AshNi OS- Mr. & Mrs. Ashutosh...:)

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Renu

@-renu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

well it will b better for AshNi ..that instead of DB .. i get on that flight in that ticket.. 🤣

atleast they will b able to do something.. PRODUCTIVE ☺️ 🤣

well...ahem ahem...how much PRODUCTION r u planning for Ashni...on their HM, Tanu ???? 😳 🤣

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Renu

@-renu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ashblore
awesome writing renu
ashutosh was so romantic and desperate for a kiss omg
I could not help but keep imagining mb and kk throughout reading it
eagerly waiting for honeymoon part

Ashu's desperation was almost driving me insane, 😍 while writing this, ashblore (sorry I dont know your name 😕 )

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Renu

@-renu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: wizardofoz
cool cool Fan fic renu😊. i am too shy to comment but can visualize all the scenes and can think of many many more. 😳

but please comment on atleast a couple of scenes na...😳

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prianka

@ppluvkuch

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Grt post Renu...😊

It left me blushing and reading it over and over again😳😳😳😳😳

you just spoke our heart. we all want Ashu to be like this... 😊

But don't u think the way Nidhi is, it is a bit odd to find her so calm and shy at the wedding night????

u said... when Ashu returned to bedroom after dadi bua left... nidhi had fallen asleep...

I think the way our Dr. Nidhi is... in order to give her some REST. ashu will actually have to make her sleep first... by whatever means...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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anushka

@anushka2112

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Awsome. ...butterflies in my stomach. After reading this and wanna see it on screen
Thanks

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kavya

@Kavya.S

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

it was wonderful renu...
omg Dr.ashu so romantic😳
well written...i loved it

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SriB

@SriB

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesome ,wondeful,superb.It really was atease .each and every line was great.

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Lizzie

@LizzieBennet

Viewbie

+ 33

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -renu-

tic toc tic toc...we r waiting for u to write, Lizzie...😃

Workin' on it, babe!! But u gotta finish Part 4 first or we'll all just dieee!!!!🤢🤢😛

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Pearlrachel

@Pearlrachel

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

loved it u r very creative pls continue

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Renu

@-renu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch
Grt post Renu...😊
It left me blushing and reading it over and over again😳

you just spoke our heart. we all want Ashu to be like this... 😊

But don't u think the way Nidhi is, it is a bit odd to find her so calm and shy at the wedding night????

u said... when Ashu returned to bedroom after dadi bua left... nidhi had fallen asleep...

I think the way our Dr. Nidhi is... in order to give her some REST. ashu will actually have to make her sleep first... by whatever means...😳

u r right...i did think of this...😳...but i thought it was too much for any man to control yaa...😳

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