MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69

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VERY NICE UPDATE !! DO CONTINUE SOON!!

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Very intrstng part! Sorry 4 my late comment!

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Sajan honeymoon
in goa they reach their room
gunjan was suprised seeing the room it was so beautiful full romantic from window they can view the beech clearly
g-sam this is so beautiful i loved this place a lot
s-mujhe pata tha tumhein yeh place acha lagega main jab bhi goa aata hun isi room main rehta hun
g-tum goa kiske saath aaye the
s-meri ex girlfriend ke saath
g-kya kaun thi woh
s-hain koi beautiful hot smart aur kya bataon shabd nahin hain
g-itni sundar thi toh usse hi shaadi karna tha mujhse kyun ki
s-mom dad ke liye
g-oh really abhi isi waqt baahar jao warna mujhse bura koi nahin hoga
she goes from there sam hugs her from back
g-chodo mujhe
he catches her nose
s-tum ladkiyon ka gussa bhi na naak pe hota hain ek baar bhi gussa karne se pehle sochti nahin ho
he turns her front
s-tum mujhe bachpan se jaanti ho mere life main har pal tum mere saath ho aur mere saath jo bhi hota hain hamesha tumse lehta hun aaj tak kabhi aisa hua ki tumse bina bataye maine kuch kiya nahin na
she nods saying no
s-phir gussa kis baat ki
g-tum goa kyun aaye the
s-bhul gayi hamaare final year main hamaare gang ne goa aane ka plan banaya aur last moment tumhaari mom ki tabiyet kharaab ho gayi aur tumne mujhe jabardasti yehaan akela bheja yaad aaya
g-par tum honeymoon couple ke room main kya kar rahe the
s-iska shrey tumhara stupid uday bhaiya ko jaata hain humne use room book karne ka kaam diya aur woh mahashay bhul gaya last moment humein is hotel ke alwa aur kahin room nahin mila kuch samji
g-par sam
before she continues he captures her lips
she was blushing hard
s-pehle gussa ab blush par tum hamesha hi sundar lagti ho
she rests head on him
g-sam sach main tumhare life main aur koi nahin hain na
s-tum bhi na sab bataane ke baad bhi main mazak kar raha tha mere life main tumhare alawa aur koi nahin hain kitna shak karti ho
g-shak nahin khone ka darr mujhe khud pe yakeen nahin hain ki main itni khush naseeb hun normally love stories main itni aasaani see happy ending nahin milta na
s-isiliye woh story hain yeh life hain agar aise nahin likhte toh koi movie dekhne nahin jaata i love you aur hamesha tumhare saath rahoonga kabhi tumhein chodke nahin jaonga i promise
g-i love you too
he smiles at her innocence
next day morning she wakes up and doesnt find him he didnt return till afternoon her fear was increasing in the afternoon he returns she hugs him with tears
s-tum ro kyun rahi ho
g- tum mujhe chod kar kahaan gaye
s-kuch kaam tha isiliye jaana pada
g-mujhe akela chod kar kyun gaye tumhein pata hain main kitna darr gayi thi
s-tum koi bachi nahin ho ya yeh koi jungle nahin hain
g-sam main yehaan pareshan hun aur tum mujhpar gussa ho rahe ho
s-gussa nahin toh kya kuch kaam tha jaana pada tum sorahi thi isiliye nahin kahaan waise bhi main koi vacha nahin hun ghum jaane ke liye thodi der ke liye hi toh gaya hun ismein hairaan pareshan hone waali kya baat hain itni si baat pe rone ki kya zaroorat hain acha yeh sab chodo jaldi se tayyar hojao lunch karne chalenge
she feels bad with his reaction
they go for lunch but she didnt talk properly during lunch
after lunch they go to their room
s-gunjan yeh tumhare liye
he brings some dress
g-gift mere liye kya hain
s-kholke dekho
it was a knee length gown she never wears such dresses she hates them
s-kaisa hain
g-bahut acha hain
s-jaldi se pehan ke ready ho jao baahar chalenge
g-abhi
s-haan kyun kuch problem hain
g-nahin toh main tayyar hoke aati hun
in the washroom
g-sam bhi na kaisa gift laaya ab ise kaise pehankar baahar jao sab ajeeb se dekhenge i hate it waise bhi ise pehanne ke alawa koi option nahin hain
she wears and comes out she was looking mindblowing for him but she was feeling uncomfortable
they go to restaurant where sam has arranged a beautiful suprise for her dinner near beech with violons everything was too romantic.
G-yeh sab kab kiya
s-aaj subah isiliye room se gaayab tha
g-pehle bata sakte the na maine tumhein galat samja
s-tum aaj kal mujhe galat hi samaj rahi
g-sorry sam
s-ab phir se rona maine yeh sab tumhare chehre pe sweet smile ke liye par lagta hain meri saari mehnat par paani pher gaya
g-sorry phir nahin roongi promise
he asks for a dance they dance for sometime lost in each other
ladai is good for health it makes a relation more stronger

