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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SIYAHI

👏👍🏼 aur bhi milega??????


yes am typing
lets see

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n beautiful updates...

bike ride with maan...OMG...amazing experience...kash hum hote...he he he...bechare maa apne patni ko bol nehi sakte dat she is his wife n her life belongs to him only n vice versa...feel bad fr him...

bechari dadima...kahan phans gaye inn dono k veech mein...she will b definitely go mad...

really loved it...

sorry dear...whn i read both d prts were given...so i thought of reading both of dem den commenting...but i hit d like button of both...

thank u very much fr such lovely updates...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
]WARNING😡 read only if you have hit th e😡 like tab or 😡commented on the😡 part 62 😡& part 63😡
Part 64

she hated holidays as on such days she did not get a chance to hold him, she missed their closeness, since that day on every working day he dropped her to her college on the bike and she came back with the car as it was not practically possible for him to pick her up he being a busy man.

Today being Sunday she was lazing with her daughter in her room, she were flipping through the channels when suddenly she saw Sameera , she increased the volume and listened, they were telecasting a live marriage procession, there were many celebrities present there, it was Gautam, the photographer's marriage, the man was getting married to his childhood love, Tia.

Geet was confused because as far as she knew Sameera was in love with this guy, she thought about it and got an idea, she called Lata and asked her to look after Angel and then she herself rushed to the outhouse.

G: Maan, MAAN

He came out from the gym he was wearing his track pants and black vest

M: Geet is every ting ok (wiping his sweat by the towel)

She went speechless seeing him God he is looking so hot,

M: Geet what happened

She turned her back to him

G: no,.. no.. nothing

M (smirked seeing his effect on her): any problem

She composed herself and walked to the tv set and switched it on and set the channel he was seeing

G: look

M: am looking

G: Maan at the tv set

M: yes

G: Gautam is getting married

M: gautam who?

G: the photographer

M: I know

G: and you are not dong anything

M: why should that bother me

G: you know Di loves him

M: Sameera, yes

G: call Di

M: why

G: now, call her

M: to console her

G: Damn, Maan tell her to admit her love to him

M: I told her way back , but she is such a coward

G: she can tell him now

M: its late

G: no it is not

M: ok, I'll call herand ask her t o do what you are saying, but she will not agree

G: no you will pester her

M: but

G: Maan

M: ok, ok, let me first call her

He dialed her number

S: hi Maan (she was down)

M: hi Sam, how are you?

(Geet glares at him)

S: fine

M: so Gautam is getting married

S: yups

(G: ask)

M: did you tell your feeling to him

S: I told you I will not

Geet snatches the mobile and turns the speaker on

M: but you should

S: no use she is his all time friend

: frind not love

S: I don't know

Geet hits him by her elbow

M: ouch

S: Maan

M: I mean friendship is not love you must tell him

S: its late

Geet lost her patience and snatche dteh mobile from him

G: Di its not late

S: Geet

G: yes Di, better late then never

S: but Geet the procession is about to start everyone is here, the guests the media, everyone, it would be so embarrassing not only for me but for him for families

G: Di at the most he will not acknowledge your feelings,

S: and then he will also stop talking to me

G: Di, will you talk to him after his marriage, Di go and tell later you will regret for not talking

S: but

G: ok Di if you will not go now, I'll stop talking to you

S: ok I will go but

G: no buts just go and don't cut the call

S: ok

She went near him with a thudding heart

S: Geet I don't think it is a good idea

G: yes it is the best ides

S: ok

Gautam: Sam, where have you been, how I am looking

S: I want to talk to you

Gau: I am all ears

S: actually

Gau :um

G: say I love you

S: I love you

Gau: WHAT!

S: you heard me

Gau: Sam are you mad, you are telling this now when I am off to marry Tia

S: I told you Geet

Gau: Gautam

S: I am not talking to you, I told you Geet it will be insulting

G: no one noticed Di,

S: how do you know?

G: the function is live on tv

S: oh

Gau: Sam are you sure?

S: I am but am not forcing you, I just wanted you to know how I feel for you, BTW congrats for your marriage, now I shall leave

She walked briskly to the parking lot not waiting for him to answer

G: Di, where are you going

S: Geet please li want to be alone

G: ok as you wish

She sighed and looked at Maan and both sat down watching the wedding procession, suddenly they noticed Gautam giving his turban to the little boy and also gave him the garlands he were wearing, and went in the direction where Sam has gone, no one noticed it as all media people were busy taking photos of the celebrities present. They switched off the tv

G: now Maan wait for the good news

M: are you sure?

G: very much

On the other hand,

Sam was struggling with her car keys, the tears in her eyes blocked her vision, she heard footsteps and wipe dteh tears that were rolling endlessly, suddenly she felt a tug on her elbow and she was jerked around to hit someone, it was Gautam

S: I am sorry Gautam, I did not want to create a csne I swear I will go far away from here

Gau (puts his palm on her mouth): sh Sam don't you want to know the answer

S: I did not ask you any question

Gau: ok then let me ask, will you marry me Sameera Bakshi

S: what?

Gau: will you?

S: but, Tia

Gau: oh Sam, do you know how much I love you

S: you love me

Gau: yes, from the very first day I saw you

S: but you never even hinted me

Gau: as if you did, I was not able to tell you fearing your reaction

S: Gautam (crying)

He cupped her face and kissed her like mad

And the next headline was photographer ditches his childhood love for a model

(inspired from a movie: live in a METRO)


hope you liked it

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part 65 page 108/24thAUG2012

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome he told indirectly or u can say smartly that she is his wife but our naive geet didn't get it 😆i just want her to know it and then it would be fun knowing her reaction 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it maan teasing dadima wow dear awesome 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
kya baat hai di...u r on a rolll...😉

n we r loving it...😆

sam got her love...

but when will these love-birds say anything...😔

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi shruti...
kya treat di hai yaar...
ek sath teen teen update... wonderful job ...
done by our drama queen...
thanks dearie...
please be active like this only at fourm...
tum sab ho to maaneet missy nahi hotey...
varna to jeena mushkil ho raha hai...

loved all the three parts...
lovely bike ride...
loved maan's teasing dm...
dheery dheery maan is back in his old form...
nice family dinner...

part 64...
geet is really claver... ...
dono ko mila hi diya...
happy for sameera...

come back soon sweety...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG one more update
Awesome so sam and gum get marry
loved it
thanks shurti
Aaj toh update ki lottry nikal padi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
kahe ka inspired ghodi lekar thodei na bhaga🤣 thodi aur filmy banati hai waise is Gautam sexy and hot like Maan????😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
m happy sameera got her love...but wht abt maan n geet...whn will geet realise her feelings fr maan n acknowledge it...m dieing to see both of dem together...
awesome update...
really loved it...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...

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