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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: spvd
part 31
nice part...
Geet has got back everything now...
now Maan has to remove that fear in her...
cont soon...

thanku deepa... 😊
yes maan will remove her fear for sure..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU
amazing

thanku nandy... 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

thanku dear... 😊
yes she got... but the game is not over yet... 😉

yu updating today??????

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: mayapari

yu updating today??????

yes dear i am updating tonight... 😊

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: impoojaverma
Superb

thanku dear... 😊

Originally posted by: todayzstar
Fabb !!

thanku dear... 😊

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: impoojaverma
part-30 was awsme

thanku dear... 😊

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nagajyothi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: mayapari
ll be waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!

one hour more dear... 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
awww loved it
the way maanvi is messing up maan's hairs was so cute
waiting eagerly to know what did sid do?????? n maaneet ki shaadi kab huvi??????

thanku so much hinal... 😊
yeah when they got married u will come to know soon dear... 😳

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Reshu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: jyothikrish
UPDATING...

waiting😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

#400

Chapter 32:

note: plz add 'maneetmaneet' to ur buddylist for pms. or tell me i will add

Vinod smiled at her cute sister n hugged her sideways. Geet held maan's hand tight n rested her head on vinod's shoulder. Today again her life became happy n two important persons in her life are with her. Geet slept peacefully on her brothers shoulder holding maan's hand tight.

Both maan n vinod smiled seeing her smiling face. Here maanvi sat on maan's lap n turned to him.

Aaa aaa shouted maanvi.

Kya hua beta Asked maan.

Aaa aaa n pointed towards his pen.

Aapko pen chahiye.

Maanvi smiled widely. Maan too smiled n gave her the pen. Maan thought how much I missed in this 2 years. He closed his eyes in pain.

Maan (st): beta main promise karta hu ab main aapko aur apni mama ko kabhi chodke nahi jaonga. She is happy after 2 years I dont want to ask her anything now. Let all of us go to delhi. Aapko apni dada, dadi, nana, nani se bhi milna hain. Wo log kitne khush honge. Aur aapko pata hain aapke nana tho coma se baahar aagaye. Today is indeed an awesome day for me.

Maanvi is trying open the pen cap but its not coming. She made a sad face n looked at maan.

Aww mera bacha u want to open the cap.

Maanvi nodded smilingly. Maan took the pen n was about to open the cap.

Ahhh ahhh shouted maanvi n hold the pen tightly.

Maan looked at her in confusion. Vinod is smiling seeing maan's condition.

Maan ab bolo teri beti ko kya chahiye.

Wahi thi bhai she want to open the cap but its not coming n I am opening it she held it tightly.

Bhai she is ur daughter n also stubborn like u told shanti laughing.

So?? omg.. she only wants to open it. Haina??

exactly bhai told shanti.

Aww meri beti bilkul meri tarah hain told maan n kissed her cheeks.

Till they reach home maan n maanvi are playing with each other. Maan is not leaving his daughter not even for a second. She is playing happily with her dad.

Daaa daaa daaa shouted maanvi n showed him the pen n jumping in his lap.

All of them in the car turned to them n maan is shocked.

Bhai she called me dad. I cant believe this. She called me dad told maan excitedly like a small child.

All of them smiled at him n karthik told beta call me chachu.

Ahaaa first she will call me chachi next then only chachu hain na princess told shanti.

Noo way she is my princess. Hain na maanvi??

noo she is my princess.

No mine

no mine

Geet got up hearing the noise n shouted arey chup. Why u r shouting??

geet dekho na what ur dewar is saying??

kya hua chinna asked geet.

Karthik tum chup hojao. Geet tumko pata hain princess ne maan bhai ko dad kaha told shanti excitedly.

Geet smiled widely n looked at them n asked sachi??

Ha geet. Sach mein told maan.

Geet took maanvi in her arms n kissed her cheeks.

Aww meri baby told geet n hugged her tight. Geet had tears in her eyes.

Maan got worried n asked kya hua geet??

I am so sorry maan itne din tumko maanvi ke baare mein na bolne ki.

Maan hugged her sideways n told shhh shhh dont cry geet. I cant see u like this. Galti tho mera hain tumko 2 saal chodne ki. Ab aur nahi I dont want to see tears in ur eyes. Hain na bhai??

ha geet ab tum chinta mat karo. Sab kuch thik ho jayega told vinod n thinking something.

Vinod (st): maan ko apni beti ke baare mein nahi pata. Aisa kaise ho sakta hain. Kuch tho gadbad hain. 2 saal maan ne geet ko chodkar kahi gaya. Kuch bhi samaj mein nahi aaraha hain. Mujhe maan se baat karna hi hoga. Pata chalna hain aakhir hua kya hain.

They all reached home n went inside. After a long time geet entered banglore KM. She is feeling very happy. All her childhood memories rushed n a smile playing on her lips.

Even vinod too having memories of his childhood. Playing with maan, small small fighting, taking care of geet, maan n vinod playing with geet. Her smile, her cry, her zid, her shararat. Just then rishab, sudha n yash too reached there.

They all settled on the couch n sharing their childhood memories.

Maan pata hain tumko we use to play hide n seek here n sudha use to catch us told vinod.

Ha bhai poor di, always end up with crying for not able to catch us told maan.

Oyee maan chup I am not a cry baby told pouted sudha.

Ha ha humko pata hain, yash aapko pata hain aapki patni har choti choti baat par rona shuru karti hain told vinod.

Ha ha jo bolna hain bolo, I dont care. Tumko pata nahi yash they both use to tease me like hell. Hamesha mera mazaak udate the complained sudha like a small child.

Yash is just smiling at their bonding. After many days he saw his wife being happy.