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago

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Yeh baat mayur ache se samajte hain isiliye 24 hours ladte hain
nupur catching mayanks face
n-mujhe puraana waapas chahiye
m-kya dailogues maarti ho tumhein dailogue writer banna chahiye main tumhare liye khud ko kyun badlun jab tumne mujhe chodne ka perfect plan banaliya hain aur irritate karoonga kya karlogi pati ko chod kar kisi aur se pyar karti hain uske saath nayi life ke baare main sapne dekh rahi hain yeh cheap nahin hain main jab wohi sabke saamne kehta hun toh aapka image damage ho raha hain
n-tik hain tumhein jo karna hain karo mujhe bhi jo karna hain karoongi main iski balai ke liye keh rahi thi aur mere sar pe chad raha hain maine bewajah ek saal rehne ke baare main socha tha par tumhare saath do din rehna bhi namumkin hain mom ke aate hi main chali jaongi
m-jab jaana hi hain toh mom ke aane tak dad ke jaane tak bolke time kyun waste kar rahi ho tumhein jaana hain toh abhi jao main bhi tumhari jaise chaalak kargosh ko bare nahin kar sakta
n-main bhi tumhein ek aur pal bare nahin karoongi get lost
she packs her bags he was feeling sad he didnt feel that small word will effect so much she was smiling inside God knows whats her stupid plan suddenly she stops packing and sits there
m-ab aise kyun baiti ho
n-mujhe nahin jaana
m-in happiness sach main
n-itna excite hone ki zaroorat nahin hain main tumhare liye nahin mom ke darr se rukhi hun
m-sirf ghar jaane ke liye itna darr rahi ho tum jo plan bana rahi ho woh isse bhi bhayanak hain tab kya karogi
n-adhi mujhe bachalega
m-uska naam mere saamne matlo yehi hum dono keliye acha hain
n-kyun nahin loon he is my love
m-tumne usse pyar kyun kiya
n-kyunki woh mujhse pyar karta hain
m-main bhi toh karta hun na
n-tum main aur uske pyar main bahut faraq hain he is very understanding agar woh tumhari jagah hota toh iswaqt mom ke paas bhejne main meri help karta aur toh aur sabse lad kar mujhe mere pyar se milata
m-main adhi nahin hun naahi uski tarah banunga agar tum mujhse shaadi nahin karti toh woh alag baat thi par ab jab tum meri ho meri hi rahogi tumhare life main kisiko kabhi aane nahin dunga aur ek baat tumhein tumhare mom ke paas normally bhi jaane nahin dunga tum yehi rahogi mere paas taaki main tum par nazar rakhoon mujhe tum par zara bhi barosa nahin hain
saying he leaves to washroom she gives naughty smile
in the court mayank goes to shashi
shashi-tum yehaan kaise
m-mujhe aapse kuch poochna hain
shashi-nupur ke baare main
m-aapko kaise pata
shashi-mujhe meri beti ke baare main ache se pata hain
m-dad nupur ne yeh shaadi jabardasti ki woh kisi aur ko pasand karti hain
shashi-yeh sach hain ki yeh shaadi jabardasti hui par nupur kisi aur se kabhi pyar nahin kar sakti nupur todhi ziddi ladki hain woh apni dil ki baat kabhi nahin kehti humse yeh expect karti hain ki hum uske dil ki baat bina kahe hi samaj jaaye isiliye darta hun is ladki ka kya hoga main aur uski mom toh use samjenge par koi aur use kyun samjega itna pyar aaj ke zamaane main kaun karega jo woh chahti hain woh namumkin hain humne yeh baat bahut baar samjaaya par yeh ladki aapko bhi pareshan kar rahi hain
m-aisa kuch nahin hain dad main bas aise hi pooch raha tha sab teek hain
adhi comes there
a-sir woh aapse kaam tha
m-dad aap jaiye main aase baad main baat karoonga ghar ki baaton ke liye baahar waalo(looking at adhi)ko wait karwaana sahi nahin hain
shashi-acha beta jaane se pehle ek baat kahoonga nupur jaisi bhi hain par woh har rishtey ka hum sabse jyada maanti hain woh kabhi galat kaam nahin karegi
he leaves increasing mayus confusion
m-kuch samaj nahin aaraha yeh ladki chahti kya hain
just then nupur runs to him crying
m-kya hua tum ro kyun rahi ho
n-mayank woh
the person whom nupur slapped few days before saw nupur alone in the cellar and was misbehaving her with great difficulty she escaped and came to mayu
m-nupur relax main hun na tumhare paas tumhein kuch nahin hoga
he goes to that person and beats him badly loosing his senses
nupur was with shashi hugging him and crying mayu forcibly takes nupur from there he was frustated with her behaviour
n-mujhe kahaan leke jaa rahe ho
m-muh kola toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga
his raised voice makes her cry they reach their room
m-tum khud ko samajti kya ho agar mujhse pyar nahin karti toh sabko chodke mere paas kyun aayi kyun mera itna khayal rakhti ho jab sabne kal mera mazak udaaya toh tumhein gussa kyun aaraha tha chup kyun ho nupur your silence is killing me
she had tears in her eyes which makes him feel bad
m-i am sorry mujhe is situation main aise baat nahin karni thi
she falls on bed in tears
shobha calls nupur
shobha-tu tik toh hain meri bachi dad ne bataaya ki court main kya hua
n-mom mujhe aapko pakad ke rone ka mann kar raha hain
shobha-rona band kar tu akeli nahin hain mayank hain na tere paas main kal subah tujhse milne aaongi ab raat bbahut ho gayi hain rona band karke soja
n-miss you mom
mayu hates himself for his stupid behaviour he knows after this she will never love him
precap
n- i love you
a-atlast i made it

part 14

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

very nice update..

good one...😊

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Sujata

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

very nice update

sajan update was so sweet ... very cute

mayur update was very colorful.

nupur behavior was really confusing ... she loves him...bt cnt tell him... :S

precap sounds more confusing :S

nupur say ILU to adi???? :S ... how it could be possible?? :S

continue soon.

ps: u forget to pm me :(

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parul_bansal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

loved the update...

do cont soon

may god bless u

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kirti123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

nice part😊

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#219

tht is so nice update plzz mayur ko together karo aur sajan ko kabhi separate mat karna pretty plzzz

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TheLeo_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

confusion confusion...

nupur ke dimag me akhir chal kya raha hai...
by the way nice update...
continue soon...

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