai..i hope ki uski mama usko jaldi teek karde.iam really happy to see happy family again i mean hum saath saath hai types..tanq jyothi 4 such chweet update.i hope geet tell the truth to maan soon..
Love u dear

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sehrish79

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Woww awesome update sweety
Loved it alott
Thank god finally they r together vinod is with them now
Stupid Shewata aacha huwa vinod ne sab ko bata diya
Love their cute nok jokhs
Awww maanvi ko breathing problem :((
I hope woh theek hojaye
Can't wait to read more about sid
Plz plz dear continue soon
Love u sweety mwahhh

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Rupal

@Rupal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Awesome Update.

Thanks for the PM.👏⭐️

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#330

atlast d identity of d man was reveled...actually m thinking if he is alive den where was he fr sooo many years...hw come he is dere nw...why didnt he contact his parents b4...arghhh...sooo much suspense...

den again d truth behind geet's leavig d house...who is sid?...wht happened with geet 2 yrs back...tooo much suspense dear...but i think geet should tell d truth to maan n vinod...she shoudnt b afraid nw coz her full family is with her...

awesome n beautiful update...

i really really really loved it...

its really amazing...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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