Oyyy.. why u r teasing my di. Kabadar meri di tease kiya tho warned geet.

Bhai lo aagayi chamchi ki chamchi told maan.

Maan n vinod hi-fied each other n burst out into laughter.

Who is shamchi came a sweet voice.

Arey rupa tum uth gayi aao aao told yash.

Daddyy when did u come asked 4 years old rupa.

Just now beta.

She went n sat on yash lap.

Vinod she is my daughter told sudha.

Arey wah.. hello beta. Dont u come to ur mama asked vinod.

Rupa looked at yash n yash told her to go.

Vinod took her in his arms n asked what is ur name??

rupa smiled n told rupa.

Sweet name. Aapko pata hain who am I??

rupa nodded in a no. vinod smiled n told I am vinod ur mom's brother.

Rupa widened her eyes n asked mom's brother.

Ha beta. I am ur mama.

Mama called rupa. Vinod kissed on her cheeks n gave her a chocolate.

This is for me asked rupa excitedly.

Yes dear its for u.

rupa smiled n turned to her mom. Just then she saw maan n shouted chachu..

maan smiled at her n took her in his arms. How is my rupa? ?

Fine chachu.. chachu who is that baby??

she is ur sister rupa..

my sister, can I play with her asked rupa excitedly.

Ha beta u can play with her told geet.

U u geet chachi.. shouted rupa.

Geet is surprised n asked how u know??

chachi, chachu showed ur photo n told she is geet chachi. When I asked her where r u?? chachu told u r angry on him so u left told rupa making sad face.

Geet took her in her arms n told nahi beta I am not angry on ur chachu.

Really??

yes beta.

Now u wont leave na??

nahi rupa.

Then u will give me chocolates n ice cream.

Ofcourse beta. U know ur chachu scold if he sees anyone eating ice cream. So we will eat secretly. Ok?? whispered geet.

Ok chachi whispered rupa n kissed her cheek.

Lo maan kam tha geet bhi aagayi told sudha.

Di, meri bachi ko kuch mat kehna told geet.

They all had a nice family time. All the girls prepared lunch enjoying their girl talks. Where all the boys r talking about business n other things. Once the lunch is prepared they all sat on the dining table n had lunch. After a long time whole family is having lunch.

Maan is feeding maanvi with his hands. She is silently eating without shararat. Geet is surprised n told princess this is cheating. When I feed u, u run from here n there n today when ur papa is feeding u r eating silently complained geet.

Ha she is papa's princess. She will listen to me. Hain na princess asked maan.

Maanvi smiled n tolddaaa daaa

dekho di, dekho bhai beti aur papa ek group ban gaye told geet making baby face.

Geet u r only acting like a child n u have a daughter told di emotionally.

Geet looked at her nodded in a no.

how did u manage geet. Ek baar bhi nahi socha hamare baare mein asked di.

Now all became serious.

Nahi di, har pal, har waqt mann karta hain aapke paas aajao. But darr jaati thi. When I came to know that I am pregnant, mujhe maan ke paas jaane ka bohot mann kiya.

Phir kyun geet asked maan.

I dont want u to be in trouble. When I was 8^th month pregnant its ur borthday maan. Its first birthday that we r not together. Main bohot royi thi uss din. I was in so much stress n tired mujhe pains aagaya. Aur uss din shanti aur sweety thi mere saath. They took me to hospital. Since the pains came before the date they operated. Isi wajah se maanvi ko problem hua. Sab kuch meri wajah se hua. Sab kuch meri wajah se cried geet.

Immediately shanti went towards geet n hugged her.

Kuch nahi hua geet, sab kuch thik ho jayega. Hain na bhai asked shanti.

Ha bacha I told u na its nothing serous. We have to give medication to her thats it told vinod n went to her.

Geet hugged vinod n cried like a baby. Seeing geet crying maanvi also started crying.

Wuaaa wuaaa..

aww why my princess is crying?? asked maan.

Wuaaa wuaaa cried maanvi n pointed towards geet.

Aww aww mama ko kuch nahi hua.. she is just acting.

Geet immediately wiped her tears n took maanvi in her arms.

Aww mera bacha. Dont cry I am here only smiled geet.

Seeing her smile maanvi stopped crying n smiled at her mama.

Bohot hogaya yeh emotional batein chalo lunch karte hain told karthik.

All smiled n resumed their lunch talking with each other. Finally after lunch they all retired to their respective rooms n relaxed.

Here karthik went to rishab's room.

Dad called karthik.

Karthik beta come.

I wanna talk to u dad.

Come n sit first.

Karthik setttled on couch n told dad we have to take geet to delhi n have to tell them about vinod bhai.

Ha beta I am thinking the same. But its better we call them here. Because its not safe for geet there.

Yes dad u r right. We will inform papa, mama n mom to come to banglore.

Yes beta I will call them. First I have to talk to doctor whether anand can travel or not.

Dad its just 3 hrs journey. He can travel.

R u sure beta.

Dad I am also a doctor smiled karthik.

Ok beta. I will call them. Anything else.

Yes dad told karthik seriously.

What beta??

not now dad, let papa also come we will discuss.

Ok beta. Tum aaram karo. U must be tired.

Ok dad. Bye.

Karthik left from there n went to his room n saw shanti waiting for him. He smiled n hugged her from back. Shanti too smiled n faced him n hugged him tight.

Precap: maneet moments.. 😳

whole handa's n khurana's in banglore. 😃

Swetha's plan. 😡

So guys here is part 32. hope u all like it.

Plz hit LIKE n do COMMENT.😃

Waiting for ur response. 😍

part 33: page 82

Love
-jyothi. 😳

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