kriyaansh FF *Dill Mil Gaye*

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Kriya leaves for dehradun after footloose elims realizing dat she was nuthing widout rey n dance...
She goes to dehradun alone bcoz her mom doesnt get a transfer...

After sumdays...kriya who was havng a holiday searches for her childhood autograph book...while searching a pile of books fell down along with a diary n some photos...

Kriya cums 2 know d luv story of her mom n about her dad...n also gets 2 knw dat sharon was her sis...

She understands d pain her mom went thru by readng her diary...
she calls up her mom n says dat she wanted to come to mumbai n was missing her so much...


she thanks universeji..."mujhe pata tha ki tum mera sath dogi hamesha,par iss bhar mein mumbai sirf mera sapno keliya nahi balki maa ka lovstory success karne ke n mera story lyflong banane ke liye jaa rahu hun.."

Guys pls lemme know if u lyk d concept i will complete d ff on a cool note...

PLS add me if u want me to PM d next update

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achuAR thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really good
plz update soon
and pm me 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pm me plz when ever u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the concept is absolutely brilliant and please can you pm me when you update :D
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Part 1

Smriti comes to airport to receive her n she says she had talked to st.louis's principal n kriya could go n attend d classes on the same day...

Kriya goes to her lvly clg...she remembers her memories all gud n bad.Annonylingly she feels as if it her first day again d same environment wen she came 2 clg @ first...She walked aroung d clg wen she cums 2 fire exit a tear drops from her eye.But she firmly says,"maa mein tumhara promise nahi nahi thodnewali tabthak jab thak tum iss promise ko waapas lo"

While she moved further she cud hear a sng gng on...tujhe milke laga ai yeh...cumng from d rehearsal hall she knews it was rey.She goes near d door to c rey.He was dancing she fell in luv once more wid him but herself doesnt know.He luks back n kriya hides.He gets away from distraction n continues his dance.While kriya was busy watching rey,rey feels a strong wid passing over him indicating d presence of a person who was nearer to his heart.She was busy staring at him n doesnt notice a gal who was calling her.The gal who was calling got frustrated n pushes kriya backwards.
((Entry of d new character..wanted to give sum name so jus thought priyanka wud help))

Pri: kya dekh rahi ho ulu ki tarah??
Kriya:hello..mind ur language!!waise bhi tum kon ho mujhe puchne wali.
Pri:how sick u dnt kno me...im priyanka ..priyanka roy.
kriya:aise bol rahe ho ki jaisa tum priyanka chopra ho..
Priyanka:wats ur pro haan???mein iss clg ka a.g.s. hun...i mean rey ka assistant..
Kriya feels bad on hearing d words rey ka assistant she feels to move on but thinks it myt make her as if she is scared so..
Kriya:so wat.. i dnt care.mujhe aur koi kaam hai.
Priyanka:hey naam bathana bhi bhul gaya kya..wats ur name??
Kriya: kriya..kriya ghai.

Rey who was too busy until then suddenly but lightly hears d words kriya ghai.He was totally lost to hear d words n d voice.He cums near d door to check out,by d tym kriya leaves off.Priyanka was present der so rey asks her who was she talking to.She knews who was kriya n she says to rey dat she was sum bloody weakling.He gets irritated n goes off from here.

Precap:kriyaansh begins again..same luv,same passion,same intensity.




Edited by snigdha143 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update :D and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its awesum...luved it plzz pm me wen u updatw next i sent u a buddy request...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its amazing dear . Plz pm me the nxt time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey...nyc ff...wud luv 2 read it...plz pm me nxt tym u update...

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