OS:What Happens On Friday And onwards

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ROMANTIC DIMAAG KI PAKAU KHICHDI ALERT!!!

Story here on(Mere khayali pulao, I am cooking lots of those these days and all of them based on ArHi situaations ahead.)

THERE IS A RABBA VE MOMENT TOWARDS THE END(GREEN TEXT) PEOPLE. HOPE U CAN IMAGINE IT.

From the SBS/SBB Segments onwards.

Khushi and Arnav get married again with the presence of the Raizadas and Jhas and NK.

ASR carries his bride over the threshold in keeping with the family tradition. And the Khushi is taken to the bedroom by Anjali onto her marital bed for SR.

Scene: Khushi and Anjali in the bed room.

Khushi is made to sit on the bed by Anjali. Kushi looks at Anjali expectantly with pleading eyes wishing to find a friend there.

o Khushi: Anjali Ji'

o Anjali: Humen lagta hai ab to aapko humen di kehkar hi bulana chahiye. Jaisa chhote karte hain. Aapko nahin lagta? Aur hum aapko khushi kehkar bulayenge. ' (Hesitating) 'mera matlb.. agar aapko koi aitraaz na ho to.

o Khushi: Nahin Anjali ji'(Anjali looks up with raised eyerows and a small hint of a smile, Khushi hesitates).. Mera matlab .. AnjaliDi. Hume koi aitraaz nahi hai. (Hesitates some more) Humein to khushi is baat ki hai ki kam se kam aap hume bula to rahi hain.

Anjali rearranging Khushi's lehenga nicely spreading it around her

o Anjali: Khushi ji, Jin haalaton men aapki aur chhote ki shaadi hui, usme man mutaaw to hona hi tha. Bahut saare dil toote. Aur shaayad sapne bhi. Hamara bh aur gharwaalon ka bhi. Humara dil to ye ab bhi manne ko tayaar nahin ki hamre chhote hamare saath aisa kar sakete hain. Aur hum to ye soch bhi nahin sakte the ki aap'. Khair, jo ho gaya use badla to nahin ja sakta, par sudhara zaroor ja sakta hai. Kuchh samay lagega. Nani ko, aur baaki ghar waalon ko '. Hum to ye keh rahe the ki aap ab hamare chhote ki patni hain aur hamari Bhabhi.

Anjali finshes rearranging Khushi's Lehenga and moves to set her dupatta.

o Anjali: Aapko pata hai Khushi ji'( looks up and smiles)'khushi, Chhote ke liye aap se behtar aur koi hai bhi nahin shaayad. Nani aur hum to yahi chaahte the ki chhote aap se shaadi Karen. Humen is shaadi se koi gila nahin. Bas ye sab jaise'.

o (Arnav comes knocking on the door)

o Arnav: Ye sab aur kitni der lagega di.

o (Khushi looks on embarrassed and annoyed while Anjali looks flabbergasted)

o Anjali: Chhote!! Ye tumhari Shaadi ki pehli raat hai. Aur hame maloom hai tum iss raat ki shuraat ke liye bechain ho(turns and winks at Khushi, ASR exasperated) par thoda sabra to karo. Sabra ka phal meetha hota hai(ASR rolls his eyes)

o ASR: Diii'

o Anjali: Waise bhi hamara yahan kaam khatam ho gaya hai.ham ja hi rahe hain.(Anjali gets to the door. Then Turns and looks pointedly at Khushi.) Khushi samay pe aur aapki devi Mayya pe bharosa rakho. (And she leaves)

Arnav turns to close the door. Khushi gets up to sit at the edge of the bed preparing/gathering her rearranged heavy lehnga and dupatta ready to get off the bed. Arnav turn and looks at first longingly at his beautiful beloved wife and then shuts out Arnav, comes inASR. He walks to the cupboard to change out of his cloths.

o Arnav: Ye dikhawa sirf gharwaalon ke liye tha. Hamara deal yaad hai na? 6 mahine. Fir na tum meri patni ho aur na main tumhara pati.(Khushi looks on sad faced, thoughtfully and still frustrated from struggling with her cloths) Tumhe shaayad lag raha hoga ki ab to gharwaalon ke saamne shaadi ho gayi. Ab ye rishta nahi toot sakta. Aisa sochna tumhari badkismati aur bahut badi galalti hogi. (Khushi yanks at her dupatta in frustration gathers her attire and..) Ye sochna ki tumne ek Amir'(brushes past Arnav, glaring ahead of herself and' as fate would have it.. her Dupatta ,thanks to the frayed yanked out embroiderie, tangles with Arnavs attire, pulling on Khushis earrings, also tangled in her dupatta and her hair)

o Arnav: ' What The'.(Looks at what got entangled again in his cuff links)

