MJHT FF Love and Hatred part 22 a,b,c updated pg 69 - Page 20

Created

Last reply

Replies

348

Views

69.3k

Users

43

Likes

1.5k

Frequent Posters

Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...
Mayank k liye..
perfectly.. suited song...

silli silli tapti raaton mein
jalton hoon mein barsaton mein
dooba dooba har pal yaadon mein
dil kya kare
apney mein hi khoya rehta hoon
kehna hai kuch kuch kehta hoon
pain ajab sa sehta hoon dil kya kare
ho... aankhon aankhon mein
ho... baaton baton mein
ho... le gaya koi
ho... de gaya koi
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

din bhar kuch miss karta hoon
jaane kaise khwaahish karta hoon
bheed mein tanha rehta hoon
dil kya kare
bhool gaya main din saal mahina
january mein bhi aaye pasina
aata hai aaraam kahin na dil kya kare
ho...aankhon aankhon mein
ho... baaton baton mein
ho... le gaya koi hooo
ho... de gaya koi
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

ho ..main jo baithoon toh baitha rahoon
der tak chal padoon toh mein chalta rahoon door tak
ho... chaayi bekaraari udd gaye totey
hanss deta hoon rotey rotey
memory mein koi jaagtey sotey
dil kya kare
ho... aankhon aankhon mein
ho... baaton baton mein hooo
ho... le gaya koi
ho... de gaya koi
salaam-e- ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

hoo...raaastey bhool jata hoon mein
kyon bhalla
bewajaah gungunaata hoon mein
kyon bhalla
nikloon mein phati jeans phenke
shirt ke na hosh button ke
bajjte hain sab sur dhadkan ke dil kya kare
ho... aankhon aankhon mein
ho... baaton baton mein
ho... le gaya koi
h... de gaya koi
salaam-e- ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq
ho... aankhon aankhon mein hooo
ho... baaton baton mein
ho... le gaya koi
h... de gaya koi
salaam-e-ishq...



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_bhoG5cmseU&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]
Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear
how ru??
i m fine.
sorry i couldn't read ur update as i was busy in my personal life...
thanx for ur concern.. u r so sweet...
btw i read ur update today a nd i loved all of them.
mayur were sweet as usual. though most of the time they were busy to fight with each other bt i really enjoyed their cute fight...
hey nps loves adi- oh no.. plz dont do this. maynk ki saath saath humara dil bhi toot jayega..:(
--unknown-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Hi friends thanks a lot for your comments especially meri pyari behna shaffyy ke liye pata nahin kyun daily comment kar rahi hain waise bhi maine precap main aap sab ko confuse kar diya ab aapka confusion kam nahin hoga par aur badega so please no gussa sorry guys main sajan ki part nahin likrahi from last two updates but mayur ki story ki twist solve karne ke liye mujhe majburan sajan ko ignore karna padega anyways i will try to write special part on sajan next time this one is also only on mayur hope mujhe chappal nahin milenge return main and faria i messaged you because nowadays i am unable to see your replies in any posts of everyone so i thought you are busy aap logi ko lagta hain mujhe sirf mere posts ki khabar hain main sabke ffs padti bhi hun saath hi saath aapke comments bhi mujhe yeh bhi pata hain ki meri pyari behna aaj kal daily har kisi ki ff padti bhi hain aur dus baar comment bhi karti hain aur is beech pata nahin kya padai kar rahi hain waise bhi ab mujhe hitler didi banne ka interest nahin hain isiliye use chod rahi hun
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
--unknown-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

