4S-Arnav ji's Birthday *completed* - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for your response. Will be updating soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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MORE MORE PM ME PLEASE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
good one... but little short update..
glad tht arnav saw her wound... ang go khushi dont talk to him:-))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Thanks for your response guys here is the next part...

Khushi: Zaroori nahi hai aap ka jab mood ho mera bhi maan kare aapse baat karne ke liye. (it is not important that when you feel the need to talk to me even I am in that mood.) I don't want to talk to you right now…and she walks to nani.

Arnav was speechless…and angry.

Meanwhile anjali and payel prepares to serve dinner to all of them...everyone was chit chatting but khushi was udaas (sad) and arnav continuously keeping an eye on khushi...after everyone had dinner the proceed towards their respective rooms...khushi and payel left behind to arrange the dinner table while JP clear up the plates and left overs...

Khushi was a little sad as ASR didnt offer her a single piece of cake while he was offering to order family members...

On the other hand ASR was sitting with his laptop as usual with his office work which was pending...but he just could concentrate as he thought about khushi's burnt hand and how he dragged her while holding the same hand...he could feel the pain...he closed his eye and said...I am sorry khushi...I really am...and just walked out to the pool side...

Khushi enters the room and changes...she saw arnav standing outside near the pool so she didnt go there and decided to stay in the room...while she was just arranging her stuffs suddenly ASR's phone rings...she tries to ignore it as she knows that if she disturbs him she will not get a very good reaction from him. But as it was quite late so she thought it can be an emergency and anjali di might call and she is in her 9th month of pregnancy...so she goes and picks up the phone...it was aman who had called to tell him that the business meeting is cancelled which was suppose to happen tomorrow.

While talking to aman khushi's eye was caught in the laptop...where arnav unconsciously wrote that I AM REALLY SORRY...disconnecting the phone she looks at arnav who was outside the room...arnav feeling something looks inside the room and finds khushi looking at him...

Pal jaise tham gaya dono ke beech mein…aur kuch der tak khamoshi…ek dusre ki ankhoon mein ghulte huye arnav aur khushi (the time stopped at that moment…lost in each others eyes)…

Arnav coming to his sense walks inside the room…khushi quickly prepares herself to sleep outside the room which she has been doing for past 5 months now…wrapped around her shawal, grabs her pillow and walk past arnav…

Arnav holds her hand to stop her but again he ends up holding the wrong hand…the hand which she has burnt…

Khushi: aaah!

Arnav: What the hell tumne dressing kyu nahi ki? (What did not you dress your wound?). Why can't you just take care of yourself?

Khushi: she takes of her hand…

Arnav: Mujhe dekhne do khushi (let me see khushi)

Khushi: Nahi chahiye aap ki humdardi (I don't need your sympathy)

Arnav: Khushi…looking directly in her eyes…please let me see.

Arnav brings the first aid box and dresses her wound…while thinking of the bangle scene how he dressed her hand the same why few months back…

He blows on her wound with his warn breadth…khushi closes her eyes…lost in her thought…arnav looks at her…her simplicity…her flawless innocent beauty…

Arnav: Khushi…poolside meye sona zaruri hai kya? (is it necessary for you to sleep outside?)

Khushi: Why? this particular decision was yours and I am just doing what you have asked me to do…then why are you asking me this question?

Arnav: keeping his index on her lips…shhh looking in her eyes…mujhe birthday gift nahi dogi? (will you not give me my birthday present?) 😍

Will update the next part soon…please do leave your comments…and likes…



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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awesome update loved it read all parts in one go please pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
love it plz continue soon and pm me😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77


Poor Khushi!

Update soon and pm me when u do.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
wonderful update👏
really nice,loved it completely
very well written ,felt really bad for khushi😭
do continue,waiting for ur next part,update soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
awesome go khushi show who is boss...lovely update continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
dear all,

thank you for liking my post so much...will be updating the os very soon...stay in touch.

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