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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

many gc fans r doing it dear not only u i think most of the shows trp is just bcz of gc fan following 😆

😳yup GC fan😍😍😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


basically and that I was too lazy to move to pick up the remote lol😆😆😆

ohh dear so we have these thing in common too😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

ohh dear so we have these thing in common too😉

main after GHSP tv dekhti hi nahi😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

main after GHSP tv dekhti hi nahi😆

me too dear here i am talking about being lazy dear😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
payal pehlay main aur sis bohat lartay thay remote pe but now she's happy 😆mujh se jaan choti 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

payal pehlay main aur sis bohat lartay thay remote pe but now she's happy 😆mujh se jaan choti 😆

same here dear i too have to fight a lot too watch geet but now everyone at home r happy as i am not their too trouble them at 9:30 for it 😆



ok gys me going now will see u all tomorrow bye cya gn sd tc 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 5

Geet crawls backward to the bed, as Maan takes out his sherwani throwing it somewhere in the room...he threateningly walks toward her looking at her from top to bottom...she gets off the bed and holds a lamp in front of him. Maan laughs out loud...

"Wow Geet..do you think a lamp will protect you?"

Geet: No I don't think but I will not let you touch me...I hate you and don't think I am weak...

Maan (sits on the chair looking at her with amused expressions) You know Geet..I never seen anyone like you before...glad I have chosen the best for me like everything you see in this room and house

Geet; I am not a toy mister...

Maan: That is where you are wrong...EVERYONE in this house is mere puppets who will do whatever I command. Do you want me to give you a demonstration?

Geet: I have seen what you can do but I will NOT be one of them. (She slowly walks toward the door area...Maan just watched her from his chair...her back stands behind the door...one hand holding the lamp while the other hand tried to find the door knob...she turns her face sideways to look for the doorknob...)

Maan: I think what you are looking for is at the top...(she looks at the top...she wondered how she was going to open it..) let me help you...(he gets up from his chair...)

Geet: Don't move...

Maan: you know what I am done playing games...(he gets up and threateningly walks over to her..he grabs the lamp and throws it on the floor...he presses his whole body against her back until there was no room for air between them...she looks at her scared..) What happened now?

She tried pushing him but he held her hands above her head...he bends his head to kiss her neck while she struggled...his hands let go of her hand slowly moving down to her waist picking her up and slowly walking back toward the bed...she opens her eyes realizing what he is doing..she starts moving her legs back and fourth punching his back but Maan kept on walking back. He lies on the bed with Geet on top of him while he kissed her lips biting in between when she didn't respond back.

She opens her mouth a little as soon as she felt some pain on her bottom lip..he uses this opportunity to invade her mouth...she puts her palms against his chest to bring herself up but Maan pushes her down...he roles over so that she was pinned underneath him...he stops kissing her and looks at her with a victory

"Remember the slap you gave me the first time we met?"

How can she forget the slap that day? Becuase of him she was humiliated in front of the whole town. She wasn't able to show her face to anyone for couple of days. She was scared to go outside thinking everyone will laugh at her all because of him.

She looks at Maan and shakes her head yes...Maan laughs the way he laughed ran a chill down her spine. It was more of a threatening laugh, laugh that evil people usually laugh when they achieve something...he stops laughing and looks at her with an anger.

Geet stood up with tears..she slaps Maan on the face before running away leaving Maan and everyone shocked. She was walking home from the temple when a car splattered mud all over her dress, ruining her dress that her mom had given her for her birthday. She was glad when the car stopped wanting to give the driver her piece of mind. She was expecting a sorry but was more angered when someone got out of the car.

Geet couldn't help but stare at him. He had big brown eyes that could make anyone go under his spell, his shirt sleeves enhanced the arm muscles he has. She wondered how his chest must look like. She shakes her head removing any thoughts about this stranger in front of him...all she cared about was him admitting his mistake but she was wrong.

She ran all the way room crying while locking the door. Maan went home breaking everything in anger...

"How dare she slap me...a king? She will PAY heavy price for this...she dared slap me..." He sees a servant looking at him...he walks up to him.."you think its funny seeing me like this? Do you like seeing me like this?"

"No sir...I just came to see if you need anything..."

