MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updt
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys heres my next update it will a shocking suprise thodi romantic and only on mayur however sajan ka update baad main specially likhungi
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 14
Mayank goes to bring dinner for nupur as she didnt have her dinner but by the time he returns she sleeps he feels guilty for his behaviour he sleeps without having dinner unaware of the suprise he is gonna get in few hours in the midnight he hears word
i then feels lips on his forehead
then love and lips on his nose
last you and soft peck on his lips
he opened his eyes and found her in front of him he almost recieved a heart attack
n-aise kya dekh rahe ho
m-kuch nahin
n-monkey
m-nupur atleast neend main pareshan karna band karo
n-neend main ise propose kar rahi hun ise neend ki padi hain sadu kahika
she takes glass and pours water on him.he gets up in irritation at same time realising everything was happening in real
m-tumne mujhe propose kiya
n-nahin sharukh ko propose kiya idiot tumhein propose nahin karoongi toh aur kise karoongi
m-adhi ko
she bursts out laughing
n-mayank mujhe nahin pata tha tum itne bade budhu ho maine tumhein kahaan aur tumne maan liya samaj sakti hun jooth bolne main main expert hun
m-nupur please ek toh main shocked hun tum apne stupid baaton se aur confuse mat karo
n-acha batati hun maine adhi ke baare main jut tumhein jalaane ke liye kahaan tha main tumhein test kar rahi thi aur is baar bhi hamesha ki tarah tumhein 100 percent mila
m-maine tumhein apna ego baaju main rakhkar pure dil se i love you kahaan aur tum mere i love you ko test kar rahi thi
n-isiliye toh test karna pada agar main tumhein jat se haan kehti toh tum mujhe din main taarein dikhate te tum yeh sochte ki mere paas tumhare alawa aur koi option nahin hain isiliye tum jo karo bare karoongi
m-par aise raat ke baara baje koi propose karta hain kya
n-woh actually aaj mera birday hain tum toh mujhe wish nahin karoge naahi koi gift doge toh socha tumhein hi apna gift banalo my best gift in my lifetime mera paagal pati
pinching his cheeks and hugs him
m-gift tumhein hi nahin mujhe bhi mila hain my lifetime gift my life
her cell rings it was adhi
m-nupur cut the phone
n-kyun cut karoon
m-kyunki maine kahaan hain if you love me cut the phone
n-tumhein nahin lagta kuch jyada ho gaya 10 minute bhi nahin hue propose karke shuru ho gaye if you love cut the phone
she places one hand on his mouth catches his hand tightly with other one both were very close feeling each other breath
a-many happy returns of the day atlast i made it i won the challenge
n-abhi 12:30 bajrahe hain asusual you are late better luck next time
a-acha haar gaya yeh batao kaise celebrate kar rahi ho
n-mujhe mayank ne aaj sabse special gift diya hain raat ke baara baje mujhe wish kiya
a-joot
n-yakeen karo ya na karo tumhari marzi main tumse kal baat karoongi bye
she cuts the phone
n-aise kya dekh rahi ho
m-tumne use joot kyun kahaan ki maine tumhein sabse pehle wish kiya
n-tum kitne budu ho mujhe pata hain puri duniya ko batane ki zaroorat nahin hain maine use college main ek baar challenge kiya isiliye every year he tries to call at 12
m-nupur tumse kuch poocho
n-kaho kya poochna hain
m-i want to make you mine forever taaki apne andar tumhein khone ka jo darr hain woh bagadoon
she smiles giving her acceptance
he lifts her in arms makes her lie on bed
he removes hair on her face kisses on her forehead she holds him tight and closes her eyes then on her eyes she was bit shivering
m-you are fine
n-thoda ajeeb lag raha hain
m-sorry main bahut jaldi advance hogaya
he tries to move away but she was still hugging
n-this is firstime isiliye ajeeb lag raha hain tumhein main rok nahin rahi hun
he smiles and kisses her lips
he didnt sleep whole night he was busy staring her she hug him tight and slept resting head over him he was moving fingers in her hairs kissig her hand which he hold in his hands tight whole night the proposal was a bit shock to him he was feeling everything like a dream
when she opened her eyes he was busy staring at her she closed her eyes and snuggled in his arms more
n-tum raat bar nahin soye kya
m-tumne mazak toh nahin kiya na
next moment she pinches his hand
n-tumhein sudarna impossible hain
m-par kal raat to tum mujhse naaraz thi na bina khaye so gayi
n-raat ko jo hua use yaad na dilao yehi tumhare liye acha hain ek taraf main ro rahi thi aur tumhein khud ki padi hain kabhi kabhi toh lagta hain tumhara brain main kuch problem hain isiliye hamesha mujhe irritate karte ho
m-actually woh main anjaane main tumhein bachpan se pyar karta hun wohi pyar gussa banke saamne aata hain jab bhi tumhein khone ka darr lagta hain mera gussa bad jaata hain mera dimaag kaam karna band karta hain nupur tum nahin jaanti main tumhare liye kitna paagal hun ab bhi tumhein aisa hamesha pakad ke rehne ka mann kar raha hain
n-toh rokha kisne main tumhein chod kar kahin nahi jaane waali par philhaal ke liye chodo main fresh hokar aati hun he makes puppy face she kisses his cheek and leaves to washroom
her cell rings
n-mayu zara dekho kaun hain
m-mom ka phone hain
n-toh lift karke baat karo warna darr jayengi
m-hello mom
shobha-kaise ho beta