Part 12


in the morning mayank opens his eyes and finds the most beautiful of his life his wife was just looking like a sleeping beauty.they reach court and were busy in their daily routine but all the time everywhere he was thinking about her his heart wanted to stay with her all time today he greeted everyone with a pleasant smile even his enemies this might be the effect of pleasant morning he had.in the evening
n-mayank chale mujhe ghar pe bahut kaam hain
m-mujhe zaroori kaam hain please khud jao na
n-nahin mujhe tumhare saath jaana hain
m-nupur tum bhi na kya bacho ki tarah zid kar rahi ho
n-main khud jaane ki aadat daal rahi thi tumne kahaan ki main jahan bhi jaongi tumhare saath jaongi aur ab mujhse nahin hoga ab rickshaw doondna tum mujhe chod kar waapas aajaana
m-tum bhi na kitna lazy ho
shashi-kya hua beta sab teek hain na
m-dad woh
he narrates the story
shashi-yeh ladki bhi na bahut ziddi hain isse kuch bhi kahaan aur nahin kiya toh aise hi zid karti hain gussa naak pe chada rehta hain main nupur ko apne saath ghar lejaonga tum wahaan se use pick karna
m-ok dad
n-not ok mom ne kahaan hain ghar waapas aane tak main maa ke paas nahin jaasakti agar unhein pata chala toh gussa karegi mujhe nahin aana aapke saath
shashi-kahaan tha na isse kuch bhi kehna paap hain aapko aapke ghar pe hi chod dunga chaliye
n-pucca promise
shashi-pucca promise chalo
he smiles looking at the innocence this girl always behaves likes a kid
after mayanks work he was leaving home he was thinking about her he decides to propose her today as noone were at home this is the best time to propose her as soon as he thinks about this it starts raining mayank nupur ko propose kar raha hain toh baarish toh aayegi na isse bada wonder kuch ho sakta hain kya he reaches home and searches for her she was on terrace blabbering to herself and taking clothes she was completely wet he cant hide anymore his feelings
m-nupur i love you
she turns towards him as she felt her ears were ringing
she goes to him asks him to pinch
m-kya
n-pinch karo
he pinches her
n-tumne sach main propose kiya aisa lag raha hain sapna hain
she was leaving he catches her wrist and stops
m-nupur aise kyun jaa rahi ho main jaanta hun hum dono ke beech yeh kuch ajeeb hain par seriously i love you maine bahut baar koshish ki in feelings ko dabaane ki par mujhse nahin hua maine tumhein aaj tak bahut sataaya uske liye dil se sorry tumhein jitna time chahe le sakti ho main wait karoonga kya hua nupur aise kya dekh rahi ho
she asks him to leave her hand with eyes he leaves her she was leaving
m-kuch toh kaho nupur aise chup rehne ka kya matlab hain
n-main adhi se pyar karti hun
m-tum mujhse kalke liye naaraaz ho isiliye mujhe tang karne ke liye keh rahi ho
n-mayank i am serious
m-kya serious tum ek shaadhi shuda ladki ho sharam nahin aati aise kehte hue
n-kis shaadhi ki baat kar rahe ho yeh shaadi humne majburi main ki hain ek saal baad divorce yehi soch kar shaadi ki hain na tumne
mohaan tab main budhu tha isiliye aise soch raha tha but know i understood what you are in my life i am sorry for all my deeds i will never ever hurt you again please dont say such words i will die
n-your feelings might have changed but mine are still the same i dont love you i promised adi that i will return to him very soon i cant break my promise sorry mayank
m-kya sorry tum meri ho aur meri hi rahogi tumhein mujhse koi dur nahin kar sakta especially woh adhi ka bacha
n-mayank tumne meri adhi ko kuch kahaana toh mujhse bura koi nahin hoga
m-mera adhi dubaara uska naam liya na toh i will kill you main marr jaonga toh bhi tumhein apne saath lejaonga par tumhein kisi aur ka hone nahin dunga
n-oh really ja tum zinda rahoge tabhi main adhi ke paas chali jaongi aur tum kuch nahin kar paoge just wait and watch
she leaves the place he falls on his knees and hides his face in palm he felt like he lost everything he was feeling helpless
she goes inside and gives a villianish funny smile to herself
n-mr mayank sharma yeh toh shuruvaat hain aage aage dekho hota hain kya itna tang karoongi ki tumhein tumhari naani yaad aayegi tumhein nahin pata nupur kis bala ka naam hain thanks adhi tumne anjaane main meri bahut badi help ki ab kuch bhi karke mayank ko adhi se dur rakhna hoga warna mere saare kiye karaaye pe paani pher jaayega

She was busy watching tv suddenly remembers that he is still out in rain
n- pichle do ganto se yeh baarish main hi hain aur main stupid ki tarah tv dekh rahi hun
she goes to terrace but doesnt find him
n- nupur tu bhi na mayank aur tumhare liye baarish main bheegna tu koi heroine woh koi hero aur yeh koi film nahin hain aisa sirf filmo main hota hain budhu par yeh hain kahaan
she turns and finds him on swing hiding hands in palms
she beats her head
n- tu bhi na jab dekho bina soche hi bolti hain agar isne sab sunliya toh aaj tera marna confirmed hain
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
--unknown-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
she goes to him and finds him in fainted due to high fever with great difficulty she brings him down and makes him lie on bed she calls doctor
N-yeh ladka bhi na main ise sata rahi thi aur ulta mujhe pareshaan hona pad raha hain kya zaroorat thi baarish main bheegne ki
whole night she doesnt sleep and takes care of him in the morning when he opens his eyes she feels relaxed
n-atlast utgaye janaab kya zaroorat thi baarish main bheegne ki mujhe nahin pata tha tum itne bade looser ho rona hum ladkiyon ka kaam hain tum ladko ka nahin rone se kuch milne waala nahin hain yeh typical devdas ke naatak phir se kiya na toh sar phod dungi aagaya hero pata nahin khud ko kya samajta hain raat bar meri neend uda di idiot ab aise kya dekh rahe ho agar aap fresh hojayange toh main aapke liye naashta laati hun
he was a bit confused with her reaction he silently goes and gets fresh
she brings breakfast and was feeding him
m-main kalonga tumhein meri fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hain
n-muh khola na toh gala dabadungi chup chap khana kao jab dekho gussa naak pe rehta hain ek kaam bhi soch ke nahin karte pata nahin kaisi musibat hain meri jagah koi aur hoti toh do din main bhag jaati idiot monkey
his eyes fill she takes care of him more than his mother but at same time she doesnt love him how can he stay without her imagination itself is horrible
n-ab aise kya dekh rahe ho
m-please dont leave me i will die without you
n-humein late horaha hain jaldi se chalo
she checks his fever
n-bhukaar toh nahin hain tumhein office jaane ki taakat hain kya agar nahin hain toh ghar pe rukho main half day leave lekar aajaongi actually full day leave leti thi par mujhe client se meeting hain
m-main bhi chaloonga main teek hun
n-tumhari marzi waise bhi saamne rahoge toh hi acha hain warna pata nahin phir kaunse naye naatak karoge tum bhi na bacho ki tarah behave kar rahe ho
in court also she kept eye on him that he takes medicines and proper food
in lunch she was feeding him with her hand all were smiling
n-kya zamaana hain agar wife husband ka care karein uska bhi galat matlab nikaalte hain humein dekhna band karke chup chap apna tiffin khao
m-nupur rehne do main khud kaaloonga
n-kaise kaoge jab tumhare haat ko chot hain rahi baat inki toh koi kya sochta hain isse mujhe koi faraq nahin padega mujhe jo sahi lagta hain main wohi karoongi
he was confused with her behaviour few days before she didnt eat her lunch becoz of them and today
he just want to understand her but she is confusing him with her strange behaviour
shashi smiles seeing his daughters care for his damad
two days later there was party mayur and adhi both come there
nupur was standing alone seeing that adhi goes near her
Both were chatting mayank was fuming in anger
his friend comes to him same girl who proposed him once
s-kya baat hain mayank akele khade ho tumhari wife kahaan hain
looking at adhi and nupur
s-oh adhi ke saath hain tumhare wife ka ex lover yaad hain farewell party main bhi baat karte karte aise hi propose kar daala take care phir se na propose kare warna tumhari wife exwife banjayegi waise dono ki jodi hain bahut sundar just made for each other
she smiles teasingly and leaves
mayank in anger drinks too much and goes to them
in drunken stage he pushes adhi
m- stay away from my wife otherwise i will kill you aur tum meri kya galti hain why are you doing this to me
n-mayank apna muh band karke chalo mere saath
she takes him home as soon as they reach there room he pushes her to wall
m-kyun kar rahi ho aise maine tumhare liye khud ko change kiya tumhari har baat sunta hun then why you hate me please mujhe chod ke mat jao tumhaara naarazgi kam karne ke liye kuch bhi karoonga please nupur
she makes him rest on bed he was murmering not to leave him she kisses his forehead to make him relax
in morning as soon as he wakes up
n-mayank tum kya samajte ho khudko kya zaroorat thi itna bada tamasha karne ki
m-tum kya kar rahi thi tum meri wife ho aur mujhe chod kar adhi ke saath khadi thi
n-adhi ke paas main nahin gayi thi woh khud mere paas aaya tha aur agar tumhein itni problem hain toh tumhein bhi hamaare saath rehna tha privacy tumne khud di hain mujhe adhi ke saath chod kar usdin toh bade bade dailogue maar rahe the yeh karoonga woh karoonga aaj pata chala kya karoge you are a big looser koi cheez tumhein chodkar tabhi jaati hain jab tumhein use sambhalna nahin aata gussa chod kar samajdari se kaam karo aise karne se kuch nahin milega mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahin thi budhu mujhe khud par taras aaraha hain i married a fool
she leaves from there in anger
he sits catches his head in pain
she brings lemon juice for him
n-naye naye aadat daloge toh sar dard hoga hi yeh piyo tum pehle toh aise nahin te phir ab mayank main tumhein aise dekhna nahin chahti tum aise karke kudki aur meri sabke samne mazak bana rahe ho yeh sab sahi nahi hain muje purana mayank waapas chahiye
precap-k2h2
Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
first of all di...
mein apni padhayi per pura dhayan de rahi hoon..
secondly..
i just loved the update..
you were so true on your words..

ye update padh k to mein aur bhi zayeda confuse ho gayi hoon...
😲




very well written di..
matlab ki nupur adhi se pyar nahi karti..
ya fir karti hain...
fod knows aapke dimaag mein kya chal raha mein to ab agle update k liye

desperate hooon...
Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update dear

fantastic


loved it so much
SujaLuvsMayur thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update

bt very confusing too

wht nupur wants now??? isnt she love mayank???

bt m happy that nupur doesnt love adhi ... its all her prnaks.

waiting for next update

continue soon

thanks for the pm.


--unknown-- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shafyyy

first of all di...mein apni padhayi per pura dhayan de rahi hoon..secondly..i just loved the update..you were so true on your words..ye update padh k to mein aur bhi zayeda confuse ho gayi hoon...very well written di..matlab ki nupur adhi se pyar nahi karti..ya fir karti hain...fod knows aapke dimaag mein kya chal raha mein to ab agle update k liyedesperate hooon...

di hamesha sahi kehti hain aapka ten se three already completed 7 to go lets see
dynamic_doll thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear!
so Nupur is not in love Adhi 😃
bechara Mayank
i hope Nupur ka prank jaldi finish ho
eagerly waiting for the next update
update the next part ASAP
nd thanx for the pm 😊

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050

9 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1012 page no 25 Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1012 page no 25

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

11 months ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

6 months ago

NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated) NehTaj SS ~ Written In The Stars (chapter 3 updated)

[NOCOPY] Cover credits to Shibani aka oh_nakhrewaali P R O L O G U E The whole house was decorated like a bride. The lights were shimmering,...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".