SHUT UP...(the servant flinches in fear...) LEAVE NOW!!! (The servant quickly runs away without saying anything..Maan sits on his chair...) "A freaking poor girl slapped me...she dared slap me...she WON'T get away with this..." He closes his eyes thinking about her face...her big eyes...those lips...he opens his eyes and smirks...making a phone call...

"That day I had decided I will meet you again to give you the proper answer for my slap..." He holds her hand, however times she tried to protest and places it on his cheek..."right here you had slapped me..."

Geet: You married me for revenge?

Maan: If that is what you want to call it

Geet: Then it can't be for love...a person like you can never love anyone like your younger brother of respect anyone like your grandmother

Maan (looks at her...) love? What is that? I wasn't taught to love..I was taught to rule..rule over anyone, get whatever I desired no matter what...I don't look at the petty things like love or respect...I am the king...(she tried to push him he looks at her with dark eyes) right now I want you...(he slowly touches her face...she moves her face to get away from his touch...he kisses her neck while his hands shamelessly roams all over her body..Geet suppresses her cries as he touched her all over the area which she had reserved for her future husband not a monster.) Its okay you don't have to respond back to me...overtime you will do that as well...

He smirks at her..she looks at him with anger and punches him on his face. Maan touches his bloody lip with his thumb...blood...Geet pushes him away, sitting on the bed trying to find something she can use to protect herself..Maan looks at the blood drop on his thumb...and then looks at her with anger...

Geet gets off the bed running straight to the door...Maan turns off the light...she looks around in darkness for him..she couldn't see anything..she felt his presence very close to her...she moves to the side to get away from him but she knew there was no escape...she sees a slight light at the end of the room which she assumed to to be the bathroom...

"Maan...am sorrryy..." She says in fear as she moves backwards not knowing where she is going..she collides with a sofa..she sits on the edge of the sofa looking around the dark...

"Maan ji..." (She looks at the area where the noise came from but she couldn't find him anywhere)

"Maaan ji am sorry..." (She gets up from the couch slowly moving backwards toward the light...her back collides with another wall..she touches the wall with the palm to feel it but quickly stops in her tracks when she felt his arm going around her bare waist...he lights a flame from his lighter bringing it in front of Geet's face..she looks at the burning flame with fear..)

"Don't worry I won't burn you...enjoy this last bit of light for the night.." (he blows on the lighter...he picks Geet up with one arm...)

"Please leave me...am sorry...I am not ready..."

He throws her on the bed..she heard some noises..she couldn't see anything...she tried moving slowly without making any noises but her bangles and her payal gave it away...she felt him holding her arms in his hands following him some material...her hands were now bounded...she tried to rollover but he held her in place..she could feel him sitting in between her legs...she tried kicking her legs to no vain...

He removes her blouse.."NO...leave me..." he removes her skirt and slowly touches her legs...she stops moving when she felt his hand slowly going up...he lies on top of her...his face close to hers..he fans her face slowly...

"How will you stop me now?" (he touches her arm moving upwards until he held her hands...he parts her legs with his legs...he slowly enters her..she gasps in pain and shakes her head...) "Stop moving..."

"Get off..I hate you..."

He enters her completely with a force making her scream in pain...she tried to hold on to something but he held on to her hands tightly as he moved back and fourth...after few minutes Geet stopped struggling unable to move anymore due to exhaustion..she laid there as Maan made love to her but she wasn't willing to give up..she was going to fight until she would win...

Precap: lets dance

Guys I just want to clear the air...the pervious note was not intended for those that do take their time out to comment and for those who are busy with their personal lives...it was for those 400+ ppl that don't comment/like at all...

I have said it before if you do not read my current on going fan fics then please delete me from your pm list..I DO NOT WANT TO CREATE A NEW PM LIST😳😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
thanx yaar for giving awesome update
love it to the core
but felling sad for geet
i dont know wat will happnd in future
waiting
Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haaa KAMINA MANHOOS ULLU KA PHATA MAAN😍😍🤣
simi muahhh awesome update yar🤗🤗
Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

ohh dear so we have these thing in common too😉


haha awesome!!!
yay and i thght i was the only lazy one hahhaa
are you a foodie as well?

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