M-main teek hun aap kaise hain shobha-main teek hun main bas nupur se milne ke baare main soch rahi thi tum dono ghar pe hi honge na M-mom aap takleef kyun lete hain main hi nupur ko lekar aapke paas aata hun Shobha-par tum ko bhi takleef hogi M-koi problem nahin hain main use lekar aaonga she comes out after he cuts the phone
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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N-kya kahaan mom ne
m-mom keh rahi thi kal raat tum bahut pareshan thi toh socha tumse milne yehaan aajaye par maine mana kardiya
n-kyun
m-kyunki ab tum normal ho aur hum dono lunch pe baahar jaa rahe hain
n-great idea tum jao lunch pe aur aate waqt mujhe mom ke yehaan se pick kar lena
m-nupur i am serious
n-i am also serious baahar jaane ka plan kiska hain tumhara na toh tum hi jao
m-tum mere saath nahin aaogi
n-nahin
he makes sad face
m-tik hain dono tumhare mom ke paas chalte hain
n-yeh tik hain
she gets ready and they go to her house
mayu suprises her with a small cake cutting program he planned with shashi and shobha
.mayurs togetherness makes shobha and shashi relieved
they spend whole day with her parents.
M-dad yeh sab kya hain
shashi-woh dono ko teddybears bahut pasand hain toh dono ki khushi ke liye every birthday compulsory ek teddy bear dete hain usika collection hain
m-agar undono ko yeh itna pasand hain toh yeh sab wohi rahenge toh acha hain na aapne kitne pyar se diye honge
shashi-par beta yeh sab ajeeb lagega
m-nahin dad main sabko apne saath lejaata hun
shashi-tumhari marzi
in the night after dinner mayur return home
nupur was getting fresh mayu arranges all teddys in special room
when he returns she wore a pink night gown drying her hair he hugs her from back kisses her hair
n-tumne mujhe kyun pakda
m-mera suprise kaise tha
n-kaunsa suprise
m-tumhare parents ke saath time spend karne ka
n-use suprise nahin kehte maine zid kiya tum mujhe lekar gaye
m-main tumhein sata raha tha par maine already mom ke saath tumhare birday celebrate karne ka plan banaya
n-cover mat karo
m-nupur sach main
n-mujhe tumpar barosa
m-tum acha chodo ab atleast dinner pe baahar chalo
n-kitna kaate ho abhi toh khake aaye ho
m-main abhi ki baat nahin kal ki baat kar raha tha kyun na kal dono baahar chale
n-baahar kyun
m-taaki dono akele main time spend karein
n-mujhe nahin pata tha hum dono ke alawa is ghar main koi aur rehta hain
m-nupur mera woh matlab nahin tha main romantic dinner ki baat kar raha tha
n-romantic dinner public main isse bada joke aaj tak nahin suna
m-nupur please be serious
n-main bhi serious hun romantic dinner kise kehte hain main bataongi
m-kab
n-thoda wait karo abhi toh khake aaye ab baatein bahut ho gayi chalo sojaate hain
he lifts her in arms and makes her lie on bed she rests head over him he removes hair on her face and kisses her forehead hugging her closer
next day evening she leaves without saying to him he searches for her and calls her
m-kahaan ho tum
n-ghar pe
m-akeli kyun gayi
n-tabiyat kharab thi isliye
m-main aaraha hun aane ke baad dono hospital chalenge
n-ok
he reaches home and knocks the door she sees him from balcony she doesnt open for almost 20 minutes he was full worried atlast she opens leaving him shocked
she was wearing pink short gown backless looking mindblowing
n-andar aane ka irada hain ya baahar hi rahoge
he enters she locks the door he was busy staring
n-mujhe aane ke baad ghurna andar jaake fresh ho jao
he goes inside and finds a red shirt on bed kept ready for him he gets ready he comes out and finds dining room filled with candles lights are off and music was being played in background he was searching for her she hugs him from back
he brings her front
n-shall we dance
they were dancing on promantic violon music for time whole time he was kissing her
n-dinner karein
they were having dinner
n-romantic dinner private main karte hain public main nahin aise dresses main sirf tumhare saamne pehan sakti hun sabke saamne
m-thanks
n-thanks main tumhari wife hun aise thanks kahoge toh acha nahin lagega
m-i love you
n-sounds better
they have dinner together and after that he takes her in his arms they have a romantic night
precap-
adhi-nupur tumhare saath hain toh sirf tumhare dad ke reputation ki wajah se otherwise koi bhi ladki tumse kabhi pyar nahin karegi
he feels broken
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
first part was very cute
aweosme update dear
waiting for 2nd part
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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE...
I AM SO HAPPY
FINALLY NUPUR CONFESSES HER LOVE TO HIM...


THAT WAS VERY VERY NICE UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.

finally mayur together :D

love d way nupur proposed him ... n also lied to adi :D

she truely loves him.

waiting for next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very lovely part..di

amazing... was very cute confession..
so cute...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part😊

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti
Andar se kitni tez hai

Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai (2)

Woh dekhne mein kaisi seedhi-saadi lagti
Hai bolti ki woh toh kuch nahi samajhti
Andar se kitni tez hai

Kabhi ajeeb si, kabhi haseen lagti
Kabhi kisi kitaab ka hai scene lagti
Philosophy ka craze hai
Kehti hai yeh ik phase hai (2)

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Posted: 13 years ago
VERY NICE FF.

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