4S-Arnav ji's Birthday *completed* - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
really lovely and waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
waiting for nxt part ...pm me for the nxt update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
thank you so much for reading my os. i will update the next part very soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Arnav sees khushi seeing the jalebis and gets all the more angry and hold khushi's hands and drags him down…Khushi's reaction was aaah! When he pulled her hands…arnav didn't even see her wound which she actually had due to getting burnt while making jalebis for her…she tries to take her hand out and arnav holding it harder and harder…

Finally he releases her hand after coming downstairs…

Arnav goes near the cake and everyone assembling near the table…khushi joins them standing bang opposite to ASR…

ASR trying his level best to just get off as quickly as possible he bends to blow the candles and before he blows he sees khushi through the candles…she looked so adorable and arnav paused to see her beauty…

Anjali: Choktey kya hua? (what happened chotet)

Arnav: coming back to his senses blows the candle…and takes the knife to cut the cake…

Anjali: Wait Chotey! khushi aap yahan aiye (khushi you please come beside him). Chotey cannot cut the cake without his better half or should I say his best half?

Khushi who was trying hard not to have tears in her eyes…suddenly a tini mini drop came down.

Anjali: come on hold his hand…chotey ab katiye (now you can continue)

Khushi holds arnav's hand and cuts the cake…still arnav didn't realize that her hand is burnt.

The drop now fell on arnav's hand and now he was shocked to see her burnt area…arnav quickly released his hand from hers…and looked at khushi's face with a sorry face…khushi just moved away from him. He then sees his palm where he could see some of khushi's burnt skin were struck. Arnav went totally mad and restless.

He tries to talk to her but somehow or the other she just ignores him…

Arnav: Khushi…Khushi…jab meye baat kar raha hu tumse (when I am trying to talk to you) you just cant ignore me.

Khushi: Zaroori nahi hai aap ka jab mood ho mera bhi maan kare aapse baat karne ke liye. (it is not important that when you feel the need to talk to me even I am in that mood.) I don't want to talk to you right now…and she walks to nani.

Arnav was speechless…and angry.

Next update will come soon…thanks for reading. Do leave your comments.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
good one - pls update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
It's very very nice plz continue love it and pm me plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
wah angry arnav...Lets see how he will regret this one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
wonderful update... now arnav has to make it up to khushi and i looking forward to that!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
I am loving this more and more . Excellent update ,pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
loveD it.. cant wait for the next :)

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