AshNi OS- Mr. & Mrs. Ashutosh...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Hey Renu, Eagerly waiting for the next few parts. Itna wait mat karwao yaar. 😆

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prianka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

are bas bhi karo yaar aur kitna intejar karwao ge...

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Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

loved the writing... seriously we should start a campaign to kick off cv and get the wonderful writers on forum on... inbtween yanks lizzy or mish andnow u we would have top notch stuff... looking 4ward for more form u

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RoDee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

all three parts are very well written 👏
completely ☺️ and 🤣

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shashistanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Renu…felt reading a HM chapter from amorous novel. You feathered my thoughts.

😳 am all blushing, flying soo high with ASHNi was reluctant to drop down reading the end.

Liked Ranji' teasing. Dr Nidhi's slight temperature was it cause of the exhaustion or thoughts of that night with Dr A?

Nidhi sleeping ; hmm I could only imagine Nidhi blushing all red but still sensually teasing Dr A with those sensual, flirty eyes with a playful gesture

Renu come soon with the next part.

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shamil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

renu when I saw ur name as the TM, I KNEW I had to read this one and u surpassed my expectations girl

dadibuaaa

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kritash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Ashu opens the main door….n sees Dadibua….who has come to meet Nidhi before their departure……n freezes…..she sees Nidhi's previous day's salwar kameez on Ashu's shoulders, n before she can say anything, they both hear Nidhi's voice from the bedroom…."Ashutosh, , please, mujhe mere kapde dijiye na…..main kab se apne kapdon ke liye wait kar rahi hoon …Ashutosh…." 🤣 🤣

N Dadibua looks at Ashu……..🤣

Ultimate,

you hit sixer at exact point, liked the way dadibua was playing with ashu's emotions.

poor baby desperate to hug, kiss and _ _ _. but his luck once again embarrassed in front of dadi bua, having nidhi's cloth around his neck .

maaza aa gaya.

really think you should continue.

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Bishal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

What a Idea!Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -renu-

did u guys like it ???? 😉

did u guys like it..

@blue..

like it??

OMG loved it...it was sooo romantic renu jii... aaj ko aapke liye hamare dil ke cell cell se duwayen nikal rahi hai...bhagwan aapko lambi umar den...aur aapki imagination ki lau sada jalti rahe...

aapne itna achha likha ki mr aur mrs ashutosh ke saath hum bhi unke ghar me ghus liye...aur unke sapne me hum kho hii gaye samajhiye...

asha karte hain aap next part jaldi post karengi..

yeh hamari asha ka