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I loved kricky and the update was rocking and loved it too much and thanks for the pm
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AMAZING YAAR I ESPECIALLY LOVED WHEN KRIA GETS JEALOUS AND REY MANAOFYING HER VERY CUTE UPDATE AND PLZ UPDATE SOON AND THNX FOR PM ME
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i lov kricky give more of dem dey rock too cute thnx for d pm
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luv d kricky prt n reys letter r so romantic 😍😍
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Part 19


Neha:i hear neha.Who call me??

Vicky:koi nahi khagu chalo hum dance karte hain..

Kriya laughs on seeing n viha becomes busy of der dance.Kriya was searching for rey but she cudnt find him anywhere.

Kriya*self talk*:ye rey kaha gaya..waise bhi time ka faida tho utana hee padega..

She was silently going to fire exit looking all around if she cud see rey.She enters d fire exit n closes d door..she cud see lights arranged.She was moving further looking at it n bumps into sumone while walking.It was none other than rey.She loses her balance n rey holds her in his arms.They stare at each other(oho..bg music).She stands on her feet after sumtym.

Rey*in mind*:baatcutter yahan kyun aayi..

Kriya*in mind*:isko mera plan kaise patha chala..

They look wondering at each other.

Rey:kriya tum yahaan kyun aayi..

Kriya*taking sumtym*:mein tumhe dhundthe aaya hun..tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho aur ye sab kya hain rey..

Rey understands dat he cudnt cover up anymore.He gets down d stairs n brings an arranged chocolate cake.

Rey:ye humare liye..

Kriya's face turns into a baby face.She was shocked but due to a different reason.

Rey:baatcutter kya hua..tum waise kyun hogayi??Cake pasand nahi aaya.

Kriya:cake bahut acchi hain par..

Rey:par??

Kriya gets down d stairs n brings a cover which had something in it.

Rey:ye kya hain..

Kriya:chocolate cake...

Rey:wat??

Kriya:mujhe kya patha ki tum bhi cake laogi..

Kriya's face was still like baby.Rey cudnt help laughing of d situation,he starts laughing n kriya joins him too.Rey comes near her n keeps his hands on her shoulder.

Rey:mere pas ek idea hain..

Kriya:kya..

Rey:ek cake humare liye aur ek poori gang ke liye..ok??

Kriya:ok..par ye tumhari liye..

She made him wear a diamond ring.He was so happy to see her happiness.He hugs her n kisses her on d forehead.She blushes.He gets d cake n dey blow d candles.Rey hands her d knife n holds her hand from behind.She was having butterflies in her stomach but she loved it.They feed each other n sit after a while.Kriya lies on his shoulders with his hand on her waist.

Rey:humari engagement tho hogaya..shaadi kab??

Kriya:ab hum pad rahi hain..shaadi ke baare mein sochna bhi mat...

Rey:mein wait nahi kar sakti baatcutter...

Kriya:tum mere liye wait mat kar..waise bhi mein tumko shaadi nahi karne wala hun..

Rey:dont worry baatcutter agar tum mujse shaadi nahi karogi tho mein tujhe bagakar shaadi karungi..

Kriya:lets see..i think ab hum jake party join karna hain.

Rey:hum nahi ja raha hain..

Kriya:we r going..

Rey:nahi..

Kriya:gng..

Rey:nahi..

She gets up n starts to run.Rey holds her hand n pins her to d wall.Her heartbeat gets faster.Getting closer to her..

Rey:ab bolo kaha javogi...

Kriya:rey..bahar..

Rey:bahar..

Kriya:ba...

Before she utters d word.Rey kisses her passiontely on d lips for a long tym.She tried to push him wen she cudnt totally breath but he holds her hand n comes closer to her.He holds her by d waist n was caressing her neck.Sparks were flying across her body.She holds rey's shirt n keeps her hand on his face.He closes his eyes to enjoy d moment.She brushes her hand thru his hair n kisses him on d lips lightly n goes off.Rey gives a silent smile n takes d extra cake.While he goes d whole gang was sitting including kriya.He gave a soft smile n sat next to her.

Vicky:rey dude..kahan gayi??

Rey:waise hee walk karne ke liye..

Sharon:rey wo cover kya hain??

Rey:Issme cake hain hum sab ke liye..

Vicky:wow cake..cut karthe hain rey..

Rey:ok as u wish...

Rey opens d box n lightens d candles...

Vicky:mera fav cake..chocolate cake..

Vicky cuts d cake n feeds 2 neha and also neha feeds him.Swaron feed each other.Kriya comes wid a piece of cake near rey.

Rey:mujhe nahi chahiye...hum tho already khaya baatcutter..

Kriya:mein khila raha hoon..nahi khaogi..(seducing wid her eyes)

Rey:tum ithni pyaar se khila rahi ho kyun nahi khavungi..

Kriya feeds him lil n puts on his face n runs.Rey runs behind kriya taking hold of a piece.He holds kriya n was applying by d tym kriya bends n he keeps d cake on swayam.Every1 was playing wid d cake throwing it on other's face.Now it was a chance of sharon she throws it on swayam..Swayam escapes n d piece falls on RDX sir's face.

Rdx(shouting):guys stop it..kya ho raha hain yaha..

Every1 stops it n stands erect on seeing rdx sir.

Rdx:tum sab ko kuch nahi kar sakte..divide hone par ya nahi phir bhi tum sab aise hee behave karte ho..U ALL R SUSPENDED 4 D CLASSES TMRW!!!

All:SUSPENDED!!!

Rdx:yes u all may leave nw...

Precap-Old memories..

Hope u liked it..i completed it in a bit hurry.






Edited by snigdha143 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh so romantic kash yeh sab serial me bhi hota,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bt i mst say u r amazing writer girl ,,,,,,,,luv ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
most favourite scene when vickey says ok bhabhiji loved it and move priyanka out such a bitch got the same dress as kria but how did she know?
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Posted: 14 years ago
amaizng and loved it and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update. thanks 4 d pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing...kriyaansh <3 <3 <3...dude u seriously are an amazing writer...

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