Then simultaneously'

o Arnav: ..ye'(tries to disentangle the offensive dupatta from his person ')

o Khushi: aaahhh (Sobs)

o ('and a muted painful sound. Arnav Looks up at khushi from behind her, the only hint of pain is her hunched up shoulders. She looks so delicate young and vulnerable'.)(Rabba ve')

o Arnav Walks up slowly to khushi holding the dupatta to take the weight off her. All the time looking at her(From behind) . Khushi has closed her eyes anticipating more pain from the ordeal, unaware of Arnavs move towards her. He gathers and lifts the Dupatta from around her and moves to the front to find Khushi with her eyes closed prepared for more pain to come. He Lifts his hand to touch her face, hesitates then moves to her head to unpin the dupatta.

o SHOCKED, Khushi opens her eyes and stumbles backwardson her lehenga and falls but for Arnavs quick reaction. He grabs her around the waist and they stare at each other . Khushi in surprised excitement with her heartbeat going DHUK DHUK DHUK DHUK. Arnav With desire and lots of restraint.

o ASR continues to take off her dupatta clip, still not taking his eyes off Khushi. Moves to her ear to help with the ring gets it off. The chain of her nose ring gets dislodged from her hair in the process and voila'.his cuffs get entangled with the chain of her nose ring. Khushi closes her eyes in pain and in anticipation of more escalated heartbeats. Arnav looks surprised for a moment. Then he slowly lets go of Khushi's waist and brings around his other had and carefully removes the nose ring off Khushi. As he slowly moves away still holding her gathered forgotten Dupatta dangling from his arms, it falls off Khushi. Khushi opens her eyes and looks surprised at the dupatta and then up at ASR. ASR surprised but unable to take his eyes off Khushi. Embarassed, Khushi turns away breathing heavily. ASR Looks away then walks a step towards Khushi to hand over her Dupatta and the rings. . Khushi quicly snatches it and covers herself and moves past him this time avoiding him, and going over to his work chair, sits down and begins removing her jewellery. ASR stares longingly for a bit and then'SNAP' Closes his eyes. Remembers why they are here in this situation. Cynicism replaces desire and he shrugs and moves back to his wardrobe.(End of Rabba Ve!!)

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*In the next post*

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2801127/os-moving-on-from-p-2-what-happens-on-friday

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very cute and sweet! Great job!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks guys for the comments!!! I am becoming so obsessed with IPKKND I had to do something about it and writing helps.
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That was awesome... well done!
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Cute.hope they show something similar in the show
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Originally posted by: Josupra

Cute.hope they show something similar in the show


Thanks for the lovely complement. I am building up to my own dreams. I am sure CVs have a plan too and lots of happy surprises and Rabba Ves too 😃 Just cant wait for the story to develope so keep making my own ☺️
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it was awsome.cvs must hear u so that we could get some nice moments.rabba ve(happy one😉)

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Cynicism replaces desire and he shrugs and moves back to his wardrobe-nice line😉

lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you everyone for the encouraging words. Appreciate it.
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ROMANTIC DIMAAG KI PAKAU KHICHDI ALERT!!!

Story here on(Mere khayali pulao, I am cooking lots of those these days and all of them based on ArHi situaations ahead.)

THERE IS A RABBA VE MOMENT TOWARDS THE END(GREEN TEXT) PEOPLE. HOPE U CAN IMAGINE IT.

From the SBS/SBB Segments onwards.

Khushi and Arnav get married again with the presence of the Raizadas and Jhas and NK.

ASR carries his bride over the threshold in keeping with the family tradition. And the Khushi is taken to the bedroom by Anjali onto her marital bed for SR.

Scene: Khushi and Anjali in the bed room.

Khushi is made to sit on the bed by Anjali. Kushi looks at Anjali expectantly with pleading eyes wishing to find a friend there.

o Khushi: Anjali Ji'

o Anjali: Humen lagta hai ab to aapko humen di kehkar hi bulana chahiye. Jaisa chhote karte hain. Aapko nahin lagta? Aur hum aapko khushi kehkar bulayenge. ' (Hesitating) 'mera matlb.. agar aapko koi aitraaz na ho to.

o Khushi: Nahin Anjali ji'(Anjali looks up with raised eyerows and a small hint of a smile, Khushi hesitates).. Mera matlab .. AnjaliDi. Hume koi aitraaz nahi hai. (Hesitates some more) Humein to khushi is baat ki hai ki kam se kam aap hume bula to rahi hain.

Anjali rearranging Khushi's lehenga nicely spreading it around her

o Anjali: Khushi ji, Jin haalaton men aapki aur chhote ki shaadi hui, usme man mutaaw to hona hi tha. Bahut saare dil toote. Aur shaayad sapne bhi. Hamara bh aur gharwaalon ka bhi. Humara dil to ye ab bhi manne ko tayaar nahin ki hamre chhote hamare saath aisa kar sakete hain. Aur hum to ye soch bhi nahin sakte the ki aap'. Khair, jo ho gaya use badla to nahin ja sakta, par sudhara zaroor ja sakta hai. Kuchh samay lagega. Nani ko, aur baaki ghar waalon ko '. Hum to ye keh rahe the ki aap ab hamare chhote ki patni hain aur hamari Bhabhi.

Anjali finshes rearranging Khushi's Lehenga and moves to set her dupatta.

o Anjali: Aapko pata hai Khushi ji'( looks up and smiles)'khushi, Chhote ke liye aap se behtar aur koi hai bhi nahin shaayad. Nani aur hum to yahi chaahte the ki chhote aap se shaadi Karen. Humen is shaadi se koi gila nahin. Bas ye sab jaise'.

o (Arnav comes knocking on the door)

o Arnav: Ye sab aur kitni der lagega di.

o (Khushi looks on embarrassed and annoyed while Anjali looks flabbergasted)

o Anjali: Chhote!! Ye tumhari Shaadi ki pehli raat hai. Aur hame maloom hai tum iss raat ki shuraat ke liye bechain ho(turns and winks at Khushi, ASR exasperated) par thoda sabra to karo. Sabra ka phal meetha hota hai(ASR rolls his eyes)

o ASR: Diii'

o Anjali: Waise bhi hamara yahan kaam khatam ho gaya hai.ham ja hi rahe hain.(Anjali gets to the door. Then Turns and looks pointedly at Khushi.) Khushi samay pe aur aapki devi Mayya pe bharosa rakho. (And she leaves)

Arnav turns to close the door. Khushi gets up to sit at the edge of the bed preparing/gathering her rearranged heavy lehnga and dupatta ready to get off the bed. Arnav turn and looks at first longingly at his beautiful beloved wife and then shuts out Arnav, comes inASR. He walks to the cupboard to change out of his cloths.

o Arnav: Ye dikhawa sirf gharwaalon ke liye tha. Hamara deal yaad hai na? 6 mahine. Fir na tum meri patni ho aur na main tumhara pati.(Khushi looks on sad faced, thoughtfully and still frustrated from struggling with her cloths) Tumhe shaayad lag raha hoga ki ab to gharwaalon ke saamne shaadi ho gayi. Ab ye rishta nahi toot sakta. Aisa sochna tumhari badkismati aur bahut badi galalti hogi. (Khushi yanks at her dupatta in frustration gathers her attire and..) Ye sochna ki tumne ek Amir'(brushes past Arnav, glaring ahead of herself and' as fate would have it.. her Dupatta ,thanks to the frayed yanked out embroiderie, tangles with Arnavs attire, pulling on Khushis earrings, also tangled in her dupatta and her hair)

o Arnav: ' What The'.(Looks at what got entangled again in his cuff links)

Then simultaneously'

o Arnav: ..ye'(tries to disentangle the offensive dupatta from his person ')

o Khushi: aaahhh (Sobs)

o ('and a muted painful sound. Arnav Looks up at khushi from behind her, the only hint of pain is her hunched up shoulders. She looks so delicate young and vulnerable'.)(Rabba ve')

o Arnav Walks up slowly to khushi holding the dupatta to take the weight off her. All the time looking at her(From behind) . Khushi has closed her eyes anticipating more pain from the ordeal, unaware of Arnavs move towards her. He gathers and lifts the Dupatta from around her and moves to the front to find Khushi with her eyes closed prepared for more pain to come. He Lifts his hand to touch her face, hesitates then moves to her head to unpin the dupatta.

o SHOCKED, Khushi opens her eyes and stumbles backwardson her lehenga and falls but for Arnavs quick reaction. He grabs her around the waist and they stare at each other . Khushi in surprised excitement with her heartbeat going DHUK DHUK DHUK DHUK. Arnav With desire and lots of restraint.

o ASR continues to take off her dupatta clip, still not taking his eyes off Khushi. Moves to her ear to help with the ring gets it off. The chain of her nose ring gets dislodged from her hair in the process and voila'.his cuffs get entangled with the chain of her nose ring. Khushi closes her eyes in pain and in anticipation of more escalated heartbeats. Arnav looks surprised for a moment. Then he slowly lets go of Khushi's waist and brings around his other had and carefully removes the nose ring off Khushi. As he slowly moves away still holding her gathered forgotten Dupatta dangling from his arms, it falls off Khushi. Khushi opens her eyes and looks surprised at the dupatta and then up at ASR. ASR surprised but unable to take his eyes off Khushi. Embarassed, Khushi turns away breathing heavily. ASR Looks away then walks a step towards Khushi to hand over her Dupatta and the rings. . Khushi quicly snatches it and covers herself and moves past him this time avoiding him, and going over to his work chair, sits down and begins removing her jewellery. ASR stares longingly for a bit and then'SNAP' Closes his eyes. Remembers why they are here in this situation. Cynicism replaces desire and he shrugs and moves back to his wardrobe.(End of Rabba Ve!!)

I wish to you this on screen